World [quest] The Belldam's World

This was the quest I did in my GM application form, but I mistyped it and it look like poo so I am writing it here, to get your opinions on my potential!

Location Information: the small island is completely forest, except from three points of interest, a small town with a bank, identifier and a potion shop! the second, a large house called "the purple parlour" the basement is a stage and has a door from the outside, not inside. Miss Spink the gymnast lives there! the attic has lots of rats (like the one's in Ragni) and a old man called Bairautha lives there. The third point of importance is a small well, just behind the parlour! There is also a doll (small armour stand) that appears everywhere, it appears in these locations: 1. slumped over in the woods 2. hiding in the grass 3. peering out of the window of the parlour!

Quest name: The Belldam's world
Quest level: 59
Quest Location: A large house in the woods of a small island, its also got a small town!
Quest difficulty: Hard
Quest length: Long

When you talk to miss Spink in the over-world
[Miss Spink] Oh hello dear!

When you talk to Bairautha in the over-world
[Bairautha] Are you Koraaline's friend?

When you talk to Koraaline's mother in the small town:
[Koraaline's Mother] Oh, are you my daughters friend?
[Koraaline's Mother] Good for you...
[Koraaline's Mother] I don't care, go away

There's three missing children posters in the town
[Missing Child: pertunia, 11]
[Missing Child: Grace, 9]
[Missing Child: Joshie, 7]

When you talk to Koraaline before your level 59:
[Koraaline] I'm sooo dead...
[Koraaline] Oh, maybe you could...
[Koraaline] Wait... your not cool enough for me!
[Koraaline] Go away!

When you talk to Koraaline to start the quest:
[Koraaline] I'm sooo dead...
[Koraaline] Oh, maybe you could help!
[Koraaline] My parents are gunna KILL me!
[Koraaline] I dropped my house key down the well...
[Koraaline] and now I'm locked out!!!!
[Koraaline] Could you go and talk to miss Spink and ask her if she's got a spare key, she lives in the basement!
[Go and talk to miss Spink in the basement]

When you talk to miss spink
[Miss Spink] Oh, are you Koraaline's friend?
[Miss Spink] A spare key?
[Miss Spink] No No No, Why would I have a key for her house?
[Miss Spink] anyway... good luck finding her key!
[Go and talk with Koraaline]

When you go back to Koraaline and talk to her
[Koraaline] oh, well...
[Koraaline] You'll just have to get it from the well for me!

After you jump down you teleport to a floating island of the forest, and your outside the house, the key is next to your feet, kill it and collect the key! The house door is open and Koraaline's mother is standing in the kitchen, She's got buttons for eyes...

When you collect the key
[Find someone in the house]

If you talk to Koraaline's mother
[Koraaline's Mother] Oh, hello there!
[Koraaline's Mother] Are you Koraaline's friend? and is that her house key?
[Koraaline's Mother] Oh silly girl... hahaha!
[Koraaline's Mother] Do you wan't some cake?
[Koraaline's Mother] Well, I've got something for you
[Koraaline's Mother] Well... Have fun!
[Koraaline's Mother] and remember, I am here for you!
+2 Button's
[Koraaline's Mother] Go try them on in the bedroom!
[Find a way out of this "Reality"]

If you talk to Koraaline's mother after that
[Koraaline's Mother] Oh, hello there?
[Koraaline's Mother] Do you wan't more cake?

If you go to the mirror, and stare at it for a few seconds:
[Petunia] She spied on our lives through the little doll's eyes. And saw that we weren't happy.
[Petunia] So she lured us away with treasures and treats and games to play

When you go to the well
[Koraaline's mother] Why are you leaving so soon?
[Koraaline's mother] Its still early... we can play some games.
[Koraaline's mother] Maybe eat treats...
[Koraaline's mother] Just don't leave!

When you jump down the well you appear back outside the mannor, but your in the over-world and Koraaline is standing there, the doll is still in the window.

[Report back to Koraaline about what you saw]

When you talk to Koraaline:
[Koraaline] Oh, your back!
[Koraaline] Good! did you get the key?
[Koraaline] What? another world?
[Koraaline] And my mum was there?! Stop Lying!
[Koraaline] Fine! Well, thanks for the key but I wan't proof that your telling the truth!
[Koraaline] Buttons? that's not much proof! I wan't something like...
[Koraaline] My doll! If its a true copy of this world it should have my doll!

[Go back into the well]

When you jump back through the well you appear on a tiny floating island, this time its ONLY the mannor and the garden!
[Koraaline's mother] So your back?
[Koraaline's mother] After I told you not to go! You went anyway!
[Koraaline's mother] and your still not wearing your buttons!
[Koraaline's mother] If your looking for the doll, I've got it and your never getting it!
[Koraaline's mother] and these three lost souls will guard this door forever!
[Koraaline's mother] and with there little button eyes, they can see everything! I control them!
[Find Three Child eyes]

If you try and enter the house's front door
A Powerfull force is pushing you outside!

The three eyes are located 1. in the basement/stage 2. In the garden 3. In the attic! All of the eyes are guarded by bosses and monsters! be carfull!

The one in the basement is guarded by "Miss Spink"
Hp: 30000
Speed: Very Fast
Damage: 120
Weak: Fire
Defence: Air, Thunder
Drops: Petunia's eye
Summons: None

The one in the attic is guarded by "Bairautha"
Hp: 20000
Speed: Normal
Damage: 95
Weak: Fire
Defence: Earth, Air, Water
Drops: Grace's eye
Summons: Dead Rat (Often)
Hp: 200
Speed: Fast
Damage: 35
Weak: Thunder, Fire
Defence: Earth
Drops: Nothing

The one in the garden is guarded by Koraaline's Dad
Hp: 40500
Speed: Slow
Damage: 395
Weak: Thunder, Water
Defence: Fire, earth
Drops: Joshie's eye
Summons: Dire Flower (Rare)
Hp: 320
Speed: Slow
Damage: 25
Weak: Fire
Defence: Earth, Water
Drops: Nothing
Summons: Scratch weed (Often)
Hp: 500
Speed: Slow
Damage: 60
Weak: Fire
Defence: Earth, water
Drops: Nothing
Summons: Nothing

When you enter the house after collecting all of the pearls!
[Joshie] She's the belldam...
[Grace] She's in the Art room...
[Petunia] She's a deamon...
[Kill the belldam]

The art room is a 15x15x15 circular room with lots of paintings on the walls, its got 2 chairs and a table... "Koraaline's mother" is standing in the middle of the room!

"Koraaline's mother"
Hp: 50000
Speed: Slow
Damage: 495
Weak: Fire, Thunder
Defence: Earth, water
Drops: Nothing
Summons: Giant Beetle (Often)
Hp: 500
Speed: Normal
Damage: Ranged 45
Weak: Fire
Defence: Earth,
Drops: Nothing
Summons: Nothing

After you kill Koraaline's mother:
[Koraaline's mother] AAAAAA!
[Koraaline's mother] AAAHAAAHAAAHAHAHAHAHA
[Koraaline's mother] Do you even know what I am?
[Koraaline's mother] I AM THE BELLDAM
[The Belldam] Now, DIE!
You get teleported to a copy of the art room but its floating in the void, chunks of the floor are missing and there are cobwebs all over the walls and parts of the floor! There is a zombie riding a spider! its called "THE BELLDAM"

The True Belldam
Hp: 100000
Speed: Fast
Damage: 205
Weak: Thunder
Defence: Earth,
Drops: Koraaline Doll, 1-16 emeralds
Summons: Deadling Silverfish (Very Often)
Hp: 100
Speed: Fast
Damage: 50
Weak: Fire
Defence: Earth,
Drops: Nothing
Summons: Nothing

After you kill it:
[The Belldam] NOOOO! BUT HOW!?
[The Belldam] YOU WILL PAY!!!!!!!!!
[Talk to Koraaline]

You get teleported out into the over-world, just outside the house!

When you talk to Koraaline!
[Koraaline] Wow! so you were telling the truth?
[Koraaline] Thats so cool!
[Koraaline] Thanks for the help, here's something that could help you along!
Rewards: 140000XP, 38 Emerald blocks, Quest items: Koraaline doll

 

[1/1] Jamie: Psst. Hey yes you beb. You have to have the text like this! Luv u k bye

[Dank Meme Book Updated]

 

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I freaking love you, you nerd.
You made this quest based off the movie Caroline, right? I can tell because of the names, and because of the button eyes.

 

This brings me memories.... Bad memories :S

Its Coraline just saying....

 

A:I've read the first few paragraphs and I see it's already linked to Mysterious Ties, and Coraline
B: I really hate it when I see quest suggestions and the text isn't right, thank you @Jamieverse
C: Please finish your suggestions entirely before posting them

 

YOU'RE*​

 

This movie scares me

 

True dat xD

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Im making this quest cuz i recently re-watched teh moovieeee with mah 8 yr old cousin... she had nightmares for days xD

 

days? I had nightmares for a fucking month lol

 

R.I.P. Dark theme users when reading dark blue words.

 

xD

 

DONE! and I sacrificed a spider... cuz it landed on my head whilst i wuz writing it!

 

Rip dark theme users when reading the dark gray words >.>

 

What are you going to do with the doll? Another filler quest... Pshhh... (Constructive criticism)

+1 like to add to your msg/like ratio, and for pointing out of more colors.