World Disorder In Fruma!

You go to a coordinate given by the Quest Book, and then in that area theres a teleporter that tps you to Fruma.


You are being requested to be sent back to Fruma by General Nahtaivel, a recently promoted General by the King himself.

Objective: [Reach Tellgar]

You enter into a world that is at peace..with animals of all kind live in peace, You go towards Tellgar, the first city in Fruma you come across.. where you meet up with people who you knew before you went to Wynn.. one of the residents of Tellgar says:

The road that connects Tellgar and Murlia (Capital City) is dangerous! Roots of Corruption have begun spreading all over the place!

Quest Book Updated: [Talk to Nahtaivel at the city gates]

You started for Murlia until you are faced with level 110 Zombies, with 10k health each, and they run faster than you.

You barely reach Murlia, so tired by the amount of Zombies that followed you all the way there.

[1/4] General Nahtaivel: Ah, recruit! Welcome to Murlia.
[2/4] General Nahtaivel: So sorry we had to call you here..but you see..problems are arising in Fruma!
[3/4] General Nahtaivel: The king is not so well anymore...he got...poisoned...
[4/4] General Nahtaivel: Go meet with the city's priest.. he will tell you everything..

You walk away from Nahtaivel, and he looks at you with a friendly grin.

At the North-east of town there you find the priest.

Quest Book Updated: [Talk to the Priest in Murlia]

[1/6] Priest Mistel: Ah..welcome..recruit.. a long time has been passed since our meeting...
[2/6] Priest Mistel: I have bad news since your travels to Wynn.. our king has been poisoned by a spell..
[3/6] Priest Mistel: This spell was casted on the king was a High-Level one..
[4/6] Priest Mistel: Even a Highly Trained Mage could not cast it.
[5/6] Priest Mistel: The poison spell causes Paralyzing and Headache, so our king was in the bed for a couple of weeks...
[6/6] Priest Mistel: People suspected that the High-end generals and commanders might be part of the plot against the king..including Nahtaivel.

[Quest Book Updated: Talk to Nahtaivel again]

[1/8] General Nahtaivel: Yes, yes, I know..I am suspected to be plotting against the king.
[2/8] General Nahtaivel: I might know who casted the spell on the king...
[3/8] General Nahtaivel: I suspect that the witch that lives north of Murlia has been requested to poison the king.
[4/8] General Nahtaivel: Although she is a witch, she is surprisingly attractive and young.
[5/8] General Nahtaivel: But don't be fooled by her attractiveness..even though I cannot really see you under that armor so I can't really say anything about her.
[6/8] General Nahtaivel: I also suspect the Leviathan to be part of it.
[7/8] General Nahtaivel: Now when you hear a Leviathan you might picture a big tentacle monster, you are correct and deeply mistaken on this one, my friend.
[8/8] General Nahtaivel: The Leviathan is actually the size of a human being, but when he is badly hurt, he will turn into a Giant Squid-like creature. But I'm sure you'll be fine, just keep heading north and you'll find the witch.

[Quest Book Updated: Find the Witch at coords (X Z)]

You head north of Murlia and find a small cabin, you enter and find a young girl cleaning with a broomstick, but the broomstick looks like its floating..along with other objects inside the cabin.

[1/9] Jamethyst: Hi! I'm Jamethyst the witch and welcome to my shop!
[You ask her if she was told to poison the king]
[2/9] Jamethyst: Yes, I have been requested to poison the king.. and I am deeply sorry for all the trouble I caused to him.
[You ask her who told her to poison the king]
[3/9] Jamethyst: He offered alot of emeralds, I just couldn't resist.
[Jamethyst starts to cry, you try to calm her down]
[4/9] Jamethyst: The one who told me to poison the king...was The Leviathan.
[5/9] Jamethyst: He lives in a HUGE cave west of here.
[6/9] Jamethyst: That place is only allowed if you have the Key.
[7/9] Jamethyst: Tell you what give me [2 Sword Blades] from the Zombies around Fruma, and I'll make you a key.
[8/9] Jamethyst: Since the appearance of our first Blood Moon, the zombies started getting stronger at night, and weaker at day, so pick your timing right.
[9/9] Jamethyst: I'll just figure out something in the meantime...

[Quest Book Updated: Obtain 2 Sword Blades]

Zombies are level 110 during the day, and level 125 during the night.
The drop rating for the sword and good loot are less during the day, and more during the night.

You obtain 2 Sword Blades, you go back to Jamethyst.

[1/4] Jamethyst: You got the blades? Awesome!
[2/4] Jamethyst: Now the place is a dungeon, you can only enter with a key, and at the end of the dungeon lives the Leviathan.
[3/4] Jamethyst: I'd recommend buying potions if you haven't already.
[4/4] Jamethyst: And also I may have found a cure to the King's Poison while you were away..good news I guess?

[Quest Book Updated: Go to the Dungeon]
[Obtained 1 Key of Disorder]

You go west of the witch's hut and find the dungeon entrance. You give the Key Collector the key and he lets you in.

???: So you truly have arrived..good. You should have heard who I was by now [Player Name].
Leviathan: Get past my zombies, if you dare, then we shall see the true victor.

Zombies are fixed level 125 with 75k HP, but they move slow. They have a high chance of dropping high tier weps and Mythics.
The boss Leviathan has 250k Total HP. In his Giant form, he has 125k HP. When he has 25k HP left, he will fully regen and will be in Human Form, having 150k HP.

You cut through the ranks of zombies, and when you reach the Leviathan's Door, a cutscene will play showing Nahtaivel floating in the middle of the Leviathan's Lair.

Nahtaivel: Well then, recruit. You have made it. Think for a second, what happens if you turn my name the opposite way? If you just realised that I...am the Leviathan, then you must be more dumb than the king.

Leviathan: The king made a mistake promoting me with the power of calling you,recruits from Wynn.

[Leviathan turns into Giant form]
Leviathan: Now prepare to die.

If you die, you will be sent back to the entrance with the key back in your inventory.

You defeat the Leviathan.
Leviathan: Heheh... you think this is over? This is just the beggining, I will spread the roots of corruption all over Fruma and my army of undead will thrive!

The Leviathan creates a barrier and burrows a way underground, and the dungeon starts collapsing, and you escape just in time.

You complete the quest "Disorder in Fruma!"

Earned 10 LE
Gained access to Fruma (Put it somewhere)

You wake up in Corkus city where a man looks at you.

Hey, wake up [Player Name] You were sleeping for the past 12 hours, what happend?
[You tell the man the story]

All that happend is we found you asleep on the ground, and we dragged you back here.
Maybe you were just dreaming about Fruma? You miss Fruma too much then.

 

damn this is good man +10 support

 

Well now you can vote 10

 

GMs probably have a quest line or something planned for Fruma. People also dislike it when other people make up lore. How does this quest link to any other? If we came from Fruma, surely it would contain strong warriors who could do so. Also it is known that the ruler of Fruma is the ''Queen'', not the king. The idea for a leviathan is alright, but you've played too much borderlands. How are the GM's going to make such a massive monster with only a 2 block high model? I guess it could be an interactive battle, similar to the one in that quartz quest. But overall, this doesn't fit into the lore and doesn't seem that well developed.

 

There is a lot wrong with this quest lore wise and it's a bit sexist:
1. Fruma has a queen, not a king.
2.There is no corruption in Fruma so why would there be zombies?
3. How would Fruma call you back to them?

And now the sexism part. This quests kinda expects you to be male. You should probably remove the attractive witch part.

 

make dark theme friendly plz

 

1. Problem with this quest

I'm going to ignore the quality of this
[Even tho it looks pretty well made]

Main problem: Your writing the Lore of Fruma, naming places in Fruma, none of which have been decided yet

Perhaps wait until after Dern? When we have more info?