World The Rare Flower (level 10+ Quest)

Are the two NPCs names literally NPC1 and NPC2?
You need better names.
For instance, the mother's name could be Alexandra.
The son's name could be Jackson.
These are names I made up on the spot. You can do just as well as I, but probably even better (cuz 1-second thinking lol)
I think the quest is mediocre, considering it's for level 10 (I mean really, you guys - elemental exercise isn't really all that interesting either [although important]).
I think a better way to improve the quest would to make it be...less fetchy. For instance, if a mother has lost her son, perhaps you could track him - follow footsteps or something. IMO that would be a cool gimmick. Or maybe on the way, a cutscene is triggered - the son is being attacked by spiders, so you have to save him or something. He would give you the rare flower (or idk... something else?) and you would be on your way. I mean, it's still fetchy. Just less than before.
Or, what would a rare flower be used for? I mean, the Hermit in Canyon Condor keeps the Rare Rose for.. uh looking at it lol
But what if the rare flower could have some sort of... magical property (or something)? Or y'know... it could be a color-changing flower xD
I'll leave that up to you.

Ok, so from level 10-11 it takes about 1k xp. Elemental Exercise gives about 800 xp, so I don't have an issue about the xp. However, I think giving a player a dungeon key would be too much. In my experience, I got about 10 decrepit sewers keys just getting from level 1-10. So having one more..? Not really needed. You could receive a rare flower, which could be used to gain access to something (but not something in the later game - we already have enough quest items that last for 40+ levels [*cough* ToL *cough*] Maybe like... level 15? Or perhaps, since the flower itself is weird, it could be used in Potion Making [so an alteration]?).

Also..

MALTIC!!

 

This is a really well designed quest for a newer player but personally I think that it's to fetch-questy and if you actually helped the kid get the flower it could make the quests better

 

Is it, though? I literally find one every time I leave Ragni.

 

It is.

 

Um... If you re-read the post carefully you'll notice I said "I haven't chosen a name for her/him so for now we will call her/him NPC1/NPC2."

For now. That means if the quest was added into the game that the names wouldn't just be NPC1 NPC2, one of the staff would probably choose.

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Since, looking back after some constructive and some unconstructive feedback, I now see a lot of flaws with this, I'll probably just remake it in the future.

Is there a way to close threads?

 

Well before you post, you should make sure that you have all the parts of the quest you want to have done. You can edit it later (based on constructive criticism). Like seriously, I wouldn't post a quest suggestion without knowing who the NPCs are and what their names are. That kind of thing is important for a good suggestion - if you don't know what names you want (in this case) just put some random names in it so that people like me don't call you out for it.

btw only moderators can close threads. Moderators like @Moe_Ronickah

 

I know I'm jumping on a bandwagon, but it's just such a fetchy quest and there's already enough low-level quests.
I actually thought @Poiu429 's idea was pretty cool.

But what if you could go into the forest, save him, find the flower for them, and either bring it to NPC1 and get a more XP-Based reward,
or bring it to a shop in Maltic(Though something closer to Ragni would be better) and get a more Emerald based reward, much like Underice.

 

Easy everyone. Let's not be harsh with criticism and suggestions.