World Improve Murder Mystery

Alright time to speedrun suggestions
So Murder Mystery is a level 73 (72?) quest where you find out who murdered a guy. However, there are some flaws.
1. There is literally only one suspect.
2. The fact the suspect literally brings you to the guy who shows he is in fact the murderer is dumb.
Looking at these flaws, they really don't make the Murder Mystery a "mystery" it's more like "this guy is the murderer prove it or something."
So here is my idea for an improved Murder Mystery.
Quest: Murder Mystery
Length: Long
Start: go to Captain Redd in Letvus Airbase

Spoiler: stage 1

Captain Redd: Hey you! Want some quick money?
Redd: Good, lemme explain the situation.
Redd: I'm part of a repair crew repairing an airship east of the airbase.
Redd: Recently, one of our crewmates, I think it was Parple, dissapeared
Redd: Since he is one of our best technicians, I want you to find him and hopefully bring him back alive.
Redd: He was last seen going to the engine room in the airship. I've wrote the coordinates in your book.

Go to the ship. Then, go to the engine room, which signs are pointing towards.

Spoiler: stage 2

There seems to be some blood trails leading into the vent. You should follow it.
You then enter the vent and follow the blood trail. At the end is another hatch you can go through. There, you see Parple's dead body in the storage room, conveniently hidden behind some crates.
Is that Parple?! You better report this to Captain Redd!

You then go to Redd to report the body

Spoiler: stage 3

Redd: Ah, detective! How are you doing?
Redd: Wait, you found Parple? Wait, he's dead?!
Redd: I better call the crew to a meeting. We must address this!
Redd: Go to the room behind me. The murder surely has to be one of us!

Go to the room behind Redd. There, you see the entire crew is already there.

Spoiler: stage 4

Redd: Thank you crew for coming to this meeting. Now, you are probably wondering why you are here.
Redd: Recently, the detective here, found Parple. Dead
Grien: What?! Who would do this?
Redd: I think the murderer is among us. Nobody had access to the ship except us.
Bleu: Well I think it's Yewlo! He has been acting very weird recently!
Yewlo: I wasn't even near Parple when he went missing! I was in the captain's room repairing the controls!
Blurck: I bet it was Bleu! Only the murderer would start accusing people that fast!
Pank: No, it has to be Grien, he-
Redd: Everyone, STOP! We do not have sufficient evidence yet!
Redd: The detective will figure it out. This meeting is disbanded!

You are then pushed out of the meeting room. You then have to go to the Airship. You see that government agents have come to investigate the crime scene. Speak to agent Henry.

Spoiler: stage 5

Agent Henry: Hey, what are you doing here?
Henry: Oh, your the one who discovered the body? Well I guess you could help.
Henry: We have identified that the victim was killed via stab wounds. Maybe that would help?
You remember Redd, Bleu, Yewlo, and Blurck had knifes equipped during the meeting. Maybe it could be one of them?
That narrows it down. You should look for more evidence.
Henry: I should mention my assistant is in the vents looking for info. You should go help him.
Go into the vents and speak to Agent Charles.
Agent Charles: Who are you? Oh, Henry sent you?
Charles: While crawling through the vents, I've found this rag. It must have been cut off. Maybe the victim and the murderer did some fighting.
Charles: Hopefully that helps. This murderer really seemed to have the greatest plan...
You remember Redd and Blurck wore hats. It has to be one of them!
You should give this info to Henry. Maybe he could help...
Alert System: DANGER! ENGINE MELTDOWN! PLEASE EVACUATE!
Henry: I have some good agents in there! Someone has to fix the engine before it blows up! We don't have time to evacuate everyone!
You then have to go to the engine room. You have 30 seconds to fix it. The puzzle here is basically the one in Heart of Levigar but simpler because this time your on a timer. Fix it to progress
Alert System: ENGINE TEMPERATURE DECREASING. DANGER ELIMINATED.
You see a red ring on the floor.
You remember seeing Redd wearing this! He must be the killer!
You should go back to the meeting room and show your evidence.

N0w go to the meeting room. Also, if you speak to Henry he will say this.
Henry: I heard the alert system! Someone was able to stop the airship from blowing up!
Henry: Wait, that was you? Well, I've got to thank you! You saved many lives there
Henry: Here have this. Go find that murderer!
Henry then gives you 10eb.
When you reach the meeting room, you call a meeting and everyone is there. However, Redd is late.

Spoiler: stage 6

Redd: Well detective! What have you found?
You display your evidence and accuse Redd. Everyone is looking at him.
Grien: Wh.. what? Why would you do this?
Blurck: I can't believe you would do this! Why would you murder your friends?
Redd: Hehe..hehahaha...HAHAHAHAHA!!!
Yewlo: Why are you laughing? You think this is funny?
Redd then transforms into a slime. He turned out to be a shapeshifter, the same one in General's Orders.
Redd?: Yes I do! I actually had a lot of fun borrowing his body. Messing with you guys was even better!
Bleu: Then what happened to the real Redd?! What did you do to him? And who are you?
Redd?: Ah, that Redd? Oh, I... took care of him. He is probably floating in a river as we speak.
Grien: You monster! Everybody! Get him!
The shapeshifter then turns into a bat and flies away. Speak to Grien.
Grien: I can't believe that impostor got away...
Grien: Well, someone is going to have to lead this crew now, and since I was first mate I guess it haw to be me.
Grien: What's your name? Potatomancer?
Grien: Thanks, for bringing closure. Here take this. You can keep Redd's ring as a trophy of you acomplishment.

End
Rewards:
Saboteur's Ring (basically detective's ring)
32 eb (22eb from Grien, 10 from Henry)
xp lol
Yes, this is an obvious reference to Amogus. Also, the detectives are named after Henry Stickmin and Charles Calvin, characters in the Henry Stickmin franchise. Also, the part where detective Charles mentions "This murderer really seemed to have the greatest plan..." is a reference to his catchphrase, "this is the greatest plaaaaan!" Also, Grien may or may not be Grian
Also just to trigger some people there is a crate in the storage room that looks like an amogus crewmate.
Also also, if you do General's Order's after doing this, the shapeshifter will actually remember you.
Shapeshifter: Hey, I remember you!
Shapeshifter: You're the one who messed up all that fun I had in Letvus!
Shapeshifter: As soon as I take your form, I will make sure to slander you reputation as much as possible. This is revenge time!

 

Hol’ up


Is that an amogus reference?

 

hehehe

 

Add a poll option that says ''Yes, but not an among us reference because i'm fucking sick of that shitty, cringy ass game. It was a good game at one point, but the internet has fucking ruined it. God damn.''

 

Please add spoilers to shorten the post

 

When the Shapeshifter is Sus!

 

Bro you’re acting kind of sus by saying that

 

Atleast it isnt Fortnite or Fall Guys.

 

This quest in a nutshell.
Red: Go do tasks and stuff.
You report purples body.
Red: Who sus?
Blue: Yellow
Black: Blue
Pink: Green
No one was ejected (Skipped)
Player: Red sus
Red was The Impostor (0 Impostors remain)
Green: Take this money

Spoiler

This is a joke, I didn't mean to insult your work in any way

 

>be investigator hired by the government
>lock down the crime scene and try to find the murderer
>despite being a top-secret investigator, somehow miss a fucking blood trail leading out from the window
>miss the letter
>dont try to interrogate anyone or dissect the crime scene
>surprised when the player does the same work a toddler can do by simply following a trail of very clear clues
>the criminal is also an idiot
yeah the quest needs fixing