Mage/Dark Wizard Improvements

Could someone please give me a hand with this build? My friend made it for me quite a while ago and I'm kinda looking for some more damage rather than tank power.
I don't have any mythics or LI stuff

Here is the build: https://wynndata.tk/s/wVpMUD

I also use a normal Hive wand with it (no powders)

 

more melee damage? more damage per spell? more dps? more spell dps?

 

...No offense but my eyes were literally hurt from just looking at this build

https://wynndata.tk/s/T2srFz
Not the best build because you didn't say how many Hive items you could get so I assumed it was none but the wand, And I could definitely improve this build further with some LI items too.

 

Do you want us to slightly modify the build, or just give you the best one we can think of?

 

id use mantlewalkers or charcoal, scorpio isnt earth/fire
dont think raindrop is necessary as well

 

Yeah, it was sort of a scrap build since at the time I have very little to work with.
Thank you for the build.

Mostly I was just showing what I had as of now so you can see what I've dealt with. I'd just want a better build in your opinion. I'd prefer spell damage and the ability to take some hits.