World The Reign Of Shadowkind

The Reign of Shadowkind
Level 80: HARD

Talk to Alork at x y z.

Alork: H-h-how did you get here?
Alork: This place is dominated by shadows!
Alork: Me? Oh well, I was the king of this land's friend...
Alork: He was killed and the shadows took over...
Alork: Now I am forced to work here as a 10th class leather worker.
Alork: I cannot leave this hut, so can I please see what it looks like outside?

[ you need to walk outside ]

Alork: It is dark and dreary? Well then...
Alork: It means that the Shadows have just walked by...
Alork: They must've been on patrol.
Alork: Go and see what they are doing here anyways...

[ go spy on the shadows ]

Shadow: Dhwkdb Dhwkdb shekels an KILL!

[ go report to Alork ]

Alork: Ah... I forgot they don't speak our language...
Alork: I have a friend but we were separated...
Allork: He was forced to work in the coal mines to the south. Go see him and he may understand...

[ explore and find Freet ]

Freet: Who are you?!?
Freet: You're not supposed to be here...
Freet: Wait... Repeat those words...
Freet: It isn't your language? Where did you get the Shadow phrase " Guard the only weapon" then?
Freet: Well if you don't want to answer, then leave.

[ go back to Alork ]

Alork: While you were away, I witnessed the death of a man who followed the Shadows to a hidden cave!
Alork: Welll? What does it mean then? Guard the only weapon? Well, I think I know what it means: It means that the Shadows have a weakness!
Alork: Great! I guess it wouldn't hurt to attain the weapon...

[ find the weapon at x y z ]

Alork: Hold on, that looks familiar!
Alork: Give it to me!
Alork: It is a potion!
Alork: I gave you the effect! What did it do?
Alork: Nothing? Well, if was the weapon, then you can take on the shadow King!
Alork: He lives in the mansion on the cliff!

[ Go kill the shadow King ]

[ report back to Alork ]

Alork: Can it be? His head?
Alork: With the Shadow King dead, we will be free!
Alork: But it will take time...

[Quest Complete]
Rewards:
2 LE
50000 xp

Mobs in the Coal Mines:

The mobs in the coal mines will be immune to earth and water. They will be most damaged by fire and thunder.

Name. Mob. Dam. HP. Spells

Falling. Item. 500. 10000. None
Coal

Shadow
Miner. Zombie 600. 12000. Bash


Mobs Guarding the Weapon:


These mobs guarding the weapon will be immune to fire and water. They will be most harmed by thunder.
Shadow
guard. Zombie. 1000. 50000. Heal: 10000

Shadow
Archer. Skeleton. 900. 30000. Heal: 9000

The Weapon. Item. 100. 1. Charge

Mobs In the Shadow King Mansion

These will be immune to thunder and hurt most by fire and water.
Ghostly
Shadow. Enderman. 700. 60000. Teleport

Shadow
Follower. Zombie. 860. 50000. Heal: 2500

The Boss

The boss will be immune to air and water, but most hurt by fire and thunder.


Shadow
King. Zombie. 1000- 300000. Heal: 20000,
2000. Bash,
Teleport,
Multi hit

 

It's an interesting concept however I feel that the quest all goes too fast. How would the man know what the potion did? He must have some extensive knowledge of the weapon if he knows what it does. The characters all also seem completely flacid. The just feel like wet noodles flopping around. They need flavor.

The dialogue has a few errors but those aren't too bad.

Back to the pacing. How do you know where the weapon is? If Alork can tell you exactly where to go, why the heck can't he leave? Why does he ask what it looks like outside?


Overall, decent quest, but it just doesn't feel complete. A quest should explain itself. Maybe Alork could have a device that allows him to see outside, seeing as he used to be the king. Besides, if he is enslaved, surely if you slipped his name to his friend he wouldn't be too hostile.

A poll for no would be awesome too.

Also, immunity to any type of damage just isn't okay.

 

Also adding on to that, perhaps some backstory on the shadows themselves would be nice. How did they get here? How long have they been here? Is it a alternate world? (Like the realm of light) This is a ok suggestion, lacks details

 

What the others said and more- Fixed mob stats, you're missing a ton. Proper quest text, like it is in game. More visually appealing. Backstory explanation.