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New Quest!! The Final Challenge

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by Shkol2, Oct 20, 2016.

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  1. Shkol2

    Shkol2 Erevan Galanodel, 320-ish, Sorcerer/Warlock

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    Hey it's me Oskhol1!
    Today I'm going to make this suggestion for a brand new Lv. 100 quest.
    Let's get right into it immediately! :saltedhigh:

    In Quest Book:

    The Final Challenge
    Difficulty: Medium
    Level min: 100

    Talk to Acolyte Helmind in Ahmsord

    [1/9] Acolyte Helmind: Hey you, adventurer over there! Would you mind helping me with something?
    [2/9] Acolyte Helmind: You see, I've been living here in Ahmsord for as long as I remember. And in the years that I have been here I have heard rumors of a great power here.
    [3/9] Acolyte Helmind: It is said that the three Creators have their dwelling not far from Ahmsord.
    [4/9] Acolyte Helmind: Actually, I have been trying to find the location of the Creators' dwelling for very, very long now.
    [5/9] Acolyte Helmind: If my calculations are correct, the three Creators have made their home in the mountains, east from here.
    [6/9] Acolyte Helmind: There is an ice castle in those mountains and I would like you to inspect it for me, since I cannot travel there.
    [7/9] Acolyte Helmind: Be careful out there, don't go past the mountains whatever you do. There is said to be a void past the mountains and I do not want you to suffer because of me.
    [8/9] Acolyte Helmind: Take this, it was given to me by my mentor who taught me magic. But alas he is gone now. Lost in the Molten Heights I don't doubt.
    [9/9] Acolyte Helmind: I wish you the best of luck, hopefully you will also be able to persuade the Creators, if they are even there, to restore the Sky Islands to their origin. Once again, good luck.

    [Acolyte Helmind gives you an Unusual Ring.]

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    [Stage 1]

    Investigate the ice castle at 1664 -4684.

    [You get teleported into a frozen hall of ice and snow and quartz, facing towards a large wooden door.]

    [1/3] ???: Well, well. It seems like we have finally got a guest. Well, of course, somebody was bound to find out where we were hiding at some point.

    [Go on towards the door.]

    [Now there is a puzzle you must solve to get through the door.]

    [Go through the door]

    [2/3] ???: Tell me, was it that insolent sneaker Helmind who discovered our hideout? Yes, I know him. It was a mistake to create him. He was a mistake. Now let's test your capabilities. Dewch allan, milwyr o dynged! Gwledd ar enaid lladron hwn!

    [Fight the seven Fate Emissaries]
    Health: 73000
    Level: 101
    Weak: Air
    Def: Thunder
    Dam: Water
    Elemental Effects: Neutral: 820-1010| Water: 680-920
    Attacks: Heavy Charge
    A.I: Fighting
    Type: Invisible Zombie wearing white leather armour and holding a tier 2 Multi-Elemental spear.

    [3/3] ???: Mmhm... It seems like you have been trained well. I know what you have faced. Our toughest creations: The Corrupter of worlds, yes we created his fate, Bob's Reincarnation, he was meant to fall. And lastly. Qira. It was all planned, you know. We chose that she would decline with curing the Decay. But even after all of this, are you ready to face us? We'll see now!

    [You get teleported to a giant arena made of stone bricks and sponge (colour-shifting blocks).]

    [1/1]:Eminent Grand Mage Elrund: Fool! No one can defeat us! We are the CREATORS!!

    [Defeat Eminent Grand Mage Elrund.]
    Health: 490000
    Level: 190
    Weak: Thunder
    Def: Water, Earth, Air, Fire
    Elemental Effects: Neutral: 3040-4110
    Attacks: Heavy Teleport, Heavy Meteor
    A.I: Projectile Shooter
    Type: Sol Embassy elf holding a tier 3 Water wand.

    [1/1] Eminent Grand Mage Elrund: Noooo!!! This cannot be!!

    [Go through the black hole in the wall.]

    [You get teleported to a corridor made of nehterrack and other fire related blocks.]

    [1/2] ???: How could you!? This is not to my approval! You shall not get away with this!!

    [Fight the ten new Fate Emissaries.]

    [2/2] ???: Oh you made it!! Wow!! This is making me EXTREMELY salty!!

    [Enter the black hole in the wall.]

    [1/1] Eminent Grand Warrior Kansard: ELRUND WAS MY BROTHER IN CREATION!! NO LIVING CREATURE IN THIS WORLD SHALL ESCAPE MY WRATH FOR THIS DEED!!!

    [Defeat Eminent Grand Warrior Kansard.]
    Health: 540000
    Level: 200
    Weak: Water
    Def: Air, Earth, Fire, Thunder
    Elemental Effects: Neutral: 3500-4320
    Attacks: Heavy Charge
    A.I: Fighting
    Type: Sol Embassy elf and holding a tier 3 Fire spear.

    [1/1] Eminent Grand Warrior Kansard: AHWW REALLY!?! WHY WHY??!! ARGGHH!!!

    [You get teleported to a new corridor made of white blocks.]

    [1/2] ???: This is getting out of hand. No one is supposed to be able to defeat us! But you shall not reach me!

    [Kill the new twenty Fate Emissaries.]

    [2/2] ???: Really? How much does it take to kill you?

    [Enter the black hole in the wall.]

    [1/1] Eminent Grand Archer Togak: Face me, creator of this world!!

    [Defeat Eminent Grand Archer Togak.]
    Health: 670000
    Level: 250
    Weak: Fire
    Def: Air, Earth, Water, Thunder
    Elemental Effects: Neutral: 4200-5140
    Attacks: Heavy Arrow Storm, Smoke Bomb
    Drops a Creator Pendant.
    A.I: Shooting
    Type: Sol Embassy elf and holding a tier 3 Air bow.

    [1/1] Eminent Grand Archer Togak: Nooo!! This world shall crumble without us!! This is your fault!!

    [Enter the black hole in the wall.]

    [You get teleported back to the entrance of the ice castle.]

    [Return to Acolyte Helmind with the Creator Pendant.]

    [1/3] Acolyte Helmind: What? You actually made it?! I thought that I had sent you to your doom. Oh thank the Creators you are alive!
    [2/3] Acolyte Helmind: Wait, what is that in your hand? No! It can't be! You killed them?! You killed the creators?!
    [3/3] Acolyte Helmind: Well, I guess it was for the greater good. Here, take this reward. Maybe some day new creators will come.

    [Quest reward]
    5563920 Experience points
    5600 Emeralds

    That's it! Hope that you like this quest! Please tell me in the comments about feedback!
     
    Last edited: Oct 21, 2016
  2. Selvut283

    Selvut283 Circadian rhythm stuck on Tokyo time ♪ Music GM

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    They aren't so self-indulgent and narcissistic so as to make self-insert bosses. Plus, what happens if the level cap increases?
     
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  3. Shkol2

    Shkol2 Erevan Galanodel, 320-ish, Sorcerer/Warlock

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    Okay so what do you think I should put in as a boss?
     
  4. Theeef

    Theeef Owner of The Crossroads CHAMPION

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    The dialogue with the acolyte is not visible. I am on a phone, so if you are using a special font could you please change it?
     
  5. Ascended Kitten

    Ascended Kitten The Greatest

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    I'd recommend you to go for a smaller, less epic quest; while those are nice and can have a huge effect on the player due to their immense extent it's hard to create a good one. This one here lacks a lot of background story; it's basically just talk, walk, and fight a ton of bosses for a big reward. Without a prequel leading up to it such "final" quests don't really work. Aside of that, I'd recommend you to color the dialouges.
     
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  6. ron111701

    ron111701 proffa CHAMPION

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    Fix the grammar mistakes.
     
  7. Lexwomy

    Lexwomy Lexwomy HERO

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    Well, the quest isn't really viable if it conflicts with the official lore that hasn't been released yet, so better hold off on the "lore" part. Also, I don't think a "creator" of the world should say, AHWW GOSH. :)
     
  8. Morgan83

    Morgan83 Too lazy to change from Xmas picture

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  9. Hexorcism

    Hexorcism warrior class enjoyer CHAMPION

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    I don't think the content team is thinking about raising the level cap if they can't even properly fill the current one with content.
     
  10. Shkol2

    Shkol2 Erevan Galanodel, 320-ish, Sorcerer/Warlock

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    Why does this always happend?! EVERY SINGLE TIME I try to make something good on this page, EVERYONE hates it!!! :saltedangry:
     
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  11. ElegantDeath

    ElegantDeath Who needs a title anyways HERO

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    maybe you should do some research and make colorful suggestions to help people differentiate
    and not center it around staff
     
  12. Toasted Asian

    Toasted Asian Toasty VIP+

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    Hey look the quest NPC has a last name now
     
  13. Shiazzu

    Shiazzu Well-Known Adventurer

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    I like where you are going with this but in my opinion this quest is not needed since it is at the max level cap. If feels like an almost pointless quest right now since the xp reward would barely raise up your bar. I VERY USEFUL quest would be one that is in level 92,93,94,95,96 and 98 since these levels need some quests in them. If they had to be a massive wynncraft update and the level cap would be increased, then this quest would make sense.


    Apart from that I liked were you were going with this quest the only thing I didn't like is how the same it is to other quests. It's the classic "go fight three bosses and get there xit yadayada" if you know what I mean.


    Leave a like if you enjoyed the quest review and my fingers are hurting from doing this oh well.
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    We don't HATE it


    We just DONT AGREE WITH IT

    Do you know how many quests and suggestions have been rejected. Don't take all this in the wrong way. Just because we don't like your quest doesn't mean all of a sudden everyone hates you. Chill out.


    (( I made a few quests and they got a shitload of hate))
     
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