World Quest Idea-rebuilding The Portal

Hello, I have a quest idea. But first-feel free to tell me that it is completely bad, if it is. So, this is like a Part 2 of Fantastic Voyage.

Quest Book:
Rebuilding the Portal
Status: Not Started
Lvl Min: 93
You can feel a dark aura coming from Abandoned Mines. You should investigate.


So, now...here is the quest.
HOW TO START IT: Go to abandoned mines and right click on the pickaxe.
Text in Chat: You start to feel like you are withering away...being consumed by darkness...You should go investigate why. *Using the pickaxe you mine through the stone to find a corrupted area*
Stage 2: Talk to Dark Relend.
Dialog:
[1/2] Dark Relend: Save yourself...young man...
[2/2] Dark Relend: NO! Bring me [3 Dark Shards], we must rebuild the portal!
Stage 3: Get 3 Dark Shards from Dern Minions on Dead Island, and bring them back to Dark Relend.
When you bring him [3 Dark Shards]...
Dialog:
[1/3] Dark Relend: Ah, yes...[3 Dark Shards]...come to papa...
[2/3] Dark Relend: Master! I give you an offering!
[3/3] Yes! YES! The Portal has been rebuilt!! HA HA HA HA HA!
Text in Chat: You should probably go see what is inside the portal.
Stage 4: Go into the portal.
After you enter the portal...
Dialog:
[1/3] Dark Relend: Splendid! Now...take this last Dark Shard...and let the master consume it!
[2/3] Dark Relend: Then, he shall open the door to the REAL Realm! Not just the tunnels that we are in now.
[3/3] Dark Relend: MASTER! We have an offering!
Text in chat:
Your Dark Shard was consumed by something...but what? Well, a door opened, you should probably check it out.
[1/2] Dark Relend: Ah, here we are! Welcome to the REAL Realm! Have fun trying to survive!!
[2/2] Dark Guard Golems: A Human! Get em' boys!
Stage 5: Escape the Guards.
[1/2] ???: Hmm...you must be very strong to have escaped those Guards.
[2/2] ???: Me and my people really do wish no harm. Go into that portal I have opened for you, it shall take you back to your own realm.
Stage 6: Go into the portal and return to your own realm.
Once you go into the portal....

[QUEST COMPLETED: Rebuilding the Portal!]
+900000 Experience Points
+20362 Emeralds




Hope you like this idea!

PEACE
-TyTy0427

 

Seems a bit plain and lacking common sense.

The LE reward is way too much.

1. Give things a bit more reason instead of "you should probably check it out" just cause.

2. This might conflict with the lore since this is a stand-alone quest and would have no follow-up with the dark lord.

3. Quest is too easy and simple. From what I can tell, it is:
-Get 3 shards from mobs
-Run from guards (wynn D copy paste)

 

i would appreciate if you could change the text colour of this part to none instead of white

to the quest:
this sounds pretty booring and more like a filler quest where you go from point a to b, kill some mobs and from there on only talk and get a shit ton of emeralds and xp.
this isnt really a challenge where you need to think or try around, it's more of a quest that a brainless person could do.

 

Okay, the for the feedback! I will definatley use this feedback for future quest ideas!!

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@Glitchedslayer did you like the idea tho? Cuz I did...if you liked the IDEA then, using the feedback you gave, I could make a new thread, which is a much more improved version of the quest.

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Is the like saying that you liked the idea? XD

 

Get a dark theme like the rest of us.
Embrace the dark side.
We have cookies!

 

Alright

A level 93 quest in abandoned mines

Stupid character names and bad silly spelling

Go mine in the mines
Go to dead island
Go back

This makes no sence with the lore

Somehow the boss considers you are strong by escaping some guards

'His people wish no harm'
Its fucking dern how do they wish no harm

Xp reward very low
Emerald reward very high

Why dont you do research and learn how characters spell in an mmorpg

You're probably the only one who voted its good could be better

I mean look at your poll

K im done now

 

i hate the dark theme

 

kk luke skywalker.