World Out Of Zhight (level 59 Quest)

Okay so this is my first suggestion, so I would LOVE feedback and constructive criticism. Here we go!
This quest is mostly puzzles, by the way.

I attached where the quest takes place. (The red dots are NPCs)

You must have completed Zhight Island first.
Out of Zhight
Level 59 Quest (Medium)
Rewards:
175000 EXP
1024 Emeralds
24 Zhight Money

Pre-Quest:
Zag: Who are you?
Manash: Be gone.

This quest starts at Zhight Island. (-407 -2809)
Zag (1/5): Who are you?
Zag (2/5): Oh, I know you! You helped bring back the supplies!
Zag (3/5): So, I saw this weird thing yesterday...
Zag (4/5): I was outside, having a breath of fresh air, and I saw something weird.
Zag (5/5): There was this... red... cloud thingy on the horizon. A bit east of here. could you go check it out?

If talked to again:
Zag: Finished yet?

Quest book updated; Go check out the weird happening to the east of Zhight Island.

(Hint: It's at -851 -2830)

Step 1: Find Manash.
Manash (1/6): Huh?
Manash (2/6): What? A red cloud? Well, I guess it was a bit obvious...
Manash (3/6): I am a self-taught wizard. I was practicing a spell.
Manash (4/6): It was to make it rain and cause flowers to bloom out of the soil.
Manash (5/6): But instead, it rained cow blood.
Manash (6/6): The spell was expensive to make, can you help me get the ingredients? I wrote them down in your book.

If talked to again:
Manash: Have you got the stuff yet?

Quest book updated; Find the Old Pair of Socks, Smelly Kelp, Zhight Money, and Vial of Cow Blood.

Step 2: Find the ingredients

Old Pair of Socks:
To get the socks, you must go into the house (Which is changed to allow the puzzles) and open the bedroom door. There is a sign outside the bedroom that says 'Morning Chores: Weigh down the magic carpet'. There will be a magic carpet outside, with pressure plates on each corner (To get on the carpet, go on the eastern buildings to get on the trees, and then parkour over to the carpet and on to it). Put anything on the pressure plates to open the door to the bedroom, where you will find:

Pair of Old Socks (Mini-Boss) (Leather Boots)
6000 Health
250 Damage
Charge Spell
Drops: Pair of Old Socks (100%)

there we go! One ingredient. Next one!

Smelly Kelp:
The kelp is quite hard to get. To get the kelp, there is a sign on the northern beach that says 'Jump in and swim!'. The kelp is in a hole. When you go in the hole, it starts a minigame.
You will be in a giant hole with kelp going from side to side of it. If you touch the kelp, you go back to the top. You just have to get to the bottom. It is like a dropper, so don't hit the kelp, cause it will HURT! You will be dropping through the air, so be careful about hitting things. Once you get to the bottom, you will find:

Smelly Kelp (Passive) (Prismarine Shard)
1 Health
0 Damage
Drops: Smelly Kelp (100%)

Two ingredients! Now the final one!

Vial of Cow Blood:
The cow blood is sort of easy to get. There is a sign on the eastern building that says 'If you're in need, look in the trees.'. If you go up the building, you can parkour onto the trees, where you will find...

Don't forget the Zhight Money! It just requires a trip back to Zhight (Or no trip if you already have some)

Tree Cow (Mini-Boss) (Cow)
8000 Health
200 Damage
Immobile; Shoots Vials of Cow Blood at you.
Drops: Vial of Cow Blood (100%)

Finally! All the ingredients.

Step 3: Return to Manash.

Manash (1/3): Thank you! Now we can perform the spell!
Manash (2/3): Ooga booga dooga fooga...
Manash (3/3): Uh oh. Somethings gone wrong.
The area around you turns red and flattens out.

You are now in a red, rectangular area. In front of you is...

Angry Tree Cow Spirit (Cow)
??? Health
250 Damage
Charge Spell

What you have to do is dodge him. He is invincible to all attacks, so you have to kill him another way... All around the sides of the arena are buttons. When pressed, they will create a long line of fire in front of them. When the Cow Spirit walks Into this, he will be hurt. Do this 20 times to kill him.

After you kill the cow, you are teleported to a long, red hallway.

(Angry Tree Cow Spirit: ATCS)
ATCS: HOW DARE YOU!!
ATCS: YOU WIL DIE!

You are now in a puzzle. To get out, you need to: There will be dark red, dented patches. There are 3 on each side. Go to the first one on the left, then kill the 1st Enemy (Will get back to these later). Go back and go to the second on the right, then kill the 2nd Enemy. Now, go to the third one on the right, and put the two items (Bloody Feather and Disgusting Callous) you got from them in a hopper in front of you, then you can leave through a door.

1st Enemy: Pustule Parrot (A Feather)
1 Health
0 Damage
Drops: Bloody Feather
2nd Enemy: Callous Creature (Netherrack)
1 Health
0 Damage
Drops: Disgusting Callous

Manash (1/4): What was that?!
Manash (2/4): Oh... I was using the 'Angry Cow Rain' Spell.
Manash (3/4): Oops! Well, thanks for the help.
Manash (4/4): Is there anything you need to do now?

Repeats last line if spoke to again.

Quest book updated; Return to Zag.

Zag (1/5): Huh? What was it?
Zag (2/5): Somebody was using a spell?
Zag (3/5): That is an extremely specific name.
Zag (4/5): Well, thanks for telling me!
Zag (5/5): I must be getting on now.

If talked to after quest:

Manash: Welcome back, friend!
Zag: Nice to see you again!

---
So there you go! Hope you enjoed it, and please leave feedback and constructive criticism below! Thanks!

 

Seems good in concept, I like the fact that you incorporate mini bosses into a fetch section, makes it a lot more interesting than, say, Temple of Legends.

 

Well, I think the XP and rewards are low for a level 57 quest.

But I do like that it's giving Zhight Island more quests! +1

 

Thanks! I realised it was turning into a fetch quest, so I added some more combat in.

The EXP in only 5000 more than The Passage, but I guess I will buff it up. But yea, there needs to be a bigger emerald reward. Zhight Island is an area I like a lot, which is why the Quest has to do with it.

 

8 Zhight money is 1 LE, because 1 ZM = 8 EB (I think,) so maybe you just wanna have maybe 1-3 ZM and no emeralds?

 

You cannot convert Zhight Money back into emeralds, and the only use of Zhight Money is Wisdom Potions, so....

 

I thought you could... are you sure?

 

I know it seems like a strange suggestion, but there needs to be a level 59 quest, could you adapt it a bit to make it for that level?

 

i really like that pun

 

I only recently beat the quest, and I checked the money exchange dude. You can't exchange zhight money back.

Hmm... Maybe. I will see if other people want that. (If you do person reading this, please tell)

Umm... Thanks?

 

Tbh the grind at Lvl 56-62 is annoying especially in my opinion for first time players as it is longer than any other grind up to these lvls and if I'm right you practically have to grind 3 lvls worth of xp from 56 to 62 due to lack of quest, eg no Lvl 59 quest, passage only gives half a Lvl, pirate Island (Idk what its called but where you get the map and then get the tresure) also only gives 6 bars. So a Lvl 59 quest would be good. If you don't want to adapt it np it's your idea not mine

 

This is decent!
If you'd like I'll add it into my planned storyline

 

Here's my criticism:
-If you want it to be on Zhight Island (and also have that in the quest name) give it a reason to ben there. This quest could be literally anywhere on the map.
-Not everything has to have a boss. Maybe replace some of the item gathering with puzzles or such.
-Mobs can't use Smoke Bomb.
-Your puzzles and placement don't make much sense. Why is there a mushroom underwater? Why does the "yellow needs to be restrained"?
-What's the explanation for this weird wizard guy in the middle of the ocean summoning cow blood or whatever?

 

Ok! I will update it later on today.

Thanks!

1. The reason I called it that is the island that this takes place on is just out of Zhight.
2. I know no mobs have used it. I was using that cause I couldn't find a spell with a similar effect.
3.Umm.. dunno? I might change it later. Maybe it's a magical aquatic mushroom? And it was talking about weighing down the carpet, but yes. I need to change that. Any ideas? Cause I am stuck.
4. He was supposed to be summoning rain, but used the wrong spell. That was in the dialogue.