Dungeons Virulent Void: The Darkness Welcomes You... ( Dungeon Idea )

Wellll just make stuff up lol

 

good job dark! you got a lot of people supporting you! and I was one of the first to know >:)))))

 

Don't worry Grox, I've shortened the huge wall of text into spoiler boxes. I'm still updating though!

 

Way too long
Just make the rewards not good

 

Well I am aware that not everyone likes my idea and that is okay, but what do you mean by "Just make the rewards not good"?

 

Just added all of the mob details/stats and I will eventually put the dialogue.

 

Take for example gigabyte
Takes 10 times fallen factory and is mind numbing
But it's in a lot of builds
So people have to get it
If the rewards here are t good
People won't have to grind the dungeon

 

already around 5 dungeons that will be coming soonTM or Should have been in the game a while ago,

this is a good suggestion but the odds of a dungeon suggestion being accepted in the first place is the same as winning the lottery

let-alone now, for the reason i said at the beginning,

Keep up the good work though, its nice and creative- also the xp reward is reallllly low compared to csst or fallen factory

 

Do you mind reading it now? No offence.

 

it's nice, i like it

 

The major issue is lack of a gimmick in the final boss fight. It's kind of just a glorified punching bag

 

I'll work more on the boss fight soon.

 

What kind of name is that? It needs to be simple, like "decrept sewers" or "sand-swept tomb" or "fallen factory" or something like that! Wynn dungeons have 2-3 words (I do not count "corrupted" for corrupted dungeons) - They are NOT the size of
Virulent Void: Chambers Of Blight
And what kind of name is that anyways?
A normal dungeon has a simple and straight-to-point name: Fallen factory= a malfunctioning factory, Sand-swept tomb = a tomb. Infested pit= an infested pit
What is the "virulent void" thing? Pepole cannot tell what it is from the name. (Specifically non-native speakers of english, like me) Make it simple and understandable!

Suggestions: 1. Cut down the name to "chambers of blight" or "virulent void". Perhaps "virulent chambers", "chambers of virulence"or "void of blight" Keep it simple
2: Make a new name like "Plagued chambers/void" (fits with the lore, yes i have read it)

Other than the name, 8 rooms is WAY too much. Make it like 5 or something. OR make the gimmic of the dungeon be that after doing a part, you will tp to another random part, like
Start chamber (counts as a phase)-3-7-1-boss. Most dungeons have 4-6 phases (Boss phase counted.) fallen factory has 7 phases and a boss with 3 phases (not as long as regular phases ) for like 8 PHASES! And pepole prefer not to do a 20-30 minute dungeon. Why do you think it is rarely used for levelling and pepole dread grinding the rewards? BECAUSE IT IS SO SLOW! A good csst (corrupted sand-swept tomb) party can get TONS of exp for 1 dungeon bomb and 1 exp bomb, while in Fallen factory they barely get any use out of them. Why do you think there are no FF parties and TONS of csst parties, even tho FF has better raw exp and rewards? TOO SLOW.

Sorry for hating so much. But i gave you honest feedback.

 

I actually really like this and hope it is added
Maybe lower the amount of rooms tho

 

Free bump lol

 

Don't reference csst for dungeon length. It was a mistake that it is that short, and it is getting fixed.

 

Does anyone want the dialogue to be added yet? I'm almost done making it.

 

Me <3

 

Aight.

 

I was paid to vote that I liked this idea. Jk, keep up the good work!