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The Secret War (poor Storytelling Idea)

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by Illuminarchie, Oct 17, 2017.

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Is this stupid?

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  1. Illuminarchie

    Illuminarchie Proud member of Da Formidable Five VIP

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    Many people will agree that Molten Heights and Sky Islands are very underused areas of the amazing MMO RPG that we all love. Now while the creators in all their mysterious fashion are hiding any information on the plans for this place, I suggest that this is the peak between the decay and the light.



    Keep in mind this is a suggestion for a future update not a prediction for a future update.



    This is the idea that there is a growing totalitarian government in Sky Lands are promoting the segregation between the people of Dogovi and the people in Sky Lands. This is due to a secret war that has been going on ever since the decay began. The two ancient leaders of Molten Heights and Sky Lands (Mortem and Vitae) were great enemies stemming from the death of Mortem's farther: Infernum. When Vitae saw the death of his farther she comforted Mortem in a way to manipulate him to make her ever-growing power and kingdom larger. Mortem for a time sided with her, but someone changed that.

    A woman named Pectus arrived and helped Mortem to discover the truth that Vitae's loyal knight: Eques snuck in to the Dogovi palace and killed Infernum. Vitae planned to go and blame the death due to the rapid increase of the decay (which is a conspiracy in its self) and then take advantage of the traumatised king Mortem.

    This set off the secret war, the Molten Heights began militarisation of the land and began a conscription; while the Sky Islands increased the amount of emeralds in the Molten Heights. The Molten Heights once consisted of villagers before dwarves and so they were tempted with greed. The decay hadn't made it to Molten Heights but the citizens were still suffering its effects. Mortem and Pectus saw only violence as a way to topple an empire but Vitae was smart and knew of ancient history, a time when the realms were one.

    Before the destructive realm war we know little about, there were a council where there were a representative from each realm to make decisions on realm politics. There were 8 collaborating realms: Sabulum (Old name for Gavel), The Light Realm, The Darkness Realm, Somnum exterreri (old name for Corkus), Victoria (Old name for Wynn), Novus (Old name for Fruma), Secretum (Old name for Dern) and the Nether Realm. These realms collaborated well until the trickery of Infernum and Coelum. The same Infernum that was killed by Eques; he was newly appointed on the council as a representative of Sabulum and caused the great realm war. Infernum's wife was Coelum and she knew forms of dark magic from many different realms. She created the uncontrollable force of greed that consumed Sabulum (Gavel) and the Darkness Realm. This caused the Dark collision between Sabulum and The Darkness Realm as they fought against the other realms - greed for power. The Light alliance was formed from Novus (Fruma), Somnum exterreri, Victoria and The Light Realm while the others remained neutral. The Leaders of the Light alliance in chronological order were: Nova the Beautiful (a ridiculously powerful human like us), Bob the Pig (an ancestor of the best Bob we all know and love), Troms and Ragni the Great Kings (where the cities got the names from), Gracie the Yellow (traveller of realms and constructor of the tower of amnesia). They stood against the Dark Collision with a war that lasted over 1000 years. Until Infernum's wife, Coelum finally got her power over her husband. This made Infernum greedy as well and he lost control going the Cinfras sun clock to defeat all the leaders in a 5 on 1 battle.

    Where the Cinfras guild hall is now, it was once the great sun clock where the ultimate duel took place. Infernum waited savagely for the arrival of the 5 leaders of the alliance Coelum waited impatiently in the clock unknown to her husband with the birth of her child to be soon at hand. Finally the 4 leaders arrived agreeing they could save more of their men if they fight her themselves. The sun clock had the sun pointing exactly at 9:00 and it was a summer's evenings sunset, illuminating the sky with orange. The leaders stared each other down only to see a platform moving up with a hung leader of the Darkness Realm. Infernum's insanity and greed led him to kill his partner. As the alliance was distracted Infernum moved swiftly and as he was a human mage, he used an advanced meteor spell, engulfing Gracie the yellow in flames.Coming to realisation an ice snake hit Troms rendering him motionless. Ragni charged in rage for his friend aiming to strike a blow with the sword of Victoria - but a teleport blinded the king only for him to be consumed by fire and to death. Unknown to Infernum, Bob the pig was sneaking around the side of the clock tower preparing for a sneak attack. Troms and Nova were bombarding the mad king with spells of light and divinity; to be retaliated with spells of horror and darkness. Bob arose from the behind and struck at Infernum, but an advanced teleportation spell swapped around Troms and Bob, causing the beheading of the second Victoria king.



    2 leaders left and they were injured and running out of potions. The healing magic of the mad king sustained him, it was a lost cause. This was Infernum and Coelum's plan. The clock tower was a mythical circle that harnessed the power of the sun but also the moon, which was almost directly above the circle. Coelum's greed that had accumulated through the cause of the decay (the villager greed) had led her to desire immortality, which would make her a Goddess. The circle needed a sacrifice of 5 noble soldiers. The battle was almost over with Infernum using his new necromancy powers to summon in undead wolves and for them to attack Bob, while he focused his attention on the main threat of Nova. Bob saw the hopelessness and ran, forever scared of the wolves and Infernum. He left his home realm of Somnum exterreri (Corkus) to travel to Wynn; he had many great children who became great warriors (for example: Bob, Bob, Bobby, Bobetta, Bobert, Bobobot and we can't forget Bob). Nova was struggling, her god like magic was failing her. She would have died if, Coelum didn't rise from behind Infernum and stabbed him in the back. Swiftly he bled out as Coelum looked on at Nova with a disgusted face.



    Coelum explained to Nova that while the circle can provide immortality to the user with 5 sacrifices, with a light wizard and a dark wizard combining their powers on a child jut born then the child would become a God or Goddess and would be destined to rule. Nova was sceptical, but knew the magic and understood why Coelum would want to do it and she had just saved her life so she agreed. The moon arose above the clock as the incantation began. The two beautiful ladies prepared for the God as Coelum gave birth to a baby girl, that she called Vitae. The spell began, but Nova didn’t understand – it wasn’t happening as it was supposed to. Coelum had tricked her. With 4 sacrifices of noble blood the spell was a lot stronger as it made Coelum a dark Goddess and Nova a light Goddess.

    Power was rushing through the veins of Nova and Coelum as one laughed maniacally and other wallowing in shame. The baby resting in the centre was receiving the best deal though, her strength increasing in both the light and dark. Nova feared this power, feared the rise of a dark one and the death to all the realms. The only way, was to separate the light and dark realms from the rest – stopping the rise of the ultimate dark power. Like a supernova explosion the light and dark realms as Coelum tried to rush and stop Nova from separating them, but it was too late – the power of light was invading the realms and separating them once and for all.

    In the dying moments of all the realms combined Coelum with her new-found power sent her consciousness into the remaining carcass of Infernum so she could come into this world. So, the 3 goddesses remained in the world, but Infernum (Coelum) was weak without access to the dark realm and fled with her (or is it his?) child Vitae. Being a goddess, Nova couldn’t age and sought solitude for the horrors she witnessed and did not want to be tempted with her new found infinite power.

    Coelum as Infernum taught Vitae the way of darkness, but with both powers in her she saw no need for favouritism. She decided that she would rule and wanted her land to be beautiful like her, as she changed her form to be more of an adult like one, and made sky islands out in the sky. Coelum was disgusted in her lack of faith in mother/farther and swore vengeance against her as Vitae practised both light and dark magic. She created the decay and spread it to molten heights bringing greed to the people there, bringing us to the original story (Ramblings!)

    Mortem and Pectus was fighting a literal God, and her darkness was unstoppable. The villagers went mad with greed and killed each other in desperation for money, those that survived fled leaving Mortem and Pectus hiding within their palace. The palace doors opened and there arrived Vitae ready to kill them, but Coelum came back. Possessing Pectus the entire time she swore revenge again on Vitae and prepared to now kill her. The battle was over fast, with no winner – one quick swipe from each led to them each bleeding to death, it was the end of a long conflict. However Eques was not ready to accept the death of Vitae and planned to continue her wishes. Mortem and Eques both ruled while a secret was continued. The Dwarves moved to the Molten Heights and tension was high for eternity – then you interfere and learn all this.

    This is a very stupid and ridiculous suggestion so you can pretty much ignore it. The grammar and story is terrible and at most an exaggerated fanfic of wynncraft. I don’t need hate comments but I’m gonna get them anyway. Haters Haveth Noeth Soul.
     
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  2. ThomAnn100

    ThomAnn100 I have reached peak intelligence VIP+

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    I'm pretty sure Grian has all of the lore written down.
     
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  3. Illuminarchie

    Illuminarchie Proud member of Da Formidable Five VIP

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    Hey you are totally right there, it was just an idea that will amount to nothing - it took me 5 mins so I don't care ;)
     
  4. Dr Zed

    Dr Zed Famous Adventurer

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    Why did you post this then?
     
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  5. China

    China you used to call me on ur banana VIP+

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    wow 5 minutes for this ur a fast writer gj
     
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    llllllllllllll Famous Adventurer

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    >mentions molten heights
    >molten heights storyline soontm
     
  7. the drink

    the drink the CHAMPION

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    well thought out.

    just
    run on sentences.

    also polish it
    also avoid cliches
    also avoid 30 other things.
     
  8. Lemon

    Lemon Well-Known Adventurer CHAMPION

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    Is that a gravity falls reference I see in the poll?
     
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