Quest: The Fake Protector (intro To Altars)

Remember when you first did 'The passage' yet you didnt know what the altar does?
Well this quest is to introduce you to altars!


Difficulty: Easy
Level: 24
Coords:
X:413
Z:-2855
1. Talk to Zygeld in the Durum isles
[If level 23 or lower: 1/2] Good day, i need some help but you are too weak!
[If level 23 or lower: 2/2] Come back when you are level 24.

If level requirement.
[Zygeld 1/5] Good day, i need some help.
[Zygeld 2/5] There is a crazy cow on this island, he calls himself the 'Durum Protector' but he is really a fake
[Zygeld 3/5] And i need help to kill it, you see?
[Zygeld 4/5] Go to my friend, Behine and he will help
[Zygeld 5/5] Best of luck to you!

[Quest Book updated]
[Talk to Behine at 509, -2930]
[Behine before quest] Im studying this altar on this island at the moment...
[Behine 1/3] Im studying this altar at the moment, wait did Zygeld tell you to come here?
[Behine 2/3] Oh i'm sorry! I was studying this Altar on this island, it is in the barn
[Behine 3/3] Get [20 Leather] and put it into the altar, the Fake protector shouldn't be THAT strong due to it being fake and all. Get the

[Quest Book updated]
[Go find the altar, put 20 leather in it]

[Quest Book updated]
[Kill the 'Durum Protector']
The Durum Protector drops now:
Fake Protector Dust {Quest item}

[Quest Book Updated]
[Show Zygeld the dust]
[Zygeld 1/2] You got the dust?! Finally! We are rid of the protector
[Zygeld 2/2] Here, take some of my savings, it isnt much, but it will do.

[Quest complete!]
Exp:4045
Emeralds: 64 emeralds

So there we go!
The introduction to altars in quest format.

 

Use correct grammar please. Also you should tell the player to search around for numbers and what items are needed, as boss altars require a bit of searching to find the materials and what materials.

 

[1/1] Thaum: It looks better when you have coloured text

 

It needs more/better text in two areas. 1st for when your to low lvl it should say something more than your to weak, it just doesn't sound normal. 2nd it needs more explanation and detail during the quest.

 

1. Use Colored Text
2. I thought the reworked "The Passage" quest in Troms was an intro to boss altars..
3. Its not a bad quest, but I don't think a level 24 player would have the resources to use beat a boss altar

 

Add some stats for the boss/minions (it may or may not spawn)

Change difficulty to medium and make the boss difficult enough so that it is difficult to solo it, but two people can take it down easily.
Say something about "recommend a friend" somewhere in the quest, since boss altars are challenges that are meant for small groups of people (although it is possible to solo the altars)

Encourages parties and cooperation.

 

The Passage already introduces you to Boss Altars.

 

This

 

And with much better lore/backstory may I add.