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Lore/Story Quests Told In A Different Way

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by 01100110111, Apr 25, 2016.

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    Bank Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    Updated with ten more, up to WynnExcavation Site B. c:
     
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    Rexelle2001 Music Person

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    This is so clever! I think you should continue on with this c:
     
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    Love them by the way! Very creative.
     
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    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    I noticed that you asked for criticism and you weren't getting any (for good reason! these are quite good)
    I simply had a minor issue with this one:
    Heart of Llevigar
    A shining city is in need,
    fix the problem sooner rather than later.
    Solve two puzzles to proceed,
    restore the power and fix the generator.

    Personally, I think the second and fourth line are too long and ramble on a bit. If I tried to edit them, well.. I'll try anyways

    Heart of Llevigar
    A shining city is in need,
    fix it soon or face destruction.
    Solve two puzzles to proceed,
    ________instruction

    I didn't know how to complete it, I just didn't quite like how generator fitted in. 4-syllable words are a bit much.

    The original is still great though
     
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    Thank you, for the compliment and suggestion! c: I'll try "just follow the instruction"?

    edit: jk I think "simply" sounds better XD
     
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    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    Sounds good actually.
    I just had to read the last line in a exasperated voice though. :P
     
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    Updated to The Worm Holes, for a total of 50 completed quests. c:

    Also:
     
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    Kvmilla Goddess of Blood and Devourer of Hearts VIP+

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    This is such a pleasure to read! <3
     
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    aayl Famous Adventurer

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    Awesome! Though, maybe important quests get more lines? Eg. Reincarnation, Tower of Ascension, The Qira Hive, Temple of the Legends
     
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    Excellent, looking forward to more!
     
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    Thanks for the suggestion, but a lot of the quests are on the border between regions. If you need to locate a quest, open the labeled tab and do ctrl+f. c: Also, super sorry my response is this late! I don't know why I didn't respond earlier; sort of slipped my mind.

    I'd like to do that, but only after finishing all of the quests first. Thanks for the suggestion!
     
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    Updated with ten more, to Out of My Mind, for 60 total quests. Sorry it took so long; I have limited free time and needed a break from words after hours of staring at them this week, ahahah. Also, I probably won't do another update until June.

    And while I was taking my word-break, I picked up another (non-word) hobby, which [SHAMEFUL SELF-ADVERTISEMENT ALERT] can be seen here. Hehehe.
     
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    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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