Build First Mountain Build (needs Your Opinion)

long story short, my dream is to be on wynncraft build team in 1 or 2 years, (because i need to practice and practice) so ive got to work on terrain a whole lot, and i tried to use voxel sniper for the first time ever.
i made theese mountains from tips from GeminiTay, and i'd just like to hear all of your opinions.


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It looks pretty good to me, but the trees look like you used saplings. I'm sure you didn't, but try to make it a little bit more distinct.

 

Good attempt but... Gemini's tutorials might be a bit advanced for a first timer to Voxel, here are some great tips for you to improve your terraforming skills. ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ )

1. Start with cylinders not cubes for mountain shaping: I know you are just following GeminiTay's tutorial but for a beginner it is best to use spheres and cylinders to create the shape for your mountain. with your build i can still see a square shape in the mountain. remember always shape terrain first and paint terrain last. :)

Use: //br cyl 57 8 8 or //br sphere 57 8 8 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

2. When building terrain do not over use /b e smooth or //br blendball the over use of the smooth or blend ball command makes the mountain look like a giant diagonal cube and that is not what you want. you want to make it natural and organic, like a real mountain that actually rose from the ground.

3. never build notch trees. notch trees are trees that have a one block wide trunk and no branches what so ever. trees are a good way to improve a build but incorrect placement or over use of them can ruin a build as well. Next time try to have more tree variants not just one tree copied and pasted all over. a good example is this tree as you can see, it is small but it has a trunk and branches. Thus it is also a tutorial but I strongly recommend to take inspiration from this picture instead of copying it. ｡◕‿‿◕｡

Overall the build is really good for a person who just started using voxel, but improvements could be made to make this build even better ^̮^

 

Thanks for the tips! i will try and improve on the things you said (and definitely the trees)