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World [quest] [9+ Supporters!] [level 65+] Ragni's King

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by MrFrostyFeet, Jan 31, 2016.

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If you this quest was available, would you finish it?

  1. Yes!

    83.3%
  2. No.

    8.3%
  3. Maybe...

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  1. MrFrostyFeet

    MrFrostyFeet Well-Known Adventurer

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    Now, this quest, suggested by the name, starts in Ragni itself. You talk to a knight in the castle of Ragni.
    #RIPDarkThemeUsers (Future quest will cater to Dark theme people ;))
    NOTE :
    The Fluxed worm site/cave cannot be entered UNLESS you start this quest. This is to prevent low level players from accidentally dieing from the fluxed worms. The dialogue that comes up if
    you try to enter without starting the quest goes like this :

    "You feel a cold breeze caressing your skin. It scares you. You also smell a sharp sting coming deep below. You didn't enter."

    Here's the dialogue :

    -- Quest in Quest book --
    Ragni's King
    Difficulty : Medium
    Level min. : 65

    Talk to Ragni Knight at Ragni
    [x,y,z]
    ------------ o0o --------------

    -- Quest Layout --
    [1/4] Ragni Knight : Hey! Yes! you sir! I need your help!
    [2/4] Ragni Knight : You see, My King has been acting strange lately. He's been reciting words that, in my entire service for him, have not been heard of. I'm starting to get worried for him.
    [3/4] Ragni Knight : I have a friend in troms that can hopefully figure out what is wrong with the King. His name is Jonathan (Placeholder name). Here, have a blood sample of my King. I bet he will need that. Don't ask how I got the blood.
    [4/4] Ragni Knight : Good luck! I hope to hear from you soon!

    You then proceed to troms. You can find Jonathan inside of the castle.

    [1/5] Jonathan : Hmm.. It should've worked. According to my calculations, This potion should have liquid emerald stored inside of it by now.
    [2/5] Jonathan : Oh! What are doing here? I see, my old friend in Ragni requested you to come here so his King will be cured. Okay. Just hand me a sample of his blood.
    [3/5] Jonathan : Hm. Odd. The King seems to have been infected by a Fluxed worm. I don't remember Ragni having Fluxed worms inhabiting it.
    [4/5] Jonathan : Go back and tell my friend what I've told you. Now scram! I'm kind of busy here!
    [5/5] Jonathan : if this experiment is successful, i'll be rich i tell you, RICH!

    You then go back to Ragni to tell the Knight about the fluxed worm.

    [1/3] Ragni Knight : So, what did my friend tell you?
    [2/3] Ragni Knight : What?! My King was infected by a Fluxed worm?! That worm is very lethal. One bite and you will perish within days! But I've never heard that it's symptoms include recitals of words that are unknown nor did I ever encounter a fluxed worm here...
    [3/3] Ragni Knight : I do know a site that is nearby Ragni. My King must've been infected there. The site is located directly north of the gate. Collect [20 Fluxed worm skin] and bring it back to Jonathan so he can make a cure for My King. Be careful though. Fluxed worms are extremely strong. I've tried to kill one before but to no avail. Good luck.

    You head to the cave to kill fluxed worms. The fluxed worms are all in between level 65 - 72. You are advised to bring some potions just in case. Afterwards, you head back to troms so Jonathan can make a cure for the King.

    [1/5] Jonathan : Wow. I didn't expect you to bring back Fluxed worm skin. You must have quite great weapons if I do say so myself.
    [2/5] Jonathan : Give me a second. This needs some concentration.
    [3/5] Jonathan : ... .... ....
    [4/5] Jonathan : Done. Now hurry. If you don't give it to the King in time, He could die.
    [5/5] Jonathan : Now back to that experiment...

    You go back to The Knight.

    [1/2] Ragni Knight : Thank you! Ragni is forever in debt to you! You've done more than enough here.
    [2/2] Ragni Knight : As your reward, you shall have possession of one of my King's strongest armor, Ragni's prized Chestplate. I hope your travels around the provinces will be a good one!

    Rewards :
    32 Emerald blocks
    1 Unidentified Chestplate (Ragni's Prized Chestplate)
    1 Fluxed worm sample (Needed for the quest "A Fluxed problem", a quest yet to be written.)
    Access to Fluxed Worm cave (Probably a good grinding spot)
    90,000 XP


    Stats of Ragni's Prized Chestplate :

    Ragni's Prized Chestplate (Please tell me down below if the stats are too OP/low)

    ♥ Health: 1300+
    ❇ Fire Defense: +120
    Water Defense: -50
    ⏚ Earth Defense: +185

    Quest Req: Ragni's King
    Lv. Min: 65
    Strength Min: 10
    Defense Min: 12

    -5% Walk Speed
    +20% Melee Damage
    +15% Spell Damage
    2/2s Poison
    +75 Spell Damage
    +5% Exploding
    2/2s Mana Steal
    30/5s Life Steal

    [0/3] Slots

    Legendary Item
    This Chestplate, once worn by the King of Ragni during Battle,
    is made from iron which can be found deep within the abandoned mines of wynn.

    it is rumored to contain mystical qualities that can turn its owner corrupted within seconds of wearing it.
    Untradeable Item







    Upcoming quests :
    • Greed Part I
    • Greed Part II
    • Greed Part III
    • A Fluxed Problem
    • The Wizard
     
    Last edited: Feb 1, 2016
  2. Arreme

    Arreme Veteran, Learning Game Design VIP+

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    I like it! The dialogue is really good. I think that in general the quest is fine. However, I have a feeling that the stats of the armour are too OP

    P.D. RIP Dark Theme Users
     
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  3. lagerbooost

    lagerbooost Ya boi VIP

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    cool ! hope it gets added
     
  4. Relflow

    Relflow A dusty player CHAMPION

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    Some problems I have with this is that random level 1-20 players randomly finding the Fluxed Worm Cave and die to it. The armor's stats are little too overpowered. Also, please from now on use the Quest color format. RIP Night theme users.

    There are some grammatical errors such as: run-on-senten- Meh, Grammar Nazi OCD you can go away.

    [1/4] Ragni Knight: Hey! Yes! you sir! I need your help!
    [2/4] Ragni Knight: You see, My King has been acting strange lately. He's been reciting words that, in my entire service for him, have not been heard of. I'm starting to get worried for him.
    [3/4] Ragni Knight: I have a friend in Troms that can hopefully figure out what is wrong with the King. His name is Jonathan (Placeholder name). Here, have a blood sample of my King. I bet he will need that. Please don't tell my King that I slashed his right leg for this.
    [4/4] Ragni Knight: Good luck! I hope to hear from you soon!

    You then proceed to Troms. You can find Jonathan inside of the castle.

    [1/5] Jonathan: Hmm... It should've worked. According to my calculations, This potion should have liquid emerald stored inside of it by now.
    [2/5] Jonathan: Oh! What are doing here? I see, my old friend in Ragni requested you to come here so his King will be cured. Okay. Just hand me a sample of his blood.
    [3/5] Jonathan: Hm. Odd. The King seems to have been infected by a Fluxed worm. I don't remember Ragni having Fluxed worms inhabiting it.
    [4/5] Jonathan: Go back and tell my friend what I've told you. Now scram! I'm kind of busy here!

    [5/5] Jonathan: If this experiment is successful I'll be rich i tell you, RICH!

    You then go back to Ragni to tell the Knight about the fluxed worm.

    [1/3] Ragni Knight: So, what did my friend tell you?
    [2/3] Ragni Knight: What?! My King was infected by a Fluxed worm?! That worm is very lethal. One bite and you will perish within days! But I've never heard that it's symptoms include recitals of words that are unknown nor did I ever encounter a fluxed worm here...
    [3/3] Ragni Knight: I do know a site that is nearby Ragni. My King must've been infected there. The site is located directly north of the gate. Bring back [20 Fluxed worm skin] and bring it back to Jonathan so he can make a cure for My King. Be careful though. Fluxed worms are extremely strong. I've tried to kill one before but to no avail. Good luck.

    You head to the cave to kill fluxed worms. The fluxed worms are all in between level 65 - 72. You are advised to bring some potions just in case. Afterwards, you head back to troms so Jonathan can make a cure for the King.

    [1/5] Jonathan: Wow. I didn't expect you to bring back Fluxed worm skin. You must have quite great weapons if I do say so myself.
    [2/5] Jonathan: Give me a second. This needs some concentration.
    [3/5] Jonathan: ... ... ...
    [4/5] Jonathan:
    Done. Hurry. If you don't give it to the King in time, He could die.
    [5/5] Jonathan: Now back to that experiment...

    You go back to The Knight.

    [1/2] Ragni Knight: Thank you! Ragni is forever in debt to you! You've done more than enough here. Once a weak recruit, now a strong one. I encountered you when you were heading to Ragni. I'm proud of you.
    [2/2] Ragni Knight: As your reward, you shall have possession of one of my King's strongest armor, Ragni's prized Chestplate. I hope your travels around the provinces will be a good one!

    Rewards:
    32 Emerald blocks
    1 Unidentified Chestplate (Ragni's Prized Chestplate)
    90,000 XP



    Stats of Ragni's Prized Chestplate :

    Ragni's Prized Chestplate
    ♥ Health: 1500+
    ✹ Fire Defense: +150
    ❉ Water Defense: -80
    ✤ Earth Defense: +200

    Quest Req: Ragni's King
    Lv. Min: 65
    Strength Min: 16
    Defense Min: 15

    -10% Walk Speed
    +25% Melee Damage
    +20% Spell Damage
    +4/2s Poison
    +120 Spell Damage
    +8% Exploding
    +2/2s Mana Steal
    +3/2s Life Steal

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    Legendary Item
    This Chestplate, once worn by the King of Ragni during Battle,
    is made from wynnic stone which can be found deep within the abandoned mines of wynn.
    it is rumored to contain mystical qualities that can turn its owner corrupted within seconds of wearing it.

    Untradeable Item
    (Please tell me down below if the stats are too OP/low)
     
    Last edited: Feb 2, 2016
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  5. Gogeta

    Gogeta Super Saiyan

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    Huh, it appears that you put some thought into this quest suggestion, unlike most users.

    The prized chestplate is pretty well described, and you even used the ingame symbols.

    What I found the most interesting was those two lines:
    They sound like what a wynncraft quest npc would say; not particularly relevant, somewhat random, and they still give the npc some character (what he's doing, etc).

    However I don't think the fluxed cave should be too close to Ragni, it would confuse the lower leveled players a bit, since they'd have to wait forever until they can walk in there (cough cough the passage).

    But yeah besides that, I really like this quest suggestion. :)
     
  6. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    I actually kind of like it!
    But...
    [1/1] The One-eyed Guy: Could you use the proper text coloring? There's also a "none" color that will bring your typing back to normal.
    And also, here are the proper elemental symbols:
    ✣ Neutral
    ✤ Earth
    ✦ Thunder
    ❉ Water
    ✹ Fire
    ❋ Air
    I hope you make more quests- It's nice to see more quality ones.
     
  7. jpmrocks

    jpmrocks A Lone Wanderer

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    Interesting, I'm game for it
     
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