Build Elemental Dungeon

If you'd like I can come on your server and show you what i'm talking about, you might not get what i'm trying to say xD

 

This is on my redstone testing world.
EDIT: Why are people still voting for different shits!

 

Eyyyyy

 

Wait… this is for another server's lobby?

 

What are you talking about, I'm building this for fun.

 

You brought this on yourself... I've already learned the hard way ;-;

 

Omg the votes doe...

 

i tri

 

oh well can you message me the world download because i cam building the full dungeon and i need your hub in it OR i can send you the world with it on and you can replace with a new hub and give it back. Just somehow i need your hub on my world

 

Can't you build your own hub, it's your suggestion not mine.

 

Update, now would be what I'd classify as Update 1.1

 

Um...How about this................I make the dungeon and you stick with the hub. I'll link this thread in my thread so I'll just make a temp hub.

 

Oh yeah and how did you get the thing to teleport you when you got there Testfor? are you on 1.10 because if yes i would need to switch from 1.8 to 1.10

 

obsidian dong

 

well I did say brutally honest.

 

Hey dude, I appreciate the fact that you're trying, and that after being under fire you can still keep going! Determination and time is what makes a good builder. Anywho, I would also like to give some criticism. Honestly, unless you can find a clever way to use it, beacons are honestly just ugly. There is no way in putting that besides that they're ugly. Maybe other's will disagree, but just having batches of different colored beacons are a complete mess, and honestly, would look a bit better if you removed them. The overall shape of this has no contrast between blocks, and the dong obsidian shape it currently is in right now is just... I don't know... plain and ugly. And I mean, it's not just the shape that makes it ugly, it's the block choice and just the overall (repeated) texture on it makes it kind of, uncomfortable and just an overall grotesque look in a bad way. Please add a variety in blocks, and not only just normal blocks, make sure to have a pattern, that is breath taking to the eye, and be sure to use stairs and slabs for effect! And for half of the time, geometric shapes in buildings don't tend to look well so, be sure to be creative with your base and add on from there. Keep going dude. Practice makes perfect.

 

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No but seriously, thanks for the advice :)