World Quest Idea: A Drunken Tale

I've been playing through the game for quite some time now, and a lot of cool quest ideas have come to mind. This one in particular, I think would be a pretty cool idea. Now, I'll write down the quest in a RP-ish sort of fashion. Tell me what you think. Start by picturing this scenario.

You are a lvl 50 Warrior (We'll use a random class for this), wandering through Nesaak's frozen forests, returning to the humble snowy town after a long day fighting the hordes of the corrupt, when you notice a frozen graveyard, with a broken down cabin, in a seemingly barren place in the frozen forests.

You approach the house, in hopes of finding an extra few emeralds for a good pint of Nemract Whiskey, you find a chest (it's an npc this time), and attempt to open it. Just then, you feel a sharp pain, as you were knocked out with a hit to the head.

You wake up tied up (you can't move) with a knife at your throat. Just then, you hear a voice.

???: Who are you!? Another Grave-robber!? Get out of here this instance!

???: What? A soldier you say? Do you really expect me to believe such nonsense!?

???: I know what you are! You're part of the Dogma gang, aren't you!? Because your if so, your boss should be expect a package soon! One with your bloody head in it!

???: Die you dirty bandit!

Suddenly, an explosion is heard outside, catching both of your attentions.

???: What the- more of you!?

???: Damn it, since when do you Grave-Robbers have a mage in your ranks!

???: Argh! I'll deal with you later! Those people need to go first!

As the old man leaves the cabin, you manage to untie yourself and to out to see what's going on. Outside, you see the old man fighting off three bandit looking fellows.

Graverobber 1: Ha! You're outmatched!

???: You simple minded simpletons never learn.

The old man uses a vanish spell, killing the wand wielding bandit in the back.

Graverobber 2: No! They got Radacus!

Graverobber 1: Curses! He was our ride home!

Graverobber 2: Screw this, I'm outta here!

As the two bandits run off, you go and talk to the old man again.

???: Oh, you again?

???: You didn't help your those guys I see. So either you're too scared to move or maybe you're actually right about being a soldier, or at least not with those guys.

???: Who am I you ask? Oh! Me? You haven't heard of ME!? The Great Bauz Kimbley? The mighty warrior of the Ragni armies of old?

Bauz: Well I'm not surprised, my name has long been wiped from the archives. What people call me now is Bauz the coward, or Bauz the Boozed.

Bauz: It wasn't always like this my friend. Come inside, I'll tell you a tale for the ages!

Following Bauz inside, the two of you sit down by a fire place, as he hands you a bottle of sketchy booze.

Bauz: Come on, have a drink, don't be shy.

You drink from the bottle.

Bauz: So, where do we begin? Well, it all started...

Suddenly, the room starts to spin around you. You black out. Then a voice calls to you.

???: General? General wake up!

You wake up in what seems like a barrack.

???: Come on General! Wake up, the corrupt are flooding into the forest! Our blockade won't hold for much longer!

Rufus: What do you mean who am I!? I'm Lieutenant Rufus of the Ragni Militia! Now get up! Our men won't hold for much longer!

As you get up, you run out of the barracks, situated in the outskirts of Neesak, which seems a lot less frozen and more lively. Just then, you follow the path to the blockade, only to be attacked by corrupted soldiers on the way.

Rufus: Oh god, they've already made it through! Get to the blockade and cut off the flow of troops, I'll rally all my men to protect the town! We cannot let a single civilian die!

As you fight your way through the horde of undead soldiers, (lvl 48, 2500 hp) and undead rangers (lvl 47, 1700 hp), you make it to the blockade, which is a wooden wall with a camp on the other side. However, the whole place is destroyed and the wall is gaping open. just then, Rufus arrives.

Rufus: Good good! They've broken through the wall! Hurry, my men can rebuild it, but it will take time! Get on the other side and keep the horde at bay for about 2 minutes!

You get on the other side, where enemies are now coming after both you and the broken down wall. As you fend them off for two minutes however, a loud roar was heard.

Rufus: Oh sweet holy cow what is that!?

???: ROOOARRR!!!

Rufus: A Behemoth! That thing will tear down the wall in a matter of seconds! You must defeat it!

You take on the Behemoth (lvl: 65) (It's a Ravager). It's a melee fighter with charge III, Flamethrower II, Uppercut II, and is pretty fast (HP: 75000/ Dam: 750 neutral). However, upon you are unable to defeat it (A cutscene triggers when it's health drops to zero)

Rufus: It's no use! It's hide is too powerful! We can't beat it!

???: Looks like you could use some help.

A familiar looking face descents down, killing the Behemoth in one hit.

???: Sayonara, you abomination.

Rufus: Did you see that General? That man just killed a Behemoth in one hit!

Soldier: Wait, I've heard of him, he's a powerful warrior that's been getting a lot of wind lately.

???: Hello there! My name is Robert, but many refer to me as Bob. No need to worry, I'll help repel with attack in no time!

Overly excited, you go and talk you your idol.

Bob: So you must be a General Kimbley. Pleasure to meet you.

Rufus, butting in: And you must be Bob, your reputation precedes you.

Bob: No need to thank me. I am honored to fight alongside you. Your general is a mighty powerful commander from what I heard.

Rufus: Indeed he is. But now with you around, we'll have these rotten husks defeated in no time!

Bob: I'm flattered by your confidence in me, but that doesn't mean victory is a guarantee. Hubris is often what kills the greatest warriors.

Soldier: General! Bob! Our scouts, or rather... scout, singular, have returned from their recon mission.

Rufus: Recon mission? That was a week ago! I thought we lost them!

Soldier: From the information we gathered, there is a massive horde heading towards Neesak! Millions of Corrupt, and creatures beyond description. And to make matters worse! They have a leader!

Bob: Bak'al! It must be him.

Soldier: They've set up camp near the outskirts of the portal! There path there are crawling with monsters!

Bob: Then we must plan a coordinated strike! What do you say General? Ready to foil another invasion?

You agree.

Bob: Very well then! We will strike tonight! Get some rest for now.

As you return to your barracks and take a nap however, you were woken up by a suspicious sound. You leave your tent to find everyone, still resting up, as it was near sunset, a few minutes before the attack. you go back to Bob only to find Rufus.

Rufus: Ah there you are General! I really hope this assault will work. Otherwise, Neesak will be done for.

Rufus: All this stress is really getting to me. I know you're my superior and all, but as a pal, can you do me a solid and fetch me a whiskey? The canteen is at the southern side of camp.

As you approach the tent however, you overhear talking coming from another tent.

Scout: Yes master! All is in order, they bought my disguise and they bought my information.

Scout:Soon, when Bob will assault our encampment, I'll use this corruption seed to open a portal square in the middle of town! Warping in half our armies and razing this place of life!

You investigate the tent, only for the scout to run off, as it reveals it's true form, a corrupted.

Nar'bek: Gah! You heard me! I'll have to escape!

As the corrupted escapes the camp, you give chase, only to be stopped by a handful of your men.

Rikter: Woah there General! Where are you going? The assault is about to start!

Damus: Don't tell me you're planning to run away.

Falma: What? Our scout is a corrupt? Is this some sort of joke?

Damus: Yeah man, don't lie to us!

Rikter: If you want to run, it's fine, deep down, we all do.

Damus: Just remember that if you do, you'll be remembered as the cowardly general who fled from battle!

You walk pass them anyways.

Rikter: Then so be it! Coward!

Damus: Yellowbelly!

Falma: Chicken!

As you find your way to a nearby cave, where the red footprints lead to, only to be stopped by Rufus and a handful of his men, around 4.

Rufus: There you are! General, I can't believe you've become such a coward! I trusted you! And you turn your back on us!

Rufus: I remembered back when you would fight till your dying breath! I remember back when you wouldn't ever let the corrupted hurt the innocent!

Rufus: You've changed, General, You've... wait, WHAT IS THAT!!! GAHH!!!

A corrupted soldier emerged from the caved, but Rufus kills it.

Rufus: That monster just came from the cave! How could this be?

Rufus: Our scout was a spy in disguise? And now he's opened a portal that's a mere skip away from Neesak!? This is terrible! We have to warn the other!

Soldier: The others have long departed to fight Bak'al!

Rufus: Curses! Then we won't make it in time! By the time we get to Bob, the corrupt will already have reached Neesak.

Rufus: very well then, even if we are seen as cowards, at least we will have saved the lives of thousands in the process. Are you ready General?

Rufus: Let's kill this spy!

As you enter the cavern, you realize that it's been deformed and twisted by the seed.

Rufus: Hey, is it just me, or is the ground moving?

Suddenly, the floor caves in beneath you, as you are transported to a lower part of the cave. You must now fight through the cave of numerous enemies, corrupted soldiers, rangers, and now with added variants, including heavies (lvl 50/6000 hp/ 300 neutral dam/Warcry) and Assassins (lvl55/1500 hp/ 1000 neutral dam/ multihit I). As well as going through some parkour with archers shooting at you.

However, once you reach Nar'bek, you find the corpse of Rufus and the other soldiers littered across the battlefield.

Nar'Bek: Ah, there you are, let's hope you will put up a better fight as these humans.

You then fight Nar'bek (lvl 80/ hp 90000/ Ranged 7 Knife Spreadshot/ 120 neutral dam per knife/ multihit II, Teleport II, Vanish, Flamethrower III) who summons 5 Parasites (Silverfish/Lvl 60/ HP 750/ 400 neutral dam), as well as resurrects your former allies as 1 corrupted Soldier, Ranger, Heavy, Assassin and Corrupted Rufus (lvl 60/HP 20000/ 500 neutral dam/ charge III, Uppercut), kill him and destroy the portal he created.

You leave, only to find that Bak'al's armies have been defeated, and while the leader escaped, Bob and the other soldiers were victorious. You talk to bob.

Bob: General Kimbley? Where have you been?

Falma: He fled from battle in fear!

Rikter: Yeah! He was too afraid to fight, so he ran away!

Bob: General, is what they are saying true!

Damus: It is!

Rikter: Yeah! Coward!

Everyone: Coward! Coward! Coward!

Suddenly, everything goes black, and you wake up once more.

Bauz: Hey! Wake up! You've been asleep during my whole story!

Bauz: Guess my homemade whiskey is too strong for the common folk.

Bauz: I don't blame you either, it's not like you would have believe any of that nonsense! Those Graverobbers in back then sure didn't buy anything!

Bauz: Can you believe they are supposed to be former soldiers from Ragni's army?! Deserters I tell you!

Bauz: Huh? Bob you say? How did I meet him? The timeline doesn't add up? Hold up, you actually listened to my story?!

Bauz: My god! It's incredible! I've never met anyone who actually listened to my story!

Bauz: What? you don't believe me though? Think I'm just a crazy old man? Ah, so what? Believe what you want to believe.
Bauz: I never had such a good conversation in years!

Bauz: Here, a token of gratitude! Maybe we can meet up some other time, you know, have a chat.

Bauz: Where I got this from? A gift from Bob of course! or is it? huhuhuhu! I'll tell you the story behind that another time...

(Quest Complete)
Reward:
120 000 EXP
1920 Emeralds
General's Trinket (Necklace) (Rare)

General's Trinket Stats
+300 HP
+20% Health Regen
+8% Melee Damage
+3 Strength
+5 Agility
-2 Intelligence
+14% Xp Bonus
+12% Loot Bonus

 

I felt like it was more like reading about a few university dungeons and dragons nerds playing one of their sessions than an actual quest that could be added into Wynn ngl XD.

I'm going to go with neutral on this one

 

I think this could work

 

This would be great! Long quest but good rewards!