World {new Quest} {the Sun God}

( feel like quests are lacking up at higher levels so I decided to create a new one :)

[Quest Book] Level Minimum 91
Difficulty: Hard
Talk to the High Priest at (Somewhere in Molten Heights where a Temple can be built :P)

If you are too low level: "The world is in serious danger, I need someone strong! Come back when you're lv 91."

[Quest start]
High Priest: [1/4] "The Sun is amazing, don't you think? It is the only thing that keeps life on this planet living. Yet it is under threat, and I fear the worst.
High Priest: [2/4] "You see a being of supernatural power is attempting to steal the energy of our sun, and if he isn't stopped son he will be impossible to defeat!"
High Priest: [3/4] "You seem like a strong specimen! Maybe you are the person destined to save our planet."
High Priest: [4/4] "This being has settled underneath my temple, 'The Temple of the Sun' as it has the closest link to the star. There is a tunnel behind me, you should go and explore, but it has gone to extreme measures to protect itself, be careful and my God be with you.

[Quest Book Updated] ~ Explore the cave

The cave is filled with level 95 fully grown magma cubes. (10,000 Health) (500 Damage per Hit)

(Through a teleporter)
{You come to a cavern with some kind of contraption in the centre, it appears to be consuming the sun!}

[Quest Book Updated] ~ Destroy the Machine.

The machine is held in place by three struts, a puzzle must be done to collapse them all at once (Open for any ideas!) The machine sinks to the ground using the same technique used for the tree at the start of the game.

~ A cut scene of a dark red figure runs incredibly fast out of the crater, and through a teleporter ~

The monster speaks: [1/1] "You cannot defeat me, puny human!"

[Quest Book Updated] ~ Follow the Monster ~ ( Or whatever you want to call it, suggestions? )

You go through the teleporter. You come into a huge cave with a contraption in the middle.

There is a cutscene of the monster sitting in the contraption, it is feeding something into him (particles?)

[Quest Book Updated] ~ Kill the monster.

The monster is now an enderman, and is out of the contraption.

The Monster: [1/1] "My power is now beond you! You will die, and the world with you!"

The boss has 250,000 hp and health 500 health regen. It is weak to: WATER, it is strong against: FIRE, and he does: THUNDER, damage.

You kill it and it drops necklace of the sun, a level 92 necklace:
[Sun Necklace]
+250hp
+40% thunder damage
-10 spell damage
+5% xp bonus
-10% walkspeed
When you where this you absorb the energy of the sun.

[Quest Book Updated] ~ Speak to The High Priest.
If you do not have the necklace: [1/1] "The sun is still draining, you must stop him!
High Priest: [1/2] "Wow! You have done it! The world is safe again.
High Priest: [2/2] "Is that his [Sun Amulet]? Wow, it feels powerfull! Keep it as a reward. If feel ablidged to pay you aswell, you have done this world a great deed!"

+20,408 emeralds
+1 Sun Necklace
+1,000,000 exp

Please leave suggestions in the comment section :)

I have made some changes in account to the comments, hopefully u like :P

 

interesting story. has a good base needs lots of tweaking which I cannot do (I am not hating on it, its just missing some stuff)

-Mob stats (Weakness, What type of damage, Ranged or melee?)
- Names (Yes I know you are working on it)
-Finer details.

Though I do love this idea!

 

YAY 750 k boss with 50 k regen boss...
what an amazing and not boring fight
and thinking about his name is too hard huh?

 

Idea is nice, but could be worked on.

I get that you want more bosses in Wynn but you can't just add a really strong boss without a lore. (Maybe a few low level quests to support this quest?)

Raw Thunder DMG isn't a thing, and even if this was %, it would make thunder builds the strongest, try lowering it to 10% maybe?

5le and 3mil xp? Maybe 2 le and 900k XP would make more sense.

Wear*

 

I do like he idea but the boss is far beyond the difficulty of qira and that shouldn't be the case at this lvl. The thunder damage bonus should be at most 50% and raw elemental damage doesn't exist btw. Other than that I'll give it a plus 1

 

"The world is in serious danger, I need someone strong! Come back when you're lv91."

I had this ridiculous image in my mind of you being level 5 at this time and spend so long to reach 91, only to find out that the world has been destroyed.

Anyway, as others have said, nice idea, but could be tweaked on. I reccomend a different message, just so that it doesn't seem so climatic.

 

First of all, this is a sun god:

 

There's no "second of all"?
That's a shame.

 

I don't think you realize that the 50k Ho regen is too much and that the 750k hp is way to much. Remember that not everyone ca. Do 20k meteors, bombs, uppercuts, and smoke bombs

 

o no pls

 

imagine dxp armor and txp with this quest
oh god i cant look

 

Quest start:
(1/4) "I imagine that you take the simple things in life for granted? Such as the sun... Well I'm afraid if something isn't done then you will no longer be able to."
(2/4) "You see a being of supernatural power is attempting to steal the energy of our sun, and if he isn't stopped son he will be impossible to defeat!"
(3/4) "You seem like a strong specimen! Maybe you are the person destined to save our planet."
(4/4) "This being has settled underneath my temple, 'The Temple of the Sun' as it has the closest link to the star. There is a tunnel behind me, you should go and explore, but it has gone to extreme measures to protect itself, be careful and my God be with you.

Just to point out a few.
Please edit

 

[1/3] The One-eyed Guy: Just a couple things.
[2/3] The One-eyed Guy: I have included proper quest text format here. It looks best if you use it.
[3/3] The One-eyed Guy: Also, I'll give you the [proper item layout] as well.
[Quest Book Updated]

Spoiler: Item Layout

Sun Necklace

+250 Health

Lv. Min: 91
Quest Req: The Sun God

+1000 ✦ Thunder Damage
-10 Spell Damage
+5% XP Bonus
-10% Walk Speed

[0/1] Slots
Legendary Item

 

Oh, yeah.
Second of all, this is a Temple of the Monkey God/Temple of the Sun God/Sun Alter/etc.: