Please Rate My Quest!

Good.

I know it sounds like a cat poster, but it's true.

 

My quest was a hell of a long quest enhancing the lore about bob utilizing flashbacks reliving his past... if anyone steals my idea imma sue him

 

Did you just assume their gender? The person stealing your ideas could be Female, Transgender, Toaster, Mayonaisse or even an Apache Attack Helicopter!

 

A couple of things:
I personally don't like the plot twist. It started out promising and looked like you ran out of ideas. The plot twist is weird and pointless, why does he need his books to reveal who he is? This seems like kind of a filler quest.

Describe how to get the books. I'm sure you had the idea of an extra awesome-puzzle-filled quest to get the books, but that was never explained. The GM Team can't read your mind, maybe they assume the books are just lying in a house, or something boring.

75,000 HP is way to low.
Amadel is a lvl 70 quest and has 100,000 hp an d all elements resistance. Make the boss unique, like maybe summon earthquakes? Also around 175,000 health sounds fair to me.

Don't worry, I was denied too, but I believe the reason was I didn't explain my quest, and the GM team didn't think what I was thinking.

TL:DR: Don't take this as hate, just my personal opinion as if I was a GM viewing this quest. I'll tell you my quest in convo if you want too :D