+redone+ Quest - The True Feeling Of Corruption

DISCLAIMER: Look, I know Fruma isn't out yet. This is just a quest idea FOR Fruma in the far future.

This is a quest idea i just thought of. I feel like it could be very cool.
This is my first quest suggestion so sorry if I miss anything. Enjoy.
Constructive Criticism is appreciated.
Thanks
-Zani_

(Fruma Quest, Even tho it isn't out yet.)

The True Feeling of Corruption

Lv. Min: (I don't know what levels Fruma are going to be based on, but probably one of the earlier quests)
Difficulty: Hard
Status: Not Started

Speak to Grandfather at
[Coords. As this is in Fruma, there's no map of what it looks like. Just probably a house, with a nearby cave]



Pre-Quest
[1/1]Grandfather:Hey, haven't seen ye' in quite an ol' while.
How've ye' been lad?
Quest:
[1/7 ]Grandfather: Wow! It's you! I can't believe its ye'! Its been quite an ol' while since we last saw eachother!
[2/7 ]Grandfather: Ye-ye don't remember yer' old grandpappy!?
You begin to remember who the man in front of you is.
[3/7 ]Grandfather: Bah I knew ye' couldn't forget me!
[4/ 7]Grandfather: Oh.. Ye' come to see yer parents?
A sad look begins to appear on his face
[5/7 ]Grandfather: I'm very sorry lad. But..
You feel a very cold and bitter chill down your spine
[6/ 7]Grandfather: They're gone lad.. We all went explorin' in the nearby cave and... They fell and I never saw 'em again.
You feel anger rushing through you.
[7/7 ]Grandfather: Calm down lad...
You get angry.. Very angry.
You straight up punch the man in the face. Your vision
then becomes dark.

-Blindness for 10 seconds-

You wake up, slowly remembering what happened.

[1/ 7]Grandfather: Sorry to knock ye' out lad. But you straight up attacked yer old gramps'.
[2/7 ]Grandfather: Look lad, I understand you're angry.. But they're not necessarily dead.
[3/7 ]Grandfather: They just fell. Far. Possibly they're still out there.
[4/7]Grandfather: Ye' know. I would've checked, but I'm so weak now that I'm older. And no one lives near here. Its practically an abandoned land.
[5/7 ]Grandfather: Look, if I were ye', I'd go searchin' in that cave.
[6/7 ]Grandfather: Its to the west of here. The walls are a purple and blueish color.
[7/7 ]Grandfather: Good luck. But I wouldn't keep my hopes at the highest levels.

Quest Book Description:
Go to the cave west of the house.



-Enter the cave-

Quest Book Description:
Explore the Cave

-Jump into a hole at the end of the cave-

*You fall for a very long time into a very dark, long hole.* (Yes that sounded wrong)

Death has claimed your soul

-You spawn in Death's Realm, at Death's desk.-

[1/13 ]Death: WELCOME BACK. I SEE YOU HAVE DIED YET AGAIN.
[2/13 ]Death: WHAT NUMBER IS THIS NOW? 402? 410? OH YES. 412.
[3/13 ]Death: PLEASE, TAKE A SEAT.
[4/13 ]Death: SO. WELCOME BACK. MAKE YOURSELF COMFORTABLE. THIS IS ONE OF THOSE OTHER TIMES I LET YOU REMEMBER YOURSELF HERE!
[5/13 ]Death: THIS WOULD NORMALLY BE LIKE ANY OTHER VISIT. MAKING YOU JUST SIMPLY FORGET. BUT I FEEL THAT YOU ARE IN NEED OF STRONG ASSISTANCE. THAT YOU ARE ENRAGED AND NEED SOMETHING DESPERATELY.
[6/13 ]Death: YEAH. I'M COOL LIKE THAT. I CAN SENSE THINGS!
[7/13]Death: ANYWAY, IT SEEMS LIKE YOU ARE LOOKING FOR YOUR PARENTS. I'M NOT USUALLY ONE TO BE SAPPY SAPPY ON PEOPLE, BUT I NEED TO TELL YOU SOMETHING.
[8/13]Death: YOU ARE ENRAGED. YOU ARE SO ENRAGED ABOUT YOUR PARENTS DEATH THAT YOU SEE EVERYTHING AS BAD. YOU JUST WANT YOUR PARENTS BACK, AND EVERYTHING WILL BE ALRIGHT. YOU HAVE NO OTHER CONCERNS IN LIFE.
[9/13]Death: AND A SIMPLE 'CALM DOWN' WON'T HELP. IT WILL MAKE IT WORSE. TO RELIEVE YOU OF THIS PAINFUL FEELING, I MUST LET YOU EXPERIENCE THE TRUE FEELING OF CORRUPTION. THE EMOTION THAT YOU ARE NEAR TO REACHING.
[10/13 ]Death: WHY YOU MAY ASK? TO SHOW YOU WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE CORRUPTED. TO MAKE YOURSELF NEVER WANT TO FEEL THAT FEELING IN YOUR LIFE AGAIN.
[11/13]Death: BAD PUNISHMENT. VERY GOOD CAUSE. DON'T YOU AGREE?
[12/13 ]Death: HAVE FUN!
[13/13 ]Death: OH, AND COME BACK AGAIN! I DO ENJOY YOUR VISITS!

-Your screen goes black for 7.5 seconds-
-you appear in a nether-like cave-

There is a large parkour course and the mobs listed below

Mob1:
Name: Hate
Agression: Hostile
Health: 9000
Desc. A floating jack-o-lantern head
Range: Ranged
Level: (Around whatever level this quest would be)
Defenses/Damages: Fire Damage

Mob2:
Name: Corruption
Agression: Hostile
Health: 11000
Desc. A grim-reaper-like skull with a black leather tunic on.
Range: Melee
Level: (Around whatever level this quest is)
Defenses/Damages: Air Damage

Mob3:
Name: Anger
Agression: Hostile
Health: 9000
Desc. A floating wither skull and a floating diamond sword
Range: Melee

-Do the parkour-
-The parkour is very long, with about 60 different jumps at a medium difficulty of parkour-

When you get to the top of the parkour, you enter a black room and get teleported.

You enter a room. In that room, there is a small room with a button in it overlooking a small village that is blocked by barriers. Your only option is to press the button.

-You press the button-

You release your full anger.

-The village explodes-

You must feel my pain... Suffer it with me... hehh.h..eheh.ehHEHEHh.h....

-Your screen goes black. You then appear in a large room with a boss infront of it.
(No, this isnt a randomly thrown in boss. this has meaning)

Boss:
Name: Your mind.
Agression: Hostile
Health: 142,000
Desc. A skull of that player's head (if possible) or a skull of a wither skeleton. Wearing all black leather armor.
Range: Melee
Attack: 900-5350 damage
Regen: 12,000 health every 30 seconds
Defenses: n/a
Damages: n/a

-Once you kill the boss, you get a gem called:
Gem of Forgiveness

-You get teleported back to Death's desk in the Death Realm-

[1/12]Death: WELCOME BACK.
[2/12]Death: I SEE YOU HAVE FELT THE TRUE FEELING OF CORRUPTION.
[3/12]Death: I ALSO SEE THAT YOU NOW DO REALIZE HOW TRULY TERRORIZING THAT FEELING IS. AND MAY ALSO UNDERSTAND MONSTERS A LITTLE BETTER NOW. AREN'T YOU DYING TO STOP FEELING THAT PAIN?
[4/12]Death: LET ME HAVE THAT GEM.
Death takes your gem and crafts it into a necklace. He then sets it on the desk in front of you.
[5/12]Death: HERE YOU GO. YOU WILL NOW BE ABLE TO FORGIVE THE FACT THAT YOUR PARENTS ARE GONE, AND UNDERSTAND HOW LIFE CAN END SOME MORE.
[6/12 ]Death: AND I WOULD LET YOU SEE THEM ONE LAST TIME, BUT FOR THEY HAVE GIVEN THEIR SOULS A REST, AND HAVE DECIDED TO STAY HERE. THEY GAVE ME THE PERMISSION TO THEIR SOULS, AND NOW ARE PART OF THIS REALM. THEY ARE ALWAYS WITH YOU. MENTALLY.
[7/12]Death: TAKE IT FROM ME, I'M DEATH!
[8/12]Death: ANYWAY. GET ALONG WITH YOUR LIFE. HAVE MANY MORE GREAT ADVENTURES.
[9/12]Death: I'LL SEE YOU AGAIN SOME OTHER TIME.
[10/12]Death: BELIEVE IT, YOU HUMANS DIE QUITE A LOT.
[11/12]Death: ENJOY LIFE, AS IT DOES NOT LAST FOREVER.
[12/12]Death: UNTIL NEXT TIME, GOODBYE.

-You spawn back next to the house at which you started the quest-

[Quest Completed: The True Feeling of Corruption]
[+800,000 Experience Points]
[+28,672 Emeralds] (7LE)
[+1 Necklace of Forgiveness]

Grandfather After Quest:

Your Grandfather smiles at you.

Unidentified Necklace
This Item's powers have been sealed.
Take it to an item identifier to
unlock its potential.
Info:
- Lv Range: 86-90
- Tier: Legendary

Necklace Stats (Rounded)
Necklace of Forgiveness
Health: +450
Water Defense: +35
Air Defense: +35
Thunder Defense: +35
Earth Defense: +35
Fire Defense: +35

V Quest Req: The True Feeling of Corruption
V Lv. Min: 88
V Intelligence Min: 30

+12 Intelligence
+15% XP Bonus
+12% Loot Bonus
+2/4s Mana Regen

Legendary Item
From the depths of the mind,
the only person who sees this
necklace is the wearer.

It'd be cool if you actually read this far. Thanks for reading if you did, and if you didn't, you really should. I feel like this quest has some great potential and it took about 1hour to make. Thanks for reading, and have a nice day. Please let an owner or something see this ;-;

Thanks,
-Zani_

 

Don't think you've taken all my points from the previous time you've posted this quest. Try reading them over again.

 

why would I speak to a low level unique spear?

 

Its still too f#cking OP

 

true

 

why not?

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Take in mind that this is Fruma. I'm pretty confident that Dern is going to be released next, with a ton of new levels. After that, Fruma, with even more new levels. This will be a very high leveled thing.

 

Still, the mana regen and inteligence are too OP, if you combine it with 2 reminder rings (maxed) and a max intel hive/jester bracelet you get:

12+8+8+4= 32 intel just from accesories... and that IS op

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I would change your necklace to: +4 intel, 7% xp and loot, +1/4 mana

 

Pretty goooooooood.

 

That's a nice necklace c:

 

Z, you should change grandfather's name to Grandpa. C:

 

choco where hev u been bb

 

Im gonna bump this.

 

I quit xD

 

y

and y u on forums

 

The player is a blank slate, I don't think that giving them a family is a good idea. That's supposed to be up to the player to make up (if they even think about it). It's almost like making them talk in a sense.

 

I quit wynn but not forums.

 

why did you quit wynn?

 

Seriously... this is just a rippoff of "Beyond the Grave." sorry.

 

It's boring in general. Pretty much found all the Easter eggs and i don't wanna play on more new classes. And i play csgo

 

Whatever you say..