The read is really good from far away/profile view. The lips/nose could use some anatomy work, but for profile view it looks great. If you would want to fix the anatomy later, just find some front view face reference
Yeah I'll probably polish it later on since this was more of a practice drawing. I really wish profile icons had more resolution though, since some of the anatomy problems you mentioned (specifically the lips) are caused by image downsizing.
I think the "clean and simple" was fine as it was. It was mostly just the mouth and nose anatomy. The mouth looks much better now, but the nose could still use some work.
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