World Level 88 Quest In Corkus - The Silent Plot

The Silent Plot
Lv. Min: 88
Hard

1) Background of Corkus
2) Introduction to Quest Main Character
3) Quest Details
4) Misc
5) Comment feedback

1) Background of Corkus

First, let me explain what "steam" and “punk” means in steampunk. They can be something a lot different from my idea. But, here is mine.

As of the massive scale industrial standardization needed for a developing province, the youth are expected to work 11 hours a day, 66 hours a week, as a lowest level labor in the factories. There are serious class discrimination out there in this“industrial setting” between upper elite class and labor class.

A monopoly factory leader, Derek, is a psychopath. He forces to implement mechanic brain and limbs on every workers to make them more productive.

As a result, a resentment to embrace individual freedom arises among a group of younger labors. A surge of individualism, anarchy and rebellion is provoked, disaffected by the “truth” taught by the social standard.

Understanding what the youngster needs - self-worth, freedom and respect from others, George offers these young people an excessive power to machinery, weaponry and firearms. George advertises this "the liberty of advancement". They consider themselves an advanced human and have freed from the slavery of the old humankind.

The youths usually target their anger and assault to the monopoly factory leaders. At first, they are up to peaceful protest. But being ignored, it turns afterwards into violence between the youths and the factories or even the riot army.

This forms the gang Langieldu, which is led by George. In old English, Langieldu means “The New Age”.

On the other hand, let’s talk about the material status of Corkus. Just like any other Steampunk Stories, they got to explore the ocean for other colonies. This is because: One, to search for more resources such as coal ; Two, to prove they are stronger than others in order to be a province.

As a result, the relationship between Corkus government and its neighbor - the Pirate Cove, gets a bit sour because they want to colonize them for more land resources for the pride of building a province.

On the other hand, Since the development of Corkus requires excessive amount of coal. They themselves don’t have enough in their own island. Fortunately, they find a nearby coal supply from Canyon of the Lost. Therefore, they are going to sign a contract to have frequent shipment from Theashold or Eltom to Corkus in daily basis by airship or steam ferry.

2) Introduction to Quest Main Character

Veela

Being one of the leader of Langieldu, Veela is actually a woman. She was a labor in a clothing factory. This suggests the rise of female status due to the need of large scale working class under the Corkus industrialization.
Though, sexism exists a lot .
Therefore, Veela is a type of rebellious "punk" woman in such aspect.
who try to prove to others he is a woman, yet far from being weak. She usually wears the mechanic outfit and equip herself with a knife and a one hand sawed-off.

Derek

The psychopathic factory owner who love to treat labors in a very inhuman way. Thus, his factory causes the biggest debate and concern about industrial slavery. He once even turn workers into cyborg or puppet to improve their productivity.

It is obvious that the Langieldu members would hate the Derek's factory chain so much so much. But in this quest, it is a surprise Derek is having a business with this gang, too.

What we know is that, more and more unpleasing bio-robotic experiments is working on under Derek's...
Which kind of resource and help exactly does Derek seek from Langieldu? It is a myth. That’s said, a silent plot.

George

He is the elite engineer, a friend of Elon. But, he is now the boss in Langieldu. He would like to establish alliance with the Pirate Cove to get himself rich.

For your interest, he also actually purchases “hunted-down birdman”from a group of illegal hunters. But what does George need these birdman for? Definitely not to eat! Ummm... Mechahawk... you know....

Elon

He was also one of the fed up labors in Derek’s factory but already quit. Different from other youths, he never join Langieldu. Instead, he is a really positive thinker. He owned a steam transportation factory, started an airship factory himself. On contrary to Derek, he has a good reputation as someone who respects every labor more than himself.

He is always inspired by the bright future by using steam technology to do what others deem impossible, such as steam train running at 100km/h. He is also an airship colonizer and great adventurer who even turn himself into an Iron Man.

Stephenson

The Head Professor of Mechanics. He has received great amount of money and respect both from Elon himself, Corkus and even Llevigar and Eltom for his great engineering project. His wife is currently staying in Corkus while he travels oversea for engineering project contract.

Sheeta
The only daughter of Stephenson. It is inspired by the main character of the Japanese steampunk cartoon Castle in The Sky

Raymond
A shipment supervisor. Employee of Elon.

Ada
An airship construction site supervisor. Employee of Elon.

3) Quest detail

Quest: Talk to Elon in Corkus (can only get exact position after Corkus update)

Pre-Quest Dialogue

[1/2] Elon: This is a... nightmare. A group of rebels now turn up against us.
[2/2] Elon: We must stop them. But I need someone who can withstand some serious
firepower in a battle. I will check out someone who is at least level 88.


Starting Dialogue

[1/6] Elon: Hello adventurer! This is a nightmare. Machinery is being abused by a lot of civilian. Our province is going to be at risk. A group of people called themselves the Langieldu . And they also obtain massive disastrous weaponry.
[2/6] Elon: I believe mechanics is meant to improve our lives, like making lives easier. However, if the technology is abused, the tool will turn against us.
[3/6] Elon: George was my colleague. However, he goes for quick profit. He now works for the pirate and leads the Langieldu.
[4/6] Elon: He uses weapons against the civilians, doing bank heist, stealing property and even hunt down the innocent birds excessively for profit
[5/6] Elon: Can you stealth into their hideout and find out their next threatening plot against our country?
[6/6] Elon: Since there will be the launch of a few big industrial projects, we want to make sure we are safe from the wrong believers.


Post-Dialogue

[1/2] Elon: Thank you for saving my company. Now I can focus on ocean colonization!
[2/2] Elon: Also, be a fan of my next steam railway idea. You can travel from Gaval to Wynn in 30 minutes!

Quest updated: Go to the Langieldu hideout and find some clues about their next terrorism plan

Part 1

Puzzle: this is to bypass the locked doors in certain way. Sometimes parkour is needed since you can only bypass them by backdoor.

And another times, you need to solve a circuit puzzle.
(Hey, community and developer! can you help me to design the puzzle? <3 I personally do not have spare time for being a great puzzle designer. Make this hard and creative please <3 )

[1/11] Derek: The transportation nowadays are getting faster and safer. I afraid our weapon can barely cause a threat to their advanced design.
[2/11] George: No problem, sir. We are going to learn from their prototypes. As once said, you must understand your enemy well to defeat the enemy.
[3/11] George: Accroding to the report, he upcoming shipment s going to transport the coal supply from Canyon of the Lost to Corkus will have one of the largest scale in our history.
[4 / 11] George: Therefore, the first model of prototype AC-88 airship will be used for that shipment order.
[5/11]At the same time, the state-of-the-art BC-88 ship will also cross over the sea from Theashold to Corkus.
[6/11] Derek: So what’s the relevance?
[7/11] Veela: That’s obvious. Once we understand their design, we understand their weakness. On the other hand, we will befenit for the future warcraft project.
[8/11] Veela: We are going to hijack the airship and the ferry in three days.
[9/11] George: How about the train?
[10/11] Veela: Karoc Quarry, there you go. *wink
[11/11] Derek: Hahaha.....

Quest updated: Report back to Elon

Part 2:

[1/3] Elon: Heck, I afraid they are going to target my younger engineer who now travels to Llevigar.
[2/3] Elon: He is Stephenson, a great engineer. He helps the Llvidgar infrastrucutre department on the super train project.
[3/3] Elon: Since he is a valuable expert, the Llvedigar government also offer him a free apartment rental in the castle. Go find if his project is protected.

Quest updated: Find Stephenson in the third floor of the left wing of the Llevigar castle. [-1830, 105, -4491]

Part 3:

[1/8] Sheeta: Dad, can you play Let’s Go Train with me?
[2/8] Stephenson: Sorry, my darling. Daddy need to work now. 3 days, okay?
[3/8]Alright, remember to sleep early tonight. Papa will go to work now.
[4/8] Stephenson: Hey, I guess you are introduced by Elon. Thanks for coming.
[5/8] I am ready to go to the Karoc Quarry. I don’t really think I need a bodyguard. But whatever, I’m really appreciated.
[6/8] Sheeta: What is your name?
[7/8] Sheeta: Oh, [first 4 letters of username] .... is that your name? Hahaha, it is hard to read. By the way, my name is Sheeta.
[8/8] Sheeta: Play with me after you come back, okay?

Quest updated: Go to the [-1906, 77, -4466] to meet Stephenson again. The cart is ready.

Part 4:

(There will be a 2 NPC (villager type) and Stephenson standing) Right click Stephenson.

[1/1]: Bodyguard: There we go. Are you excited?

(Player will be spawned inside. There will also be four carts together. Bodyguard will get in the first car, Stephenson second, player third, another bodguard last)
(Riding for a few seconds, until the train get to some point in the middle. This will happen: )

[1/9]: Guard: Wait, what is that?
[2/9] Guard: A bomb!! push the brake.
[3/9] Guard: Who the heck plant the bomb at the centre of the track?
[4/9] Guard: Who can defuse it?
[5/9] Guard: Definitely not me.
[6/9] Stephenson: I am familiar with this. Let me tackle it. It may takes a few seconds.
(...few seconds later)
[7/9] Stranger: DIIEEE!!!!
[8/9] Guard: They have arrived.
(Near the bomb, the cart stopped, 4 mobs spawn.)
[9/9] Protect the professor!!

Mobs:

Spoiler

Cyborg
Lvl. 86
Health: 4200
Damage: 320
Type: Human with a revolver
Movement: Stay away from target
Attack Type: Ranged (medium speed / 1 bullet)
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

Crawler
Lvl. 87
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Spider jockey
Movement: Move very fast towards target
Attack Type: Melee
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

Metal Overload
Lvl. 90
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Iron golem (looks like this)
Movement: Moveslow towards target
Attack Type: Melee
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

(if 30 seconds are passed after dialogue 5/7, no more mobs will be spawned. After that, If all remaining mobs are also killed: )

[1/5] Stephenson: Okay, let’s go.
[2/5] Guard:There is another bomb again.

(cart stop)

[3/5] Guard: Who the heck again... again... again plant the bomb at the centre of the track?
[4/5] Professor: Okay, okay. I will deal with this.
[5/5] Black Hat leader: Don’t let them get a chance!!!

(mobs spawn)

Mobs:

Spoiler

Big Dog
Lvl. 88
Health: 8000
Damage: 400
Type: Wolf type.
Movement: Move straight towards target
Spell: Leap towards target
Attack Type: Ranged (slow)
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

Crawler
Lvl. 87
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Spider jockey
Movement Move very fast towards target
Attack Type: Melee
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

Metal Overload
Lvl. 90
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Iron golem (looks like this)
Movement: Move straight towards target
Attack Type: Melee
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

(if 40 seconds are passed after dialogue 5/7, no more mobs will be spawned. After that, If all remaining mobs are also killed: )


[1/1] Guard: Okay, this is fixed. Let’s go.
(Get on cart)
Few seconds later, the cart reverse the direction suddenly.

[1/3] Rebel: Haha... you are now trapped.
[2/3] Rebel: I’m here in charge of this.
[3/3] Rebel: Have fun!

the railway then change direction on two-way intersection, cart goes to the last bomb.

Mobs:

Spoiler

Cyborg
Lvl. 88
Health: 4200
Damage: 300
Type: Skeleton archer
AI: Stay away from target
Attack Type: Ranged (very fast)
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

Movement Speed: Slow

Big Dog
Lvl. 88
Health: 8000
Damage: 400
Type: Wolf
Movement: Move straight towards target
Spell: Leap towards target
Attack Type: Ranged (slow)
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

Metal Overload
Lvl. 90
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Iron golem (which looks like this)
Movement: Move straight towards target
Attack Type: Melee / medium speed
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death

(if 40 seconds are passed after dialogue 5/7, no more mobs will be spawned. After that, If all remaining mobs are also killed: )

[1/1] Stranger: Sorry. Time is up!

(The bomb exploded and the cart is destroyed)
[1/9] Stephenson: What should we now?
(A cart appear in the nearby track)
[2/9] Test Engineer: Hey, Professor. How are you today?
I am not sure if this prototype is working perfectly well. It hasn’t been tested thoroughly.
[3 /9] Test Engineer: But seems we can only try this things out. Let’s hope in. They are after us!
[4/9] Test Engineer: This, is the fastest train!
[5/9] Stephenson: Woww......
[6/9] Test Engineer: They are left behind. I think we are safe now.
[7 /9] Test Engineer: Thankfully, this is really incredibly fast.
[8/9] Stephenson : Finally, we have arrived Karoc Quarry, We can now focus on the project.
[9/9] [username], can you also kindly check how is it going on for the air project at Theashold?

Quest updated: Go to Theashold mining headquarter and check out the airship project.

Part 5:

[1/6] Ada: This is an airship that can help us colonize the furthest island.
[2/6] Ada: We are watching out for any terrorist.
[3/6] Ada: Our engineers have spent few days and nights on the project. This will be our biggest novel project through the history.
[4/6] BOOOM**** cannon firing to the construction site.
[5/6] Black hat elite: Now give up on your project. We now taking charge of this.
HORNING SOUND*** Leave.... leave!!!! Leave... !!
[6/6] Engineers screaming in a mess.

Mobs:

Spoiler

Jetpackman
Lvl. 87
Health: 4200
Damage: 300
Type: Human
Movement: jump high / fly, Stay away from target
Attack Type: ranged/ fire / slow
Spawn amount: 2

Mechahawk
Lvl. 88
Health: 2500
Damage: 200
Type: Ghast
AI: Fly, move towards target
Attack Type: Ranged / slow
Spawn amount: 2

Cyborg
Lvl. 88
Health: 4200
Damage: 300
Type: Skeleton archer
AI: Stay away from target
Attack Type: Ranged (very fast)
Spawn rate: 15 seconds after death
Spawn amount: 2

Second wave:

Jetpackman
Lvl. 87
Health: 2000
Damage: 300
Type: Human
Movement: jump high / fly, Stay away from target
Attack Type: ranged/ fire / slow
Spawn amount: 2

Mechahawk
Lvl. 88
Health: 2500
Damage: 200
Type: Ghast
AI: Fly, move towards target
Attack Type: Ranged / slow
Spawn amount: 5

(After killing all)

[1/3] Ada: Thanks, I think we are saved
[2/3] Ada: Why not also check out the shipment by sea. I think the shipment has already just arrived Corkus. But I am sure the captain is already hijacked by the bad guys.
[3/3] Ada: Bust them up before they brings the loots back to their headquarter! Chat with the coal supply shipment contractor there.

Quest updated: Go back to Corkus dock and talk to the shipment contractor

Part 6:

[1/3] Raymond: I am the coal supply shipment contractor. I just got the news the ship is going to be hijacked. I hope the riot army can bust them up.
***HORN SOUND**
[2/3] ***BOOOM BOOM*** Oh my god. They built cannons on the ship!
[3/3] Run away, [username]. Why are you standing still? They got bomb!

Quest updated: Get on the ship and defeat them

Mobs:

Spoiler

Metal Overload
Lvl 90
Health: 6000
Damage: 250
Type: Iron Golem (which looks like this)
Movement: Move straight towards target
Attack Type: Melee / medium speed
Spawn amount: 2

Blade runner
Lvl 94
Health 2000
Damage: 150 (very fast)
Type: Spider jockey
Move extremely fast towards target
Attack type: Double melee attack / very fast
Spawn rate: quick

Mega Dog
Lvl. 94
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Donkey
Movement: Move fast towards target
Attack Type: Melee / medium speed
Spawn amount: 2

(After all are killed)

Quest updated: Report back to Elon.

Part 7:

If interact with Raymond:

[1/1] Thanks for saving me. Report back to Elon now, quick.

If interact with Elon:

[1/2] There are also two leaders in the hideout. Let’s finish them
[2/2] If you cannot get in, try the sewer tunnel just behind me.

Quest updated: Get into the tunnel behind which lead to the Langieldu hideout and kill the leaders.

(When players enter the tunnel)

[1/1] Derek: Oh my god!

(The player has to chase and kill Derek.)
(If the player try to get into the hideout from the usual ladder entrance.

It will say: )

(red warning text)
This door is now been jammed, probably they have been alerted to guard themselves up. Try another way!

mobs:

Spoiler

George (Amount 1)
Lvl 94
Health 30000
Demage: none
AI: Human. Run away very fast from target. Do not attack
Attack type: None


(Meanwhile, mobs will spawn in front of the player until the players have killed the underboss.)

Langieldu Extremist
Lvl 88
Health 1000
Demage: 200
AI: Human. Stand away from target
Attack type: Ranged. One bullet per round (revolver) / medium speed
Spawn rate: fast

(Player have to get into the hideout and find another leader.)

Stronger Mobs inside hideout basement:

Mega Dog
Lvl. 94
Health: 3800
Damage: 200
Type: Donkey
Movement: Move fast towards target
Attack Type: Melee / medium speed
Spawn rate: medium

Blade runner
Lvl 94
Health 2000
Damage: 150 (very fast)
Type: Spider jockey
Move extremely fast towards target
Attack type: Double melee attack / very fast
Spawn rate: quick

Biomechanic
Lvl 98
Health 1000
Range / melee Damage: 100 / 500
Type: Ghast. Move towards target
Attack type: Ranged if in distance: 10 bullets per round / slow
Melee if not in distance / slow
Spawn rate: medium

(Go to the boss office from the basement. The player will see the boss is not there. But only a wooden board: “See you in Stephenson’s place”)


Quest updated: Go back to Llevigar to meet Stephenson [-1906, 77, -4466] again.

Part 8:

[1/5] Sheeta: *crying* wawa.. wawa.
[2/5] Veela: Shutup. I am here for the prototype. Give me it or I will kill your daughter.
[3/5] Guards: Royal Guardian here!!!

(3 defensive level 60 Royal Guardian spawn behind (blue nametag))
(3 yellow tag mob “Gunman” spawned. They kill the Royal guarden in a few shots)

[4/5] Veela: Haha... Golem? Sword? What age are you in now?
[5/5] Veela: *pew, pew, pew* I can kill you with this in one shot.

(Mob becomes Red Tags: )

Mobs:

Spoiler

Augmented Gunner (Amount: 3)
Lvl 91
Health 1000
Demage: 200
AI: Human. Stand away from target
Attack type: Ranged. One bullet per round (revolver)

Elctromehanic (Amount: 1)
Lvl 94
Health 1000
Demage: 400
AI: Blazer type. Stand away from target
Attack type: Ranged (with flaming effect if hit).
Special attack: 5 seconds Stun

[1/13] Veela: Impressive. But is that what you want?
[2/13] Stephenson: Be careful. Do not hit my daughter
[3/13] Veela: Last chance
(Veela Change to red name tag)
(if you attack her. She stop counting)
[4/13] Veela: 10!
[5/13] 9!
[6/13] 8!
[7/13] 7!
[8/13] 6!
[9/13] 5!
[10/13] 4!
[11/13] 3!
[12/13] 2!
[13/13] 1!
(After counting to one, Veela would shoot and kill Sheeta)

Stephenson
is a NPC (cannot be killed)

Sheeta
Lvl 5 (Green name tag, can be killed carelessly)
Health 300
AI: Stay unmoved in a spot

Veela
Health 10000
AI: Initially next to stage. Range attack when player is afar. Melee attack when player is near
She does not follow player. Instead she always move as close as possible to Sheeta
Veela will kill the little girl if you pause attacking Veela for 5 seconds
Special ranged effect: strong knockback + 2 second stun
Special ranged effect: 3 second stun
Movement speed: very fast


Two outcomes of the quest

Case 1: If you accidentally killed the little girl Sheeta in the process of the fight; Or, if you do not initiate the fight within 10 seconds countdown, such that Veela have already killed Sheeta.

Case 2: If you initiate the fight within the countdown and succeed without killing the little girl Sheeta


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Case 1:

When Sheeta die:
[1/1] Stepheson: Nooo!!!!!!


After killing Veela:
[1/3] Stephenson: Get away! I no need your help anymore!
[2/3] Stephenson: I won’t return to Corkus...
[3/3] Stephenson: I will live here with my lovely daughter

Quest updated: report back to Elon

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Case 2:

[1/4] Thank you!!!
[2/4] Get me out please..
[3/4]As a reward, here is what I got.
[4/4] It is a watch. It is also a bracelet. It is also a compass. It is also a bracelet. Whatever you want to call it. Maybe it seems a bit heavy but this toy let me work more productive throughout the day!

Reward given:

Santos Black Skeleton
Legendary Item (bracelet)
Untradeable Item
Lv. Min: 88
Quest Req: The Silent Plot
+ 28% Walk speed
+ 5% Reflection
+ 2% Melee Damage
+ 2% Defense
+10 Intelligence
- 2 Agility
+25% XP Bonus
+35% Loot Bonus

Description: A mechanical watch that can be worn in your wrench, as known as the first “wrench watch”. It looks a bit heavy and dull though, if you don’t mind.


Quest updated: Report back to Elon

Part 9:

Case 1:
[1/12] Where is my fellow engineer Stephenson?
[2/12 I am so sorry to hear that.
[3/12] His daughter is dead and he won’t come back? No!!!
[4/12] I think I should visit him sometimes.
[5/12].... By the way...

+ 7 remaining sentences are the same as below...

Case 2:

[1/7] Elon: Thanks for saving the humanity. The mechanic world is really... a nightmare.
[2/7] Elon: There are more and more abuse of such technology in this homeland. People then use their superficial ability to threaten the peace of our daily life.
[3/7] Elon: The technology is now under strict inspection by the Corkus authority. But the issue doesn’t end here. T
[4/7] Elon: Besides weaponry, here are also experimental project going on about replacing human body with lethal mechanic body part.
[5/7] Elon: There is even rumor that someone cannot control their body part after the left side of his brain is also replaced by mechanics.
[6/7] Elon: It is really a long story. But that is it for today. Here is your reward
[7/7] Elon: Remember, do not try on those stuffs, not even for fun !

Quest Complete
+ 5500000 XP
+ 5 LE
+ Santos Black Skeleton (if completed with case 1)

4) Misc

I notice quests nowadays are too random or inconsistent.
So other than The Silent Plot, we have (not talking about this quest):

Spoiler

Before this quest, there can also be the following quests: ( min. lvl lower than 88):

• A quest about discovering new coal resources from Gaval and colonization in the ocean

• A quest about the dillema of class discrimination and romantic story of Stepheson and his wife (Inspired by Titanic / Adventures With HippieSnuggles)

After this quest, there can also be the following quests: ( min. lvl higher than 88):

• A quest that mention the birdman hunter that have a trade between birdman hunter gang and the Langieldu. And how the birdman are inhumanly treated as mecha-robot to fly the airship and boost the productivity of Derek’s factory.

• Another quest about Derek’s horrifying factory slavery problem and Derek’s secret Lab. And to find out the psychopath Derek and kill him as a final boss. (because he is not yet killed in this suggested The Silent Plot mission)

etc...

Source of Inspiration:

1) Inspired by recent exploration of new Corkus map updates: Steampunk, birdman, illegal hunter, robot are found
2) Inspired to match most of the existing theory, and observation on forum with tag: corkus,
such as a robot being found by 8westernboy8 in https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/a-robot-from-corkus.171178/
3) Inspired by real world 19th Century American and British history and other common Steampunk stories.
4) Inspired by some existing quests and map locations description rom Wynncraft Wiki
5) *The mob "Divided" as a parody of the game Deus Ex: Mankind Divided
* The mob "Blade Runner" as a parody of the movie Blade Runner
*The mob "Rebel" is inspired by the "hacker" in this age
*The mob Mechahawk = Birdman + Cyborg mutation
6) Elon as a parody of Elon Musk
7) The little girl Sheeta is a main character from Japanese steampunk movie Castle in the Sky.

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5) Comment feedback

Please express your opinion why and where this is bad, accepting any insults :)

 

Honestly, I think Corkus suggestions should wait for when it arrives and we truly know it's story and what it's about

 

its good.
but.
quest ideas almost never get implemented.
become a gm.....

 

This is honestly one of the best quest suggestions I've ever seen

 

That' a lot of words there.
I read the general overview and it already sounds good.

 

Thanks for your support!

I guess some GMs do come on forum and have a look to get inspired, though they seldom copy the whole thing.
They should have their own very creative thought as a creative person. Whether a quest is favorable or not is very subjective.
Such that every GM would like to put different thing in.

Therefore, this is just a free idea for GM to learn from, copy, blend or modify,
it is great just to copy only a part, when they find a part of story, mobs or dialogue looks good.
They can even mix and match, and adding their own idea to create something new.

In other words, general suggestion can just be reference or inspiration, not a "hard proposal to be elected".
GM teams will then still learn something new and thank you even if it is not implemented.

 

Great idea!
The reward is really OP
Wear two, and you get
+ 56% Walk speed
+ 10% Reflection
+ 4% Melee Damage
+ 4% Defense
+20 Intelligence
- 4 Agility
+50% XP Bonus
+70% Loot Bonus

In only two bracelets. It needs more negative characteristics, either take away some of the walkspeed, loot bonus, and xp bonus, or add big negatives.

 

This is a really well thought out quest!!!
Though is english your native language? I always find this type of error

[1/6] Elon: Hello adventurer! This is a nightmare. Machinery is being abused by a lot of civilian(s). Our province is going to be at risk. A group of people called themselves the Langieldu . And they also obtain massive disastrous weaponry. Could be worded better, And they obtain? could be worded better
[2/6] Elon: I believe mechanics is meant to improve our lives, like making lives easier. However, if the technology is abused, the tool will turn against us.
[3/6] Elon: George was my colleague. However, he Specify? Did he change? Or was he always greedy goes for quick profit. He now works for the pirate and leads the Langieldu.
[4/6] Elon: He uses weapons against the civilians, doing bank heist(s), stealing property and even hunt down the innocent birds excessively for profit.
[5/6] Elon: Can you stealth Better word: Sneak? into their hideout and find out their next threatening plot against our country?
[6/6] Elon: Since there will be the launch of a few big industrial projects, we want to make sure we are safe from the wrong believers. Bit unclear what this means, is it that they are working on some industrial projects that can threaten Corkus?


Sorry to be so nitpicky though!



Though this is an AMAZING detailed quest :D

 

Im pretty sure Corkus is supposed to be a high level area for like 90-100 players. Still a good quest tho

 

It's 80-100.

 

you're both off by 5
it's 85-100

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I didn't know it was possible to wear two bracelets

 

Grian did originally say 85+, but he corrected himself to 80+ later in the video. The first quest be be level 81 or 82, but either way, this quest is intended for 88, so it's fine :D

 

Sorry, thinking about wrong thing, still op though.

 

Very clever quest, fair play.