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Build My (2nd) Builder App

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by pumpkinpuncher, Dec 6, 2018.

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Will i be accepted?

  1. LOL NO U SUCK LMAO

  2. Maybe not this time...

  3. Maybe

  4. Yeah, sure!

  5. YOU SHOULD BE ACCEPTED AHHH

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  1. pumpkinpuncher

    pumpkinpuncher Worlds leading professor in building ruins

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    I have finished putting together my builder application (for those of you that dont know, I got "promising" on my last application) and I want to share it with you guys! (Sorry if the background is a bit distracting on some pictures)
    My builds: https://imgur.com/a/wRjLfR0
     
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  2. A Human

    A Human Definitely not an alien. Builder

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    Its fantastic!

    A couple things to note though:
    1. Add some slabs to the trees to make them look a bit smoother. Since they're oak trees, I would say some spruce slabs on the roots would do nicely.
    2. Some of the house builds have some fairly repetitive patterns in them, try making them differ a little. Maybe an extra flower pot somewhere, a broken window in another.
    3. Vary the types of leaves a bit - your trees seem to all have only oak leaves on them and nothing else. While we're on the topic of trees, one of the trees in the photo titled 'more trees' (the one furthest to the left) seems to have had the leaves cut in half down the middle.

    Otherwise it looks fantastic, and I hope you get accepted!
     
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  3. HoneyBlu

    HoneyBlu Nectar Collector VIP+ Builder

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    General rule of thumb for builder applications: Don't put unfinished work in your build portfolio. (Unless you really feel like it adds something)
    Other than that, not bad!
     
  4. pumpkinpuncher

    pumpkinpuncher Worlds leading professor in building ruins

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    which build was unfinished?
     
  5. HoneyBlu

    HoneyBlu Nectar Collector VIP+ Builder

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    The statue, or organic as you called it (I believe)
     
  6. pumpkinpuncher

    pumpkinpuncher Worlds leading professor in building ruins

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    Oh, Im so blind xD
     
  7. A Human

    A Human Definitely not an alien. Builder

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    Ok, what if I have a build project which I am optimistically hoping to be finished sometime in the next five years? Can I put parts of it that I finished into the application? Since I am building it by sections, and a small section might be finished while the rest is still boring vanilla terrain.
     
  8. wecklerie

    wecklerie is ur dad lol

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    i personally feel like it needs alot more terraforming
     
  9. HoneyBlu

    HoneyBlu Nectar Collector VIP+ Builder

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    That would be completely fine, as long as those parts add real value to your build-application!
     
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  10. Bluescreen

    Bluescreen Also known as boatscreen

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    This would fit in wynn perfectly, and nothing else to say, other than...
    on days like these, post like this..
    remind me why everything I build is burning in hell.
     
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  11. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Nice builds and decent skill, expectations for Wynncraft are super high and right now I don't feel like you would get accepted for the reasons listed above by others, however on any other server I'd bet you'd make it.

    I feel like you could experiment with "blending" more often (A term I like to use for similar looking blocks with similar colors that makes things look more smooth and better), some of your builds do incorporate this but I feel like more of your designs should. Little things like including a few more block designs and different blocks makes the difference. And try to add a bit more detail, some of your builds look too "blocky" I guess (funny, because this is Minecraft). Try to make them stand out more and occupy more space without it looking clustered.

    Then again, I just got back into building and wynncraft in general, my tips may sound outdated or just stupid. Again, nice builds.
     
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  12. Lairgaf

    Lairgaf Travelled Adventurer

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    Nice builds
     
  13. StormKing3

    StormKing3 Well-Known Adventurer

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    Those are mighty impressive. Well done!
     
  14. Malibu

    Malibu Travelled Adventurer VIP+

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    Love the build hope you get accepted :D
     
  15. pumpkinpuncher

    pumpkinpuncher Worlds leading professor in building ruins

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    its been a while and no response.... thanks for your support though!
     
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