World Quest Suggestions ?

Guys, I was bored yesterday and was making up quests I could share. Keep in mind some of this isnt real, it is made up. Hope Ya Enjoy :D

Quest: The Ruby Pearl(lvl 45)

On the way to Nemract you see a man(Quest NPC nonkan,made up) he gives you a strage Orangy-Red pearl, and says it brings you "fortune". You go to the nemract bar and drink a couple of beers. You see a shady figure then *Swoosh* your on the floor. All the people start to surround you as the Doctor comes(another npc made up) You notice the Pearl glows as it says a riddle

Find the man in the tower
For he will give you the knowledge and power
The people are Rude and Cruel
You must fight them and find the powerful Tool

You notice this has something to do with the tower of amnesia and rush out of the bar to go there. You go there and find a man, who was never there before(Quest NPC Raleliah, made up again) He asks who you are and you tell him how you once prove yourself capable of entering there. You ask who he is, and he says his father built this place. You ask him if he knows anything about the strange pearl you have. He says yes, many people in Nemract have been posessed by this evil magic called "Tade" created by a family that hold a powerful tool, and that pearl completes it. If it falls into the wrong hands, great danger will come. He says you must defeat them and gives you items

Quest Item 1. Spirit Bottle
This item is capable of sucking evil magic if used properly.

Quest Item 2. Pearl Casket
This seals the power of the pearl and cannot open unless you say so

He says go North-East to there castle, you head off and a few guards stop you from entering, you defeat them easily and continue. A person named Ponck stops you, you notice he has a weaker form of Tade, witch is able to be used as an attack also. You try to attack him but he maintains distance. You see a Chandelier ontop of him and hit it as it falls on him lethally. You continue upstairs as the alarm goes off and mage guards stop you. You easily defeat them and enter the family room. They ask you why you attack them. You tell them about the pearl and how the pearl completes the tool. They try to strike a deal, 1Le for the pearl. You say no and sprint towards there fountain/pool. You take the tool and combine it with the pearl.*Huge air blasts around you as you hold the tool*. You run out of the house but a person stops you. The shady figure at nemract bar, exept this time clear. He uses Tade magic as he blasts Evil magic at you. You feel weak and drowsy and are about to fall down to the ground. But you remember the Spirit Bottle and use it the next time he attacks. you combine it with yours and unleash a killer blow. He falls to the ground like a dead pidgeon. You escape to Releliah and tell him what happened. He thanks you and rewards you greatly
[Rewards,
+24EB
+45600XP
+Item, Ruby Encrusted boots. Legendary Item
+800hp
+20 Thunder Def
+20 Fire Def
-20 Water Def
+10 Air Def
-5 Earth def
+7% Thorns
+2% Exploding
-2% Speed
-4 Water DMG
+5 Fire DMG
+5 Thunder DMG
+6% Spell DMG These boots were Encrusted with the most powerful rubies.
It posesses special magical power.]

Well, I hope you enjoyed my made up quest, Cya!

 

Encrusted*

 

Oh thanks, didnt notice :P

 

Well, er, this is actually really undetailed. It's got a lot of stuff off with it, so instead of telling you what you should fix, I'll self-advertise and give you one of my quests as an example.
Link

 

ik its not acctually a quest, just a story really. I could make it detailed

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Oh yeah and thanks for the link, it helped alot now that ik the format