Wynncraft:new World Order Part 1

Wynncraft: New World Order

Epic quest

Level:101

Starting npc:

Oni


Starting location

Fruma gate


Oni: you probably don’t remember me.

Oni: we each other before you left.

Oni: look what has happened to you.

Oni:you think your a hero.

Oni: your not the only one.

Oni: its been so long.

Oni: but we fought back without you.

Oni: we have a few inside men but one of them was found recently.

Oni: it was not a pretty sight.

Oni: follow me, I will show you back to the base.

A secret door in the mountains opens up to revile a dark passageway.

Oni: it’s this way.

Go down the passage

You come out the other side into a secret underground city

Oni: welcome to new world city.

Oni: thr33 will want to talk to you.

He leads you through the empty streets to a castle like building.

Oni: just walk on up and talk to thr33. He will explain what all this is.

Oni: I will just what outside.

You walk into a throne room of solid gold

On a silver throne sits a mechanical creature.

It is humanoid with green skin and a vaguely human face with black highlights.

Thr33: hello [playername]

Thr33: it’s been a long time.

Thr33: for [number of in game years since charecter creation] whole years i have waited.

Thr33: now the time has come. We will rebel!

Thr33: the damn froman royalty that has denied us our magic will soon fall.

Thr33:and out of its ashes a new world order!

Members of the order run around preparing for war.

Oni:here take this and buy some good weapons and amor.

You receive 5 oni’s note

It can be traded and the war merchant in the town for:

Fruman rebel leggings

Fruman rebel boots

Fruman rebel chest

Fruman rebel mask

Fruman rebel bow

Fruman rebel dagger

Fruman rebel wand

Fruman rebel spear

Talk to oni

Oni: all ready?

Oni: good lets get this revaluation started.

End part one


(Note: all of the lore behind this and the item stats will be found in later part)

P.S. plz no sue

 

I do not understand anything.
I'm sorry, but it's not very good.

 

Gonna grade this tomorrow... and in all honesty... this already looks like a shipwreck...

 

I've got this one: F

not an F- because at least there's effort and maybe something is salvageable

 

This is basically a wall of quest dialogue with little to no conflict. All you do is talk to this guy and follow him to an android who in turn gives you armor. For a level 101 quest it seems really boring and way too easy, all it really is is a follow quest with hardly any challenge to overcome and if there are mobs present then please state it in the thread. As for the reward, while I don't have any problems with it, for a quest like this that's way too easy it should be left for another part of the quest. Also, what the hell are the ID's of this armor set + set bonus?!?!?

 

NO level 101quest

And don’t name the npc oni cuz confusion

 

Why doesn't he use capital letters?

We [?] each other?

*You're

A new WORLD order? Surely they need to bring down more than Fruma to achieve that. What are their plans for Wynn and Gavel?

You don't get to make the Fruma lore, Grian has already written it. There's probably going to be an update where we can go there at some point.

I think you mean "revolution".

Given that they're basically given away for free here, it will be difficult to make them useful to level 101 players who will already have a good build.

 

Oni is SPECIAL so he does not use caps

 

So is Yahya and he uses caps

 

People always telll me my quests are to abroupt so I did a whole part one on explaintions. Part to is all combat so it balences out

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Yahya is SpEcAiLe

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It’s the same person bro. This was inspired by “the resistance” oni talked of.

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Also why am I the only conspiracy theorist on the forums

 

I can’t take this seriously in any way because of simple grammar and spelling mistakes. Even so the whole concept is bland. No quest should ever be 101, bc that level is an Easter egg and is extremely hard to obtain.

 

The same person as who?
Theres the oni on half moon island might cause confusion

 

Uhm.. I totally dont understand a thing for real..
Anyone agrees with me?

 

Quickgrade - Zero

This isn't even close to good.
The suggestion of a rebellion isn't even that good, it's unoriginal, for the forums, server, and real world. (See - Hunger Games, Divergent, ANY DYSTOPIAN BOOK)

But would we want it?

 

I was thinking that. I can't think of any other npcs called Oni.
And Im pretty sure it's Death Oni on HMI, named after a Japanese water spirit from legend. It had a little pool of water on its head which was the source of its strength. If you got it to bow, the water would pour out and it would be weakened.
(That last part was irrelevant to my point. Oh well.)

 

There are multiple onis on the island

 

Oh. I thought there was only the Death Oni boss, at least, that's the only I could think of. Are the zombies and stuff called Onis or are there other ones other than Death Oni?

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Wait! I remeber now! The npc from Prison Story was called Oni, wasn't he?

 

heck no



Grade: F-

this is just a bad quest
i don't understand a thing you wrote
and they already have things planned for the province, assuming this IS in fact for Fruma
the layout of it is just... just terrible
why would there need to be a part II? this quest is just so short and makes no sense.
i suggest (heh heh) that you read the How to Suggest section on the forums

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we have better builds than this
why would you need oni notes for the armor

 

To all of you confused, I'm pretty sure he's referring to Ooni - the NPC from prison story.

That being said, this is still a terrible suggestion.

 

Ooni
Yes the zombies are called onis