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Also because I like being an a** you wrote out the number (one, six, etc) for the level of all the abilities, but the last one you wrote 20 in numbers.

Just... whyyyy

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Which is why it needs clarification. You should not need to assume

 

Also, something else I noticed:
The level 20 ability just allows you to summon some creatures.
So, congrats.
You summoned some creatures... now what? It doesn’t say that you can control them.

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And that it doesn’t have a cooldown.
Prepare for 60d6 wolves.

 

My opinions:

• Getting sunlight sensitivity is either a huge turn-off (normal darkvision race), makes the character literally unplayable (race without darkvision), or pointless (for kobolds). OOC Rizkeld: "As if kobold sorcerers weren't overrepresented already..."
• You don't have proficiency in grappling. I would phrase it as "You add double your proficiency bonus to Athletics checks for the purpose of grappling."
• Healing based on the bite is a bit of a no-go. You can just buy a bag of rats and bite them in-between battles to heal a lot of HP. I would have it grant temporary hit points that can be used for your HP-based abilities.
• I like having the HP-based casting reduce your maximum HP, although 2X the spell's level scales oddly. Maybe make a table with special values for each spell level?
• I'd have the bat form change your size to Tiny, and maybe only last for a short amount of time and either cost sorcery points/max HP or require a long rest recharge. At-will flight is slightly overpowered for Level 6, and being an Aarakocra requires you to give up your HUGE race choice factor.
• Bite upgrade is good, but you should put it back in with the original feature. This is similar to how other, similar features (like Extra Attack for Fighters) are worded.
• The charm ability needs a better definition. Is it at-will? Because that's overpowered. Can you use it in combat? Are there any other effects aside from the Charmed condition?
• Beast-summoning is rather odd, especially since the swarms of rats and bats apparently stay there forever. Also, they don't follow your commands. This needs a lot of tweaking.

 

It does actually mention 1/rest

And yeah, I think I mention the wording of the last ability being too vague. Initative, reciving commands, etc

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I agree. A grapple-based ability but no grapple buff is a bit weird. Also, if he REALLT wants a bite heal, maybe make it only work on humanoids? But temp ho may be easiest. And, a special table might be good for the health decrease.

Also, I don’t think sunlight sensitivity is THAT BAD considering Drow have it, but fair point. Blue mentioned to me earlier making a thing to negate sunlight sensitivity for 24 hours for 1 sorcery point, which I think isn’t bad.

The other points I have nothing to add other than what I’ve already stated

 

Right thanks i'll clean everything up.
Also very sorry for my horrible spelling.

 

Also check the comments I made on the previous page, and Emhanced’s

 

Okay, time for my turn...
I go to Harshnag and give him a few neck slaps using Extra Attack.
Att1 Roll1: 14 + 3 + 4 = 21
Att1 Roll2: 18 + 3 + 4 = 25
Attack 1 Damage: 4 + 6 + 4 = 14
Att2 Roll1: 8 + 7 = Miss
Att2 Roll2: 8 + 7 = Miss

Then I use my Bonus Action to give him a last neck slap
Att3 Roll1: 6 + 7 = Miss
Att3 Roll2: 14 + 7 = 21
Damage: 2 + 5 + 4 = 11

Total damage: 25 Bludgeoning

Then I back up a bit.

 

...
Oof

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Altred’s Turn, but I doubt he does anything

 

Oof indeed.
I nerfed Caligo, in case you're wondering why he only has +4 dex

 

What was he before?

Also if @AlexisPlay doesnt respond by the time I’m down showering, I’ll move on. I know I’m not giving him much time, but he’s probobly not going to make Alfred do anything anyway

 

+5
I'll edit the convo to mirror my changes.

 

I'm going to rewrite the Vampiric Sorcerer.

 

I always do, what you don't think I will do, Alfred dash to the last part of fog. :D

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I don't know if where he's is enough to delete the fog, so I will let you do it

 

I was eating dinner I'll probbably get around to fixxing it tommorow.

 

Just because I want to piss off @bluepenguin1002 Alfred doesn’t uncover the fog

 

Alice seems to have fun

 

Harshnag can’t move or do anything, so he sets a reaction

He makes another WIS save

2 + whatever + fail

Still paralyzed

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Orc 6, seeing Orc 2 get hurt by the spikes, runs out of the spikes, only taking 3 damage

He runs up to Erevan and attacks with his greataxe.

NAT 20

1 + 11 + 3 = 15 slashing damage (I edited hp)

And, @Paradoxical, concentration save

 

Did you account for the spikes being difficult territory?

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Also doesn't setting a reaction take an action?

 

No, but it doesn’t make a difference. The damage is the same, due to difficult terrain costing more movement but not actually making the creature move further. And moving within reach of Erevan I believe left him with 5 feet left, which is just enough to still reach with the difficult terrain

 

I wasn't worried about the damage, and alright.