The Dark Times Part 1

This scares me more than North Korea.
The poll is biased, the dialouge is crappy, the facts don't add up, the quest remains mostly unexplained, and you think it's a good idea.

 

Another problem...
You want the mobs to have spells that haven't been made yet. (Bash, Uppercut, Ice Snake)

 

Okay this is NOT a fetch quest
This is a quest were you go back in time to fight a badass strong boss called the dark master
Read ALL the post
Did you see the mobs?

 

I never said that it was a fetch quest. Maybe YOU should "read ALL the post".
And he's not badass, he's stupidly strong and overpowered.
The mobs are so cringey.
Just stop.
Also, DO YOU KNOW WHAT THE FUCKING 10CHAR LIMIT IS?? You made a thread about 1000 characters long, then you put "10char lim"
KILL ME.

 

:/

 

before i say the problems with the suggestion, heres a big problem first:
poll is rigged, there's no option for no

ok first off as @Hodsonius said, Awzak tells you you shouldn't mess with time and to go, but if you ignore him you get a better reward. Also what doesn't make sense is that Awzak tells you not to mess with time and leave, but if u do, he will help you AND give you a better reward

nemract isn't known for bread tbh
the quest is simply a fetch quest if you choose to leave
another problem that some1 said is that you could accidently kill awzak with spells, which kills you
speaking of witch why make the dark master loose 50% of his health if awzak is alive, but if awzak dies you lose
theres no point in adding that part because you can't fight without awzak alive...

Next up: mob spells
the mob's spells won't work
selvut previously stated the mobs ai and spells, and that's all they have
each spell with the exception of 3 of them have a stronger form, so no t3 spells
there is a limited amount of spells
There is no Ice snake, meteor II, uppercut, bash (don't think atleast), and a few others you might've listed
you also didn't tell the zombie mage, warrior, assassin, and archer stats

The diolouge is pretty bad
"Oh hi welcome to my house, stranger, we're going to ancient nemract wheather you like it or not!"
"Ok buy me some bread i can obviously get myself and leave even though theres a better reward"
"Ok ty"

Not to mention this can mess up the lore of the game, because if we helped, in reality ancient nemract should not be corrupted.

Here's a way to fix it, first, change bread to potions of drunkness or something related to nemract.
Then instead of leaving the portal a mob attacks it and it get's destroyed, forcing you to fight while awzak repairs the portal, like how the part in One Thousand Meters Under with the bridge works
if he dies, you can't leave BUT there is a way to get out
you fight the enemies like normal and you fight the boss but instead a final corrupted enemy comes (Dark Lord or something) and by the time he spawns, the portal will be ready. The boss will probably be stuck in a barrier for 10 seconds or so, giving you enough time to leave
If awzak dies in the process, the portal won't be finished, and after the 10 seconds the enemy will one shot you.
If the portal is finished, you can leave.
Then after the beast thing destroys the portal with a fireball or something and corrupts the area so it's like the normal ancient nemract (cutscenes)
This is so no one can also leave and doesn't tamper with the timeline, because all the traces of us there are gone.

k you can leave ur suggestion as u want but what will part 2 even be

















also i just realized something, why would awzak some stranger to get bread in an old time BUT he refers it as delicious, so he would've gotten some himself before... why would he even need you?

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it IS if you choose to leave

 

FIX POLL NOA

 

Why is this one even here?

 

This post is the essence of all evil. Add "terrible", "bad" and "sin" on the poll.

 

Thank you for your suggestions I will keep them in mind.
Not "dark lord" dark master
Also part 2 is coming whether you like it or not.

 

no just made a random name because u still fight the dark master but not the lord
just random thing to make a fixed timeline

 

No.
The dark master is the past, future, and present boss of this quest series

 

eh ok
you do you

 

As with EVERY suggestion with mobs ever, you're missing a bjillion stats and I can't be bothered to look up that post by selvut so do it yourself.

 

there still isnt a no option on the poll...

 

FIX POLL NAO OR BAN