1.5 Stacks Le Giveaway ! [contest] Winner+story Announced

aint no one got time for that pfff

 

@Kraby except me

 

I hadn't looked away from my computer in days, yet now, I have realized the truth! I thought today would be Thursday! I know now that... it ends tomorrow! I thought there was no time left, better get to work. I made three chapters yesterday, I can make five today. I don't even need sleep anymore... well maybe I do since I stayed up super late and woke up at 3:40 something in the afternoon due to staying up late.

 

there re 12 hours left so yo can sleep tho

 

Sadly I have to be gone most of the day so I will have limited time to work. By the time I get home and then finally finish I predict a 4-5 AM time to sleep. I might make a 4th story after this for extra credit. You said if they connect they count as 1 thing, right?

 

yes as long as it is connected

 

Sleep is important man. Definitely more important than 1.5 stacks of le xD. But who am I to judge. Just stay well.

 

Ingame Name: SpriteDew

Special Poem/haiku:

Qira

I'm doing the Hive

I still need that catalyst

but no team succeeds

 

YES!
I finally have a use for my old theory I made a while ago that may or may not be any good!

 

I'm not sure, but I think Turnalix said you have to write like a complete new one, and you can't use a old one. It's on page 5 i think

 

Closing the contest in 1 hour.

 

Closed.
Ill Announce the winner later today, due to my immense sunbrand I cant go on my pc today so please be Patient

 

Winner announced !
Congratulations to @John Smith for winning with this great story !

Part 1

10 years later, a young man by the name of Jack arrives in Nemract, pursuing his dream to become the Knight Of Wynn. But all heroes have to start small, so Jack was heading to Ragni to become a recruit. Jack had grown up in Mage Island, and was the son of the Magic Teacher. His father passed all his knowledge to him, and Jack was a fairly competent Mage. The residents of Mage Island were not happy, though, when Jack decided to head to Wynn Province. Jack’s parents strongly advised against it, saying that the Wynn Province was full of pompous nobles, and money. Mage Island strongly despises any form of currency. There is a saying on Mage Island, which is “Money is the root of all evil”. But Jack had goals, and some overage Mages whose minds were stuck in the past weren’t going to stop him from pursuing his dreams. When Jack arrived in Nemract, the day was nearly done. The sun was making its slow descent down, and the moon was slowly climbing up to the heavens. Jack had brought a few Liquid Emeralds for his journey (Despite the residents of Mage Island hating money, the island happened to be full of it). Jack rented a room for a night or two to plan out his route and buy supplies for Detlas, his next stop in the Wynn Province. And he had a drink while he was at it (Why not?). While Jack was still emptying his first cup of Nemract’s Well-Spoken, world famous Beer, suddenly all the chit-chat in the room quieted down. Jack, wondering what all this was about looked around to see a stout young dwarf armed with a spear, about Jack’s age had entered the Inn. The dwarf scanned the room, and his eyes stopped on Jack. Jack’s heart started pounding, wondering what was to become of him. “You’re a new ‘unn, ain’t ‘cha?” The dwarf grunted out. “Yes, I’m new here, but I’m only staying here temporarily; I’m going to head to-” Before Jack could finish, the dwarf narrowed his eyes and grabbed Jack’s shirt with his free hand. In a murderous tone, the dwarf spat out “I don’t care what your little behind is doing, or where it’s goin’. You ain’t paid your stay in Nemract. One emerald block, right now.” The dwarf let go of his shirt, and held out his hand. Now this obviously meant that the dwarf wanted Jack to place an emerald block on his hand, but Jack, who was annoyed by this dwarf’s attitude towards Jack the Very Competent Mage, grabbed his staff and froze the dwarf with a spell he knew. Jack walked up to the immobile dwarf, grabbed his spear, and threw it out the window. “I’m afraid you haven’t paid your stay either. I’d like one emerald block right now, please. Actually, let’s bump it up to one Liquefied Emerald, for all the trouble you’ve caused here.” Jack undid the spell, and the dwarf fell down, not expecting the sudden mobility. The dwarf frantically searched through his pockets, withdrew a Liquefied Emerald, and practically threw it at Jack. Then he ran away, without a word. “Well! What a night. I think I’m going to get some sleep. First person to take my drink can have the rest of it.” Jack said. Immediately, everyone in the room dived towards Jack’s drink, in the hope of a free drink while Jack walked up the stairs into his room.
Part 2

The next day, Jack was woken up to a knock on his door. He looked out his window. It was sunrise, so Jack got up and answered the door. Who was it? You ask. Well, it was none other than Mister Spear Wielding Dwarf Man. Jack immediately felt many different feelings. Mad, Annoyed, Confused, and Sadistic. Jack clapped his hands together. “Why, what do we have here? Would you like me to pay my stay?” Jack said, sarcasm dripping from his words. Suddenly, Jack heard a voice in his head. No need to be acerbic towards me, my friend. The fellow you met last night was my twin brother. He can be a thieving scumbag sometimes. Oh! I forgot, you must be utterly confused by how I’m in your head. Well you see, I’m mute. But with my muteness came the ability for me to communicate telepathically. I don’t know how it works, but it does so we don’t question it. I came here to apologize to you on behalf of my brother. Again, he can be a thieving scumbag. I’d also like to introduce myself, since I haven’t done that completely yet. My name’s Dan. My brother’s name is Galf. We’re dwarf warriors from Thanos, and we came to Wynn Province to fight against the evil that has supposedly taken over Wynn. The undead walk about everywhere, and we’d like to rid this world of it. But when we arrived, Galf became greedy. Wynn’s wealthiness corrupted him. That’s all I have to say about me, what about you? Jack was taken aback by this friendly dwarf, and decided that Dan was a good person. So Jack introduced himself, and explained how he wanted to become the Knight of Wynn. So you’re a Mage? I see. Would you mind if I tag along your journey? We could make a great team. And don’t worry about my brother, he seems content staying here in Nemract. “Of course! You can come with me. After all, we have the same goal: To fight evil.” For the rest of the day, the two bought a few drinks and planned out their route to Detlas. The next day, they set out for Detlas. While on the path, they talked about their childhoods and conversed about many different topics. But after about two hours, they encountered a church of some sort. It was rotting, with vines all over it, but it seemed to still have people in it. Want to check the church out? “I don’t see a reason not to! After all, what’s the worst that could happen?” Jack said. When the two entered the church, they saw what a church usually looked like, except with vines crawling all over the walls and many bricks missing from the walls as well. People were sitting on the benches, hunched down doing nothing. I don’t think we should be in here. Let’s get out. “Don’t be so boring, let’s go to the front of the church. I’m a Mage, I’ll make sure that no magical hickey-doos happen.” Jack joked. The two walked up to the front of the church, and all of a sudden a wall of light rushed towards them with ghostly noises coming from it. Then everything went black. The two woke up outside of the church, on the path they had come on. I don’t know what that was, but let’s get out of here. “I agree.” Jack said meekly. The two got on their horses, and galloped away from the church as fast as they could. When they were a safe distance away, they were off the path. As they tried to find the path again, Dan said Next time, let’s have some more knowledge of where we’re going than just “What’s the worst that could happen?” Jack looked at Dan sheepishly and said “Well, you have to cut me some slack. My whole life I’ve been on a secluded island full of rich, money-hating magic men. I haven’t dealt with situations like these where I could get hurt.” Well, I suppose that if you lived a life like that, you wouldn’t know what to do in this scenario, but I’m just saying that next time, be more cautious. “Okay, next time I promise that I’ll be careful.” Jack said. That seemed to satisfy Dan. Good.
Part 3

Grian paced about the abyss, waiting for a sign of the two legendary animals. He was going to get Baab's wool, and Mooington's skin. After 10 years, Grian had come back to the abyss and had been camping there for a fortnight, waiting for something to happen. He was beginning to believe that this conquest was useless, and that this was some kind of joke Tarod had been playing on him. Talk up a storm about this "Bob's Tomb", and send him on a wild goose chase. Sheep and Cow chase, if you will. Suddenly, a burst of light appeared above the endless pit of sorrow Grian was standing in front of. In the light, Grian saw Mooington and Baab walking into a strange fog. When they exited the fog their appearances had changed... Mooington had been replaced by a dwarf, and Baab had been replaced by a human. "Well then, forget about Bob's Tomb, damn it all. This is a very interesting finding." Grian muttered to himself. He was going to find that dwarf and that human.

Dan woke up sweating like a horse in Thanos. Oh my lord. "What happened?" Jack asked Dan, slightly concerned. Dan looked around. The sun was about to reach it's zenith. Damn. I was asleep for that long? "Why, you were. I heard you mutter a couple phrases along the lines of 'That little son of a bow Tarod' and 'Bob's Tomb, damn it!' What was that all about?" I had a dream. In the dream, one of the most powerful men in all of Wynn and Gavel was hunting us down. Allow me to elaborate. Grian, was not exactly hunting down us, but the legendary Mooington and Baab. But in the dream, Mooington and Baab were turned into... us. After many "What?'s" and "Holy mother of the mountain's" Jack finally understood. "So you're saying that... I am Baab? And you're... Mooington?" Exactly my point. "But how the hell is that possible? Mooington and Baab only went missing 10 years ago, and I'm 23!" Let me tell you a story. As of right now, I'm 24. But when I was 14, I wasn't mute like I am right now. On my 15th birthday, though, I blacked out suddenly. Then I was mute with this telepathic ability. That story is mostly the reason why I believe this dream is a message to me. Now tell me, did anything similar happen to you? "Well... Yes. On my 14th birthday, I suddenly blacked out as well. When I woke up, I had a few strands of hair that were light blue. I still have them, actually. They've never seem to grow out. See?" Jack pointed to the part of his hair that was blue. Wow. I actually never noticed that. Well, I guess this proves that we're.. Mooington and Baab? I don't know. Let's find a wizard to sort this out for us. I'll look for a wizard in Detlas. "Okay." Said Jack.

Rain The XXII sat down with a sigh. "Hello, I'm Rain The XXII, just call me Rain22 for short. What's your problem?" The people of Wynn have quite strange names, don't they? "Yeah, I've met a Blue King Of The Year 2000. He said to call him The Panda Man for short." Jack muttered. "You do realize I'm aware of your small talk here." Rain22 said. "Oh, my bad. I apologize." Jack said. "Well anyways, the situation on hand is pretty hard to explain. It's a long story, so let's get started with it." Jack explained why they were in Wynn, and Dan's dream. "By Qira's left toe. It's hard to explain what's going on, but basically, Mooington and Baab are trapped in your bodies. They are experiencing everything that you are experiencing, but they have no control over the body. But them being in your body will still have some minor effects on you. Like Dan's muteness, and Jack's blue hair. However, there is a way to separate your souls, but to do that you'll need two other bodies. They will have to be dead, so this two soul in one body thing won't happen again. I wouldn't want to dishonor the great Baab and Mooington, so you would have to ask them first. And yes, there's a way to do that too. In fact, I have it on me right now! It's this necklace, the Planet Healer. Just put it on and you'll be able to communicate with any soul around you." Rain22 handed a necklace with an orb at the bottom to Dan. Dan put it on, and immediately he heard a thunderous YES! SEPARATE OUR SOULS! PLEASE! Dan fell off his chair at the sudden noise. Okay, so you're Mooington, right? Yes, I am. Well, that was simple. Baab can't communicate telepathically. I speak for him too. That was also simple. Dan took off the necklace and handed it back to Rain22. Well, I think they want us to separate our souls. "Okay, you'll need to find two dead bodies then. I'd recommend the Ore Cave, it's pretty close by. There are pleanty of dead miners there. When you find your dead bodies, read this spell. Oh and keep the necklace." Rain22 handed Dan the necklace and a piece of folded up paper. "Thank you for your help. Here are a few Liquid Emeralds for your troubles." Jack gave Rain22 10 Liquid Emeralds. "Well, we're off to ore cave!" Jack said. Baaaab never dies! Wait, what? said Baab.
Grian sat down with Rain22. "So you've seen the dwarf and human?" Grian asked. "Yes, I know where they're headed as well. But this information will cost you. How does 64 Liquid Emeralds sound to you?" Grian snorted. "I threw 64 Liquid Emeralds in Mount Wynn yesterday." Grian handed Rain22 a bag filled with Liquid Emeralds. Rain22 looked up in awe. "They headed to Ore Cave." Rain22 said.

Part 4

While the small party was traveling to the abandoned mineshaft southeast of Detlas, commonly nicknamed The Ore Cave by the residents of Detlas and Ternaves, they got to know each other. It all started when Jack asked "So, Baab. Do all sheep attack people? I heard that in Detlas, there was a group of sheep that kept luring humans into a corner and then jumping on their heads. I think the leader of the sheep was called Igbar Von Squid... Again, a strange name for a sheep." Well, I don't know about most sheep, but I'm quite hostile. People come to Maro Peaks trying to cut off a piece of my beautiful wool. They always end up swimming away as fast as they can, being pursued by the black-wool sheep that live around the peaks. Replied Baab. What are you complaining about? People come to Skein's Island trying to get my skin! That's a deal greater painful than getting your wool cut off.. Mooington snorted. Over the conversation, they all found out that they all loved hummus. Baab also had a fetish for squishing things. It's just so satisfying. Baab was saying, when the Abandoned Mineshaft's' walls came into view. "There it is!" Jack proclaimed. Let's go in said Dan. The Ore Cave was southeast in the Abandoned Mineshaft. When they entered the Ore Cave, the immediate thing that caught their eyes were the Live Ores. The nasty little creatures looked almost exactly like a normal ore found in a mineshaft, except they had dislodged themselves from the wall, and were gathering together and advancing towards Dan and Jack. Quick, the Dead Miners are at the end of the cave! Get there, grab two bodies, and get out! I'll get one body, you get the other. Jack teleported to the end of the cave and looked around, and saw Dead Miners advancing towards him. He saw Dan knock one of the miners over and charge out. Jack froze a random miner, hefted him over his shoulder, and teleported out with him. When he got out, a Live Ore jumped on his foot. Jack panicked, and half hobbled, half ran out of the cave. The Live Ore that had jumped on his foot was pursuing Jack, and Jack tripped over a stone that seemed to be laid on the ground just for the purpose to trip him. Jack struggled to get up as the Live Ore advanced on him. Well, sorry Baab but you're dying with me... Jack squeezed his eyes shut. What? Baab never dies! Then Jack heard a loud bang. He looked up, and saw that Dan had smashed the Ore to pieces. "Oh my lord, thank god you came." Yeah, yeah don't worry about it. Let's get your leg fixed up. Dan cleaned out Jack's wound, and bandaged it up. There we go. "Thanks!" Jack said. "I actually thought I was going to die there." Jack wiped some sweat off of his forehead. Okay, you're still alive. Let's just get into our new bodies. Mooington said, slightly tired. "Okay, okay, where's the spell, where's the spell.." Jack dug through his bag. "There it is!" Jack said. He withdrew a folded up parchment. Jack unfolded the parchment, and read what it said. Jack sighed. "Is this some kind of joke? Look what is says.. It says MEEEEEEOOOOOWWW" As soon as Jack finished his sentence, the skin of the Dead Miners began to turn from green to a shade of beige. Then the miners got up. "Well, I've never been in a human body. It feels strange. I'd assume we're still immortal, so that's nice I guess. Oh, I'm Baab, of course. Mooington still can't talk." Yes, you're still immortal. As long as the soul is immortal, the body doesn't matter. Dan said. Mooington let out a grunt. Then he tried forming words, and said "HUMMUS!" What? "I CAN TALK NOW!" Mooington yelled. Wait does that mean... "...that I can talk?" Dan said, in awe. "We can all talk!" Mooington said. "Yes, yes, you can all talk. That's great and all, but Grian is still hunting us." Jack said. As if on cue, Grian appeared behind them. "Yep, I am." He said. Grian began to advance towards them, then stopped. "Wait.. Who the hell is that?" He said, pointing towards Baab and Mooington. "I'm Baab! How dare you hunt us down. Our owner, Bob will destroy you for this!" Grian smirked. "Hah, you're obviously just a follower of Baab and Mooington willing to sacrifice yourself for them. I'm not buying it. After all, there's only one of you. If you really are Baab, where's-" Grian was cut short by a knife sliding through him. Jack gasped and looked to see who stabbed him, and saw Mooington behind him. "-Mooington?" Mooington said, finishing Grian's sentence. Grian looked up, in shock. "Wha-?" Grian said. "Damn you! Damn Tarod! Damn it-" Then Grian's voice trailed off, and he fell down. "Looks like we didn't need Bob to destroy you.." Mooington spat on Grian's dead corpse.

Dan and Jack got on the cart to Ragni. "Well, I guess this is where we part ways." Jack said to Mooington and Baab. "Yes, we baa-aa-aarely got to know eachother! But I shall bid farewell, and may we meet again." Baab said, waving. And with that, Jack and Dan started up the cart for Ragni with the other recruits.

When Jack and Dan woke up, they got out of the cart. They were late! The Cart Driver greeted them. "Finally you're awake! All the other recruits are already at Ragni. We're sorry we didn't bring you, because we didn't want to wake you up, but fortunately, you're armed. Here's some money to assist you on the path to Ragni."
Epilogue

In the end, the human version of Baab and Mooington became the kings of Troms and Ragni. They put fake copies of themselves in Maro Peaks and Skein's Island so nothing would be suspected. Jack and Dan became Knights of Wynn, and even helped Baab and Mooington get rid of a thieving fake company, WynnExcavation. Jack and Dan went on to conquer more achievements, like defeating Qira, and completing the Tower Of Ascension. Today they are exploring provinces other than Wynn and Gavel, ridding the world of evil.

Thanks everyone for entering,I may do another one of those next time with new rules.

 

HOLY JESUS CHRIST! That is like long as all hell.

 

Gratz @John Smith :D

 

Thanks so much! :D I can't believe I won with all the other great ppl who entered this contest :)

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In total, it probably took me 3 hours to write it all.

 

Just tell me when U can come online

 

Damn man! That was one hell of a great story. Normal me would be complaining how I didn't win, but I don't see how I can compete against that story. Gratz man! You deserve it :)

 

It took me like 10 to do mine ;-; I feel sad now

 

I'm late to the party, RIP.