Comments on Profile Post by TherapueticLiz

It's not bad, but the buildings could use some work (and yes, I know it's not fiished)
I am very sorry if I offended you
1/3

Though if you want me to tell you what I don't like here:

BEFORE YOU READ, THESE ARE JUST MY OPINIONS; PLEASE IGNORE THEM IF YOU DON'T LIKE THEM

-the soulsand; i would have used some other block like brown terracotta, maybe mixed with grey and black terracotta
-the quartz in the first pic is detalied too much
2/3

-the sewers look nice, but you could use normal torches instead of redstone ones and scatter them around more (unless they are needed for a redstone puzzle or something)
-the boss room is a bit too small in my opinion
-it could use some depth
3/3

-the floor is the worst part; redstone lamp isn't that great of a block for building and the colours don't work too well (if the redstone lamps are needed for a puzzle, then I wouln't use quartz for
4/3

-decide in what style you want to make your map (or level) in (modern, futuristic, post-apocalyptic etc.), choose the blocks for that style and build with them (for example: -modern: quartz, sandstone, birch etc.; -rustic: spruce, oak, cobble etc.)
5/3

-also, if you're doing post-apocalyptic, you should ruin the place a little
-the biggest problem is the scale; since the places are small, they look pretty boring and bland (the sewers are pretty ok, though; a lot of them are pretty small), so you should consider making the place bigger
6/3

that about summs it up
just so you know, if any of these points mess up with the redstone, i have no idea what the heck a repeaters does
also, you should take advice from more experienced people and not from me because I'm also a beginner at building
7/3 (i went overboard)

I appreciate your Opinion, and i wont lie, Most of what you say is true, but i plan to stick to 1.10.2 For all of this. I do not intend to go to a later version. Most of the Dungeon was intended to be bigger. But due to time contraints and My lack of motivation.

It ended losing some rooms, Size and overall "look" I can eventually go back. But at the moment. My priority is the Boss Ending sequence, Since you pointed out his room, His room then, the Path to the Settlement, Kimatora City, and then the Ruins.

thank you for not getting mad at me ^_^''
and remember that it's still your choice if you follow these points or not