Ideas on how to make TFF better

So, The Feathers Fly kind of falls flat in parts, I think. The dialogue isn't very good, the whole plot isn't set up the best, it could use more dev time.

Here are some ideas I have for improving certain parts.


1. End boss
The boss should get more complicated as it goes on. So here's my suggestions:

At Stage One, you're using Ricochet Sprouts to get to the top, a flower where Ava's machine sits. You attack it and are flung off.

At Stage Two, the flower grows bigger. The core is hidden within a flower bulb, so you have to crawl along two additional vines to kill minibosses and open the bulb. Meanwhile, the Ricochet Sprouts have gained a spell where if you're close to them for too long, they explode and knock you back.

Stage Three sees the flower grow even larger. Three additional vines to open the bulb, and the Ricochet Sprouts now have a pull spell in addition to the explosion.


2. Minigame
The minigame doesn't work the best for how hyped up the Council makes it. (The Council needs its entire dialogue rewritten, it's just awkward.) I'd suggest making it more difficult and interesting by turning it into a memory game.

You're given a sequence of clicks, then asked to repeat it to progress the minigame. The sequence length increases over time, and the time you have to memorise and input it reduces over time. Thus, at the start, you're doing 1, 2, or 3-input sequences over 10s, and at the Council segment, you have to input 7 clicks in 5s.

 

Put it in the feedback part of the forums, not here in suggestions

 

I wasn't sure where this would go. It's kind of hard to tell when I'm taking issue with some part of a quest and propose a fix.