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World Quest: A Titanic Friendship [ Cinematics! Custom Bosses! Wow! ]

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by Jamieverse, Mar 17, 2016.

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  1. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    This quest took me about 3 hours to refurbish and outline. It centers around a detailed quest of loss, hatred, and adventure...

    Let's Begin....

    PLEASE GIVE CREDIT IF YOU USE MY KEY!
    KEY:

    Green: Character

    Orange: Boss//Mob

    Red: Item

    Gray: Info

    Blue: What you do

    Dark Green: Chat

    Purple:
    Mob

    Underline: Link



    [Overview]

    Talk to Razak

    Enter the Volcano

    Find Clevin

    Find your way through the Titan's Tunnels

    Find Clevin

    Play Cutscene

    Fight and defeat the Titan

    Return to the top of the volcano

    Give Clevin's Heart to Razak

    End



    [Quest Start]

    A Small Volcano Island HERE. The island will be called Titan Island on the map. The island has a giant stone Titan coming from the ground, and there is a small village near the base. If you talk to some people in it, they say stuff like:

    [1/1] OldManSalted: Some say this island is just made of buried Titans...

    [1/1] JamieversePooPoo: Legends say that Titans battled on this island. I wonder if there are still more...

    [PRE-QUEST]

    [1/1] Razak: Get out! I'm trying to mourn! Come back to me when you're level 72!

    Entering the Volcano will make Razak say:

    [1/1] Razak: Hey! You shouldn't go in there!

    [START-Of-QUEST]

    [1/4] Razak: ..What do you want?!

    [2/4] Razak: I'm trying to mourn! My best friend! He...

    [3/4] Razak: He's gone into the Volcano! I saw him jump in, and he hasn't come back!

    [4/5] Razak: He said something about losing his bracelet! But he was in such a hurry I didn't really hear!

    [4/5] Razak: I need you to go after him! He could be dangerously hurt!

    [POST-QUEST]

    [1/1] Razak: Please get my friend back!



    [Quest Started: A Titanic Friendship]
    [Quest Book: Find Clevin in the volcano]
    Enter through the top of the Volcano, you jump in and land on slimes covered in red carpet aka Molten Lava

    There are tunnels are around, you must navigate through the tunnels to find Clevin.

    Occasionally you will walk around and hear:

    [1/1] Clevin: H-Help me!

    [1/1] Clevin: I- I- Is someone there?

    [1/1] Clevin: Someone p-please help me...

    How to find him: Turn to the tunnel south, then go left, right, left, left right.



    [Quest Book Updated]
    [Quest Book: Help Clevin]

    [1/3] Clevin: W- Who are you?

    [2/3] Clevin:
    A hero from Wynn? Oh, I'm saved!

    [3/3] Clevin:
    Now let's get out of here before-

    [CUTSCENE TIME]

    The screen shakes as you see Clevin pulled backward into a giant hole by a giant particle cloud hand.

    [1/1] Clevin: Heeeellp- Meeeeeee!!!!



    [Quest Book Updated]
    [Quest Book: Help get Clevin back]

    You need to jump into the hole the Titan made.

    You will tp to a giant cavern with blue glass spikes everywhere.

    As you walk down the hall
    Heavy Crystals will fall from the roof.

    You will head to the end of the hallway and see Clevin standing in the middle of a glass hand.

    As you get near him, a new cutscene and text will start.

    [1/1] Clevin: No! Don't get too close!

    [CUTSCENE TIME]

    The hand will shake and it will disappear and be replaced with a cloud hand. Clevin is thrown aside. It then cuts back to the smoke turning into a Titan. (TITAN STATS BEING MADE)

    There is a tunnel behind the monster, but if you try to enter, it says:

    A strange barrier blocks you... It seems its power is coming from the Titan.



    [Quest Book Updated]
    [Quest Book: Defeat the Titan]

    When you defeat the Titan, it will spawn an invisible dying dragon, so you can see the lights coming from it.

    (Like this)

    Drops:

    1 Titan Heart



    [Quest Book Updated]
    [Quest Book: Talk to Clevin]

    [1/3] Clevin: ...The Titan.... It stabbed me through my heart...

    [2/3] Clevin: ...I- I'm not going to make it...

    [3/3] Clevin: Please give this to... Razak... My best friend... In the whole wide world...

    You receive Clevins pure heart.


    [Quest Book Updated]
    [Quest Book: Return to Razak]

    [1/11] Razak: You're back! Please tell me that-

    [2/11] Razak: ...

    [3/11] Razak: ...H- His heart...

    [4/11] Razak: You're holding his heart....

    [5/11] Razak: It... was always so pure. He was kind and loving...

    [6/11] Razak: That's why the Titan wanted him... His pure heart... It's so powerful...

    [7/11] Razak: The best friend any person could have...

    [8/11] Razak: He wanted me to have it?....

    [9/11] Razak: ....H- how kind... What a guy.....

    [10/11] Razak: I must thank you, brave adventurer... You saved him... He didn't die in agony.... He died knowing what killed him was stopped... And hopefully, peacefully.

    [11/11] Razak: Here. It's all I have. I owe it to you for helping my best friend.


    [Quest Complete]


    REWARDS

    • 2 LE


    • 300000 XP

    •
    Friendship Bracelet

    (Made with @awemanrank100 and his item generator!)

    [POST-QUEST]

    [1/1] Razak: I miss you Clevin...


    Holy cow. You're still here?
    Wow... Didn't expect that.

    Um.. Well...

    Thanks for reading! Please rate 8 no h8 m8.

    Salted Senpai Notice me....
     
    Last edited: Apr 3, 2016
  2. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    Pretty good. The only things are a few color issues; I could elaborate if you want.
     
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  3. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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  4. awemanrank100

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    tenks

    I should point out that you need to add a plus sign before all the item stats, and when I say "nothing," I mean type nothing, not the word "Nothing." Also, you may want to change the lore to separate it into two lines.
    and add period pls
    ________________________________
    Also, I can make the custom mob for you, so that it has stats above it. No generator for this one, though, because I'm lazy. XD
     
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  5. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    Stats for the Titan would be nice plz make
    ________________________________
    Oh mah gawd 2 votes. Yay.
     
  6. awemanrank100

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    Well, I need the level and elemental affinities (and a screenshot of Bob's Reincarnation if possible).
     
  7. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    It's level 95.
    Weak to Thunder and Fire
    Resistant to Water and Earth
    And nuetral for Air

    Um.... why a screenie
     
  8. awemanrank100

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    Because for items, there's a specific order that elements go in, and I thought this might be true for mobs as well. Bob's Reincarnation has all teh elements, so I though that'd work.

    If you can't find a screenshot of a mob with what I need, you can just pick what order they go in. Based on the items, it's probably FWATE, but I'm not too sure about it. Not to mention that I don't know the order of Weak/Dam/Def. I also don't remember the format of the elemental affinities, and how they're laid out.
     
  9. TempleOfLegends

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    I like it, one question, how did you get the texture pack and the special requirements and the buffs on the item like wynncrafts?
     
  10. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    Awemanrank100's item generator and the texture pack is in your server resources file
     
  11. TempleOfLegends

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    I'm wondering how to use the files to use out of wynnncraft?
     
  12. Gameshot_65

    Gameshot_65 Well-Known Adventurer

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    Still a lot of things to define like the reward and the titan but ok. This quest needs the level to be said in the pre-quest chat, and I would like to see in the quest a bit of information about the titan, for example why he is there, and about the reason why Clevin jumped in the volcano.
    The final is epic, I really like Razak's description in that part.
     
  13. CookedPelvis

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    [1/6] Cooked: I like the quest idea, and it seems like you worked hard.
    [2/6] Cooked: However, there are some plot holes. For instance: Why did Clevin jump into a volcano?
    [3/6] Cooked: I would also switch out some words here and there, and using text coloring as it appears ingame makes the dialogue look finished.
    [4/6] Cooked: Right now, I am using the colors used for quests ingame (roughly).
    [5/6] Cooked: Some more specifics on the quest would also be good. What level is this quest? Have you considered that summoning a dying Enderdragon might cause some lag?
    [6/6] Cooked: If you need help figuring out the xp amount, find out a good level for your quest, then look on the wiki for the xp rewards for quests around that level.


    @The One-eyed Guy beat you to it!
     
  14. Cybersoap707

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    Honestly amazing quest and I can definitely see some time put into it. It's well thought out, has interesting dialogue, and is adventurous. The only flaw what I saw is what @CookedPelvis pointed out.
     
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    Oh and this...
    Light blue generally means "Light Blue" :P
     
  16. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    Sorry...

    (I'm color blind)
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    Editing to fit the needs of other people!
     
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    Woops! I'm sorry I didn't know! ;p
     
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  18. Jamieverse

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    I edited it! Added the missing colors and more plot!
     
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    Can't wait to read!
     
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  20. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    WAitwaitwaitwait I gotta add 1 more thing
     
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