World Quest Idea (hopefully Alot Better Then My Other Ideas) - The Organization Of Light

Okay so this quest is a continuation of the quest: "The Realm of Light" Enjoy!
So, first you have to go into a cave in the realm of light. There are many high lvl monsters guarding the cave and in the cave like lvl 97 mobs. BTW the lvl of this quest is 84. If you get past the mobs, you come to this secret camp underground. then, talk to the guy named Arwok. Here is the dialoge:
[1/4] Arwok: Welcome to this secret organization! If you passed the mobs, you are good enough to join.
[2/4] Arwok: Would you like to join? Great! Okay. So, the light guards do not allow us to try and kill the beast of the darkness. We are too "Weak".
[3/4] Arwok: We found a secret passage to the beast, those jerky guards won't even notice!
[4/4] Arwok: Would you like to tag along? Awesome! Enter that cave behind me, that is the secret passage!
Okay so you enter the cave and a wall blocks you exit and the way you are going. More dialoge:
[1/1] Arwok: You really thought i'd let you in that easily? Let me scan you with this spell to check if you will betray us.
Arwok does the spell, and scans you. You are good!
[1/1] Arwok: Okay you have done some things that you weren't suppose to do, like enter that off-limits prison. You are good to go.
The walls go away and you go deeper into the cave. As you go deeper, you see dead bodies everywhere. You finally get to the beast and he knocks you out immediately. You wake up in a prison with glowing-with-energy bars.
[1/2] ???: Of course you, the savior of wynn AND most of gavel, betray us.
A Light guard steps into the light.
[2/2] Light Guard: You are going to stay in here, mister.
So then, you walk to a vine leading up to a vent.
[1/1] ???: Psst, up here! Crawl through the vents to escape!
You climb the vine to the vents, and crawl through. You jump down into another jail cell with the door open! You go through the door and do some parkour to escape the prison. You then have to find the cave again and go back to the camp. You talk to Arwok. Dialouge:
[1/2] Arwok: Okay you tried. Keep training up so you can destroy that beast...
[2/2] Arwok: Well, for the effort, here's a reward.
[Quest Completed: Organization of Light]
[+10000000 EXP]
[+5 LE]
Hope you enjoyed this quest idea! Leave your feedback in the comments! :D

 

.... Uhh.
Try to make quests of the same quality of ingame quests.
And when they're semi storyline quests they need to be even better than that.
Even then quest suggestions almost never get added.

 

Not everyone has to do that quest, so it would be awkward if the player hasn't

All in all, the quest is a bit short.

 

Isn't 10mil xp 10x the hive's xp............................................................................................

 

And also close to 1/13th I think of the total 1-100 XP
That quest needs lower reward

 

This doesn't make snese

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This doesn't make sense

 

This doesn't really make sense. It has no connection to the storyline whatsoever.
It is also a bit short.
Remember to tell the story with gameplay not dialogue. This quest is only dialogue, no actual fun features.
Hope this helped for your future quest ideas!
:)

 

This doesn't really make sense

 

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Let me allow to correct your post.
The thread idea is looking good, but it you don't really put a lot of effort into it.

"Go into the realm of light. There will be cave at the coordinates x y z.
The cave is guarded by high level mobs from 85-90. At the end of the cave
you'll come into a big hall ending with an giant door(As big as the time door).
The door is made of stone and obsidian and signs of corruption are pulling
trough the wooden door. Talk to the NPC called Alvon, who is standing right in
front of the door.

Alvon: STOP right now. Who are you?
Alvon: Hmm... Though you seem like a trustable person I need a proof, that your trustable.
Alvon: Go to Mia and Detlas and talk to her. Tell her I send you with "great Respect".

[Quest started: Organisation of light]​

"Talk to Mia in Detlas located near the identifier"

Mia: Oh. Hello Traveller. Are you looking for something?
Mia: Alvon send you? Did he said "with great respect"?
Mia: He did? Well...
Mia: You know what? Can you please do a favour for me?
Mia: A corrupted Hero named Hagen just died a few months ago.
But somehow his corrupted soul is still living and is telling us bad thing.
Mia: Please get his bones from his tomb, so I can clean his soul.

[Quest Book updated]​

"Get his bones laying in his (small) tomb under the earth. Coordinates x y z and bring them back to Mia"

Mia: Great job.
Mia: Now I finally be able to clean his soul.
Mia: Tell Alvon, that you've done the job "pretty" good.

[Quest Book updated]​

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"Go to Alvon and report to him"

[Quest Book updated]​

Alvon: You're sure she said "pretty"?
Alvon: Well. If this is the case I can now tell you everything.
Alvon: I joined long time ago a secret organisation called "Organisation of light".
Alvon: I send you too Mia, because she is able to look into your heart.
By saying, that you've done a "pretty" good job, it means that you didn't failed the test.
Alvon: For every new recruit it's the same test. Get the bones, so Mia can purifie them.
But the bones are infused with a magic spell, making them so heavy, that only
people with a good heart can pick them up.
Alvon: We are guarding Wynncraft secretively without anyone noticing.
Alvon: Why? Because of the trouble danger can come up with.
You remember the great meteorite that was about to destroy our whole landscape?
No. Because we stopped it. It's better to keep these things in secret, so we can work without any distraction.
Alvon: I was send here to guard this door. Behind this door is the great beast of darkness.
Alvon: He is sleeping since aeons, but it is said, that it will wake up at times of great danger, to give the final hit.
Alvon: We were able to fight it once, when the portal opened, but we lost a lot man. It seems like it's waking up again.
But with you on our side we sure will be able to defeat it.
Alvon: The beast is not fully woken up, but it's somehow in a thing like a trance. He is able to see, feel and even to fight back,
but he can't use his full potential. If you wanna fight him, just go trough the door behind me.

[Quest Book updated]​

"You come into a great circle hall. The beast is standing in the middle now seeing and attacking you. Defeat the beast."

[Quest Book updated]​

Alvon: You defeated him?
Alvon: That, that is unbelievable. Here take this as a sign of our gratitude.

[Received: x x x]​