Dungeons The End Of Wynn

Lore- Deep within the nether there was a beast of darkness but the 4 legendary heros { The Warrior with his brute strength, The Archer with her bow that always aims true, The Wizard ( Mages did not exist yet ) with his knowledge of all always shows the path, The Assassin the lady of deadliness and skill who will do anything for Wynn sealed the beast in the nether long ago now only told as a legend but now becomes true again.

Quest- THE END OF WYNN
Requirements- Beat all quests and dungeons ( Except Gavel related ones ) and a atleast 1 wizard/warrior/assassin/archer or vip version of the class/ more is allowed.
Reward 1 Stack of liquid emerald 12000 exp ( If Gavel come along by then )

Go meet Cambel Delare at " enter coords here "
Chapter I 1st Gate
CD - Hello would you like to re....
???- Well hello warrior. Long time no see.
CD - I... it can't be you...
???- Well it is Warrior.
CD - But we.... I thought.
???- You thought wrong!
CD - Adventure I must tell you a story.....( Will tell you the story again that is in lore ). As you may now know that voice you are hearing his The Nether Beast
Nether Beast- How nice. Telling you little friends about me. How sweet.
CD - As you may of already guess. I am The Warrior the fighter of strength. I was also married to Relis The Archer but she sadly passed away. Now you must defeat The Nether Beast. But there is a problem well actually 2. 1. You can't do this alone. 2. You need the heroes' Weapons. So I can help you on #2 but #1 is a problem for you. So go find a team of at least 1 of every class type ( Vip or non Vip version ) to do this and meet me at these coords ( enter coords here ) in The Nether. Also make sure they all have Bob's Weapon.

Quest Update- Rally and party up atleast one Wizard/Archer/Assassin/Warrior or vip version or more with a Bob's weapon and meet at the coords in the nether.
Note- Once you get to theses coords you will see a gate and when you talk to CD it will do a command to check if you have atleast one of each class types and if they have Bob's Weapons.


CD - Good now please enter.
Nether Beast- Yes be ready to die.

Details you are teleported into the dungeon.
Note- You can not leave unless you leave the party then you and everyone teleported to the entrance and have to start the quest again from there.

CD - You need to find the legendary weapons that we used to defeat the Nether Beast they are somewhere.

Quest Update - Find the weapons of legend.

Once you enter the tomb you see a memorial to the heros.

CD - There it is ( Begins talking in a unknown language ). Sorry I was praying to my friends now please take the weapons for your own use.

Quest Update- Appraoch the weapons
All of a sudden your weapon disappears and are replace with Charging hero weapons and no other weapons will do damage at all.

CD - So your the new Heroes of Wynn. Well news flash they will forget you one day. That's what happened to me and my allies. We were forgotten, hated and for what saving Wynn.
You shouldn't trust them once your mission is over they will do the same to you heroes.
Now listening huh? Well die then.
Nether Beast- Can I kill them master?
CD - No let the leeches of my fallen allies kill these fools.

Quest Update- Survive for 3 minutes.
Note- Atleast one of you must live to beat theis segment.
??? = Invincible
Leeche of the Archer
Health ???
Damage 50-70
Speed slow

Leeche of the Wizard
Health ???
Damage 50-70
Speed slow

Leeche of the Assassin
Health ???
Damage 50-70
Speed slow

After 1 minute is done.
CD - How that is impossible!
After 2 minutes is done.
CD - What are you?
After 3 minutes is done.
You will be teleported outside the dungeon.

CD - No.... no it.... how.... that is not possible. I am sorry friends I failed you. Now you know my secret. Return to me I will pay you if you stay silent about this but only still in your party.

Quest Update- Return to CD.

CD - And you bought it.

You are teleported to a familiar area.

Quest Update- Find out where you are.
When you enter the town.

Mobs start spawning. 3 Waves of 7.
Nether Hive-
Level- 75
Hp- 200
Attack 70-90
Speed- Slow
Spells- None

After you kill all mobs
Quest Update- Find the shaman. Hint- It was where the bank was.

Shaman - Hello heros.
Shaman - Let me do something for you.
Shaman - Look they just finished charging let me get that for you.

You are given the legend weapons.

The Assassin's Shears
Attack 700
Lv requirement - 75
Bonus stats wip
Rarity- HERO

The Warrior's Spear
Attack 400
Lv requirement - 75
Rarity- HERO

The Archer's Bow
Attack 400
Lv requirement - 75
Rarity- HERO

The Wizard's Wand
Attack 400
Lv requirement - 75
Rarity- HERO

You are then teleported back to the nether in an unknown area.

CD - Impossible Nether Beast KILL THEM!!!
NETHER BEAST - TIME TO DIE!!!

Quest Update- Defeat Nether Beast.

Nether Beast
Lv 100
Mob- Ender Dragon

This will be a WIP it is supposed to be a long quest also I would love to have some help on this. Also tell me if anything is op or underpowered this is my first quest idea so I may need help.
UPDATE- Made the dialogoue have more personality to it.

 

Sounds interesting...
But you probably shouldn't call it the "end of Wynn" considering the Wynn Providence is probably never going to get destroyed.
And....

WHY DID YOU THE MAGE A WIZARD?!

 

"Interesting" idea, although it really depends on your writing-skills
I agree with @Bionic_Mage_Pls, the title isn't really fitting ^_^

 

Ok thank but the title actually is a twist on this quest it will make sense later on trust me

 

(WHY DID YOU THE MAGE A WIZARD?!) ummm k

 

Sorry for the slight off-topic, but for a second, I thought this was another thread complaining that Wynncraft is dead.
You have some interesting ideas, btw.

 

This quest is far from balanced in many ways. I'll just leave that to others (because I'm bad at balancing) and skip to the dialogue.

The dialogue is a little... Flat. It seems as though you'll be talking to robots when you do this quest. Add some fitting personality to the characters, and also some punctuation to add a flow to the dialogue. Example (extracted from the text):

Maybe it could be changed to something along these lines:

Notice that the second example has more emotion and character into it. It seems more like you're talking to an actual human being (or humanoid in this case) compared to 'No not possible.'

While you do have a somewhat intriguing concept, the execution is not nearly as good as it could be.

 

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Thank I am not really good with diaglogue that much i will get to that as soon as possible

 

RIP in pepperoni definitions
It's province

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But otherwise, this is an okay suggestion, I guess. The mobs need a lot of work, though. I'm just gonna quote something from one of my quests to show you a complete format:

 

"Mages did not exist back then".
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FUCKING BULLSHIT

It is? I thought it was Providence because auto-correct capitalized it...

 

Most likely because Providence is the capital of Rhode Island.
Providence is a protected area by God or a spiritual being.

 

Ah, I thought it capped it because a province is an area

 

A stack of le... HOW ABOUT SOME BOSS STATS. WE HAD TO KILL A BOSS WITH 350 THOUSAND HEALTH AND YOU KNOW WHAT WE GOT???!!??! 8 le and some freaking xp, How hard are you going to need to make this boss. Also rarity Needs to be legendary. no new ones. AND we already have the best weapons in the game gotten from killing the second hardest boss in the game and most of the weapons Do more damage than the ones you get from the quest. And its op to get all 4 of them. And the names are boring. This requires Having other people/ being in a party. What if you don't have freaking friends. What then??!?!?! -1 support

 

This is an interesting suggestion. But I CAN NOT BE OKAY READING THIS WITH ALL THE GRAMMAR ERRORS IN HERE.
PLEASE MAKE IT STOP.

 

Poor @_sasha_ has no friends...

XD

 

I cri evry tim D:

 

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Love this idea, but like most people said, not 'The End of Wynn'

 

Balancing issues. Grammar issues that a grade 4 student could fix. Uninteresting names. Monotonous dialogue, Ungodly requirement of a party of 4 people with different classes at level 75. More powerful weapons available. Ideas that are far too general. Strange and disorderly plot line. Character development is kind of shit. But the idea is good. Also,