A Class/character Of A Story - Nemesis

So after the warrior mastery idea has kinda been a failure,I decided to simply write out whatever I like,but instead of making it like a class suggestion,I'm just taking my time writing this and add some story elements to it. It would still be kinda a class but…with a bit more story feel. Also,imma make this thread simple and clean,with just a little bit of colour changing.
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Nemesis

The hateful,the vengeance,the symbol of revenge,the original name of her was unknown. She was born in a tiny house of a city that no longer exists. Her childhood were nothing,but torment and misery. She had no real family,as her mum and dad both died to war,and she was adopted by a cruel,cold-hearted family,who adopt children to only preform experiments for their witchery. It was a painful,disturbing,and despair childhood of her. The dark power flowing through her veins everyday has started to corrupt her mind,ultimately making her a mind-twisted monster of vengeance and hate. One night,when all her families are sleeping,she broke out the house,leaving behind nothing but 6 twisted,severed corpses with absolute fear on their face. Since then,the rumour of the Vengeful Nemesis begins to spread through towns and towns. She is one with the shadow,the unseen predator that strikes the prey when they're unaware. However,the shadows of the night does not conceal the anger and rage within her blood red eyes.​

Weapon : Dual Claws
Discription :

Tormented,discarded and angered,the Nemesis is a melee berserker that converts taken damage into her own damage. Her abilities reflects her own rage. She can also be played as a nimble tank with distracting and highly offensive abilities. With furious attacks and provoking abilities,she is dangerous to both encounter and use​

Play style : Brawler,Flanker and possibly an Off-Tank
Armor : 120% (this is to compensate her really bad range)
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Passive
Vengeance

You receive speed,strength and haste as you looses health,the effects would grow stronger and stronger as you take even more damage. After 7 seconds of not taking damage,this ability would reset itself​

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Spell 1 :
Medusa's Scream

Nemesis lets out a terrifying cry of her rage,terrifying enemies and prevents them from moving for 4 seconds
Range : 4-block radius
Mana cost : 5 mana​

Tier II :
Flashback

Nemesis would flashback to her childhood,filling her with rage,receiving strength and speed II
Range : 4-block radius
Duration : 8 seconds
Mana cost : 8 mana​

Tier III :
Rising Fury

After casting the spell,nearby enemies would start to stack up their damage at a rate of 5% per second,cast the spell again to stack the damage up even more. Maximum of +300% damage can be stacked
Range : 8-block radius
Duration : 12 seconds
Mana cost : 8 mana
(This pairs well with her passive)​

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Spell 2 :
Pneumatic Drift

Nemesis dashes through the air like a gust of wind,confusing enemies and quickly closing in to surprise them
Range : 11 blocks
Mana cost : 3 mana
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Tier II :
Cyclone

Nemesis surges nearby enemies into her with powerful wind while dashing through the air
Range : 12 blocks
Mana cost : 3 mana
(When you're travelling through the air,you would pull all enemies within a 4x4 area into you,but they would receive a 1 second stun after being pulled towards you so that you don't get hit immediately after landing on the surface)
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Tier III :
Furious Strike

Unleash multiple claw strikes while dashing through the air
Range : 12 blocks
Hits : 7
Damage : 35% per hit
Mana cost : 4 mana
Thunder dmg +10%​

(If the player touches the ground surface before the striking animation has ended,it would simply cancel and ultimately deal less damage)
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Spell 3 :
Revenge

Nemesis surrounds herself with a fiery ring of fury,reducing all damage taken and store up 30% of the taken damage for the next attack. 5000 damage can be stored at maximum
Duration : 6 seconds
Damage reduction : 20%
Mana cost : 6 mana​

Tier II :
Provoke

Temporarily draw all attention of nearby enemies while the spell is active
Range : 5- block radius
Duration : 9 seconds
Damage reduction : 25%
Mana cost : 6 mana​

Tier III :
Curse

Channel 70% of taken damage of nearby allies to you
Range : 5-block radius
Duration : 12 seconds
Damage reduction : 25%
Mana cost : 7 mana​

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Spell 4 :
Twinfang Furia

Nemesis unleashes a pair of huge claws and becomes a monster of pure rage,ripping all enemies she sees into million pieces
Mana cost : 3 mana per second​

Tier II :
Dreadful Rage

Each 5 enemies you kill with Twinfang Furia would increase your attack speed by one tier
Mana cost : 2 mana per second​

Tier III :
Unstoppable Fury

Immune to knockback,stuns and slowness effects when having this spell active
Mana cost : 2 mana per second​

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Twinfang Furia

After casting the Twinfang Furia spell,Nemesis would temporarily equip herself with a pair of claws called Twinfang Furia. The stats of this pair of claws would change according to your level,not the tier of the spell​

Twinfang Furia
Fast attack speed
Neutral damage : 97 - 124 (+4/5 for each level up)
Lvl min : (Players current level)

Tier I :
+20 Strength
+50% Walkspeed
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Tier II :
+35 Strength
+60% Walkspeed
+10/4s Life Steal
-60% Spell dmg
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Tier III :
+50 Strength
+75% Walkspeed
+10/2s Life Steal
-95% Spell dmg
-60% All elemental defence
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Visuals and sounds? Maybe later
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What a lovely berserker lady that comes at you fearlessly and would probably just tear you apart with her twin Furia

 

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Stories with a bit of "class". *Ba dum* (k just kidding pls dont hurt me, nice idea though xD)

 

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