Megaknight's Dungeon Concept

This is a dungeon concept by Megaknight419. I am posting it on his behalf. Any suggestions and opinions are welcome!
-the coordinates should be -493, 36, -5140 the x coordinate is incorrect on the document.

 

ayo how the fuck did you do that

that's cool as fuck

 

fleris boss fleris boss

 

btw please add a poll, there should be an option for it in thread tools

 

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Also just for the slideshow thing itself I already like this.
The dungeon seems pretty short, so it would be a very cool thing for the content team to re-add minidungeons
Although I like the UC gimmick of controlling an army, it doesn't make sense here because the villagers couldn't care less if it's people die or not, as long as it makes money.

 

cool concept why not

 

Wait, you can embed a google doc?

 

To be honest, I'm kinda confused about this lore. So lemme get this straight. Lizanair wanted to reveal Eltom (In the COTL). Because the MH is near, he gets interested in selling "Magma Cubes" and misses his flight to Levtus? The magma cubes then kill him and (for some reason) he gets revived at the Lazuraus Pit by an elf of all people. Ok, so two things:

1. Why does him wanting to reveal Eltom have anything to do with the lore?

2. Why an elf to revive him? Heck, why was he revived in the first place?

Maybe a rework in the lore? Or I'm just being stupid, which is very likely. Also one more thing. The location of the dungeon is in COTL, so how would you do this at lvl 72?

 

As an overall concept it's pretty good.
I think the idea of having Fleris in CotL instead of Molten Heights is a bit weird though.
Also Gavel doesn't have dungeons so it would make more sense to have a raid instead.

 

The dungeon itself seems kind of boring and uncreative. It's literally a mix of reused mechanics from other parts of the game, namely Sand-Swept Tomb, Underworld Crypt, A Journey Beyond, and Undergrowth Ruins. There's really nothing new in it, and the boss mechanics seem uninteresting; it has very few different attacks until the very final phase.

To add to this, some of the reward items are incredibly overpowered even endgame-wise.

 

Though I don't agree with the suggestion itself, I must admit the suggestion is incredibly well-formatted and sets a good standard for dungeon suggestions.

As for changes I'd recommend, I would say:
Change the theme so it makes sense to be in Cinfras, make it correspond with current lore.
Rewrite the lore because it makes zero sense
Tweak the dialogue (the NPC constantly throwing in ''by the way'' isn't good dialogue, Lizanair's name should be introduced mid-sentence)

Also, how did you actually embed the google doc? Just for reference, since I might like to try it sometime

 

I copied the original google document that I was sent and changed a couple settings so it could be viewed by everyone. Then I clicked file up on left hand corner and clicked publish to the web and then one of the options is to embed the google doc. It took me a couple attempts to correctly do it.