The Rift (idea Retired, Moving On)

So some of you might know me for making a class ideas, others might know me from other games and stuff. However, in Wynn, I haven't made a quest idea, so I decided to put my knowledge to use.

Warning: This story will require a lot of building and a small map expansion/off map areas as well
Also I need to format it soon, and to come up with names
After the gameplay update, I'm going to try and explore the end game areas so I can give more accurate information
NOTE: I will work on the details once I type up everything (going to take a long while though)

So on to the actual story
This storyline starts off with a mysterious energy signature that has been causing various seismic activity, and the mages (of wynn) has concluded that the disruption is coming from a portal underground. The portal is a gateway that has been spawning demons. Now a coalition of forces from Gavel and Wynn have gathered and plan to enter the portal, in order to set up a barrier on the other side to prevent demons from enterring Gavel.

Quest 1: Last Hope
Level requirement: 99
(Unlocks the next quest)

General Description: You have been asked by the coalition forces to gather materials to help the warfront.
Setting:
An underground camp (with tents, very bad wood wall, and maybe simple and small buildings) near the underground area with a lot of lava (molten heights? I haven't been there much)
The camp is located at the start of a massive cavern, which have some regular molten height mobs around the outside of the camp.
Some archers are located on the walls, and a couple melee gaurds roam the inside of the camp.
The camp shows visible signs of wear and tear, with several tents having holes/on fire
Some random villagers named "injured solider" walk around the camp, like town citizens

Speak to X (haven't thought of a name)

Before Level 99:
[1/1] X: Adventurer, I don't think you have the capabilities to help us fight this desperate war. Come back at Level 99 and maybe you can be of more use

Stage 1:
[1/7] X: Hail Adventurer, we are in need of desperate help
[2/7] X: Recently, a portal opened up and started spewing demons into our world
[3/7] X: A combined force of soliders from Wynn and Gavel have gathered to set up a fort in order to stop the flow of monsters entering this world
[4/7] X: Our garrison on the other side of the portal has been fighting against demons on the other side of this portal for a while now
[5/7] X: However, these pesky fire monsters have raided our supply caravans and now we have no supplies to send to the garrison.
[6/7] X: Adventurer, if you bring materials to us, we can put together a quick supply package, as they are expecting their shippment very soon.
[7/7] X: Bring me 16 Iron Bars from the Grolliers, 16 wood from the Wood Sprites, 16 String from the Spiders in Wynn, and 16 Unmeltable Ice from the Ice Golems

During Stage 1:
[1/2] X: Have you found the items yet? Look in the Light forest for wood and iron, there should be a lot of string in Nivla Forest, and the ice can be found nearby.
[2/2] X: Hurry! The soliers need all the help they can get.

Stage 2:
[1/2] X: Thank you for bringing us these important supplies, now we can send these to the garrison
[2/2] X: However the path isn't clear of monsters, can you kill [monster (fire)] and bring me 8 of their flaming hearts?
*The monsters have the same stats as the ice golems at freezing heights, however, these monsters have +1 level of speed

During Stage 2:
[1/1] X: I don't want to risk my men fighting against these monsters, peharps you are strong enough to defeat them

Completing the Quest:
[1/1] X: Thank you adventurer for your help, and take this as payment
[2/2] X: Unfortunately we don't have a lot of money left to fund this campaign

After the Quest:
[1/1] X: Perhaps you should visit the garrison, the last thing I heard was that they were nearly overun.

Quest Rewards:
250,000 EXP
4096 emeralds (1 LE)

Notes on this quest:
This is sort "fetch" quest that is designed to reveal the background of this storyline. Also a remedies the grind to level 100 slightly. This is not really meant to be a particulary interesting quest.

Quest 2: Endless Terror
Level requirement: 99
(Requires Completion of Quest 1, unlocks the next quest)

General description: Slightly more background, introduces a problem that the garrison is having trouble with
Setting: Past the portal, is noe a relatively large fortress (perhaps the general size of ragni) with walls of stone and wood, with archers on the walls. Numerous gaurds are scattered within the fortress.
Ouside the fortress walls, there are melee gaurds fighting the monsters (like in the tutorial) and the archers firing as well.

NOTE: you cannot access the portal until you have finished quest 1
I was thinking about this one being General McElroy

Stage 1:
[1/6] McElroy: Hello adventurer, have you come to help us?
[2/6] McElroy: Good, as you can see, our numbers are very limited, as we have lost many men trying to contain these demons.
[3/6] McElroy: Most of this is becuase of a strange disease that has spread across the frount lines
[4/6] McElroy: It is unlike anything that our mages have ever seen before, and they say it is becuase this place is the origin of evil
[5/6] McElroy: This disease... It turns our soliders against us, and what's worse, is that the infected are far more powerful than our men, and conventional weapons can't do anything against this new threat
[6/6] McElroy: I appreciate these supplies, now go speak with our head mage. Perhaps he can do something with your help

During Stage 1:
[1/1] McElroy: have you spoken to the head mage yet?

Stage 2:
*Note this guy is from Gavel
[1/] X: Who are you?
[2/] X: ...
[3/] X: Interesting name you have, adventurer
[4/] X: WellI need some help concerning the infected soliders
[5/] I have a reason to believe that the demons who are infecting them absorb the lava as a source of energy, like how you humans eat food
[6/] The way that their body uses that energy creates a toxic byproduct that cover's their skin, and if anything come into contact with it, becomes infected
[7/] I'm going to need you to

 

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btw first

 

Reserved Part 2

 

Is it level 99, or level 90? Plus, 250k Exp for a level 99 quest is Wayyyy to little.

 

Sorry I have to go do something I haven't had time to edit this fully brb

 

8 quests and 1st one is lv 99? how will you do that? or is it lvl 90?

 

a lvl 99 quest for 1 le? i wouldnt do it even if you payed meee

 

the first 7 quests will be 99
The last quest wil be 100 with no EXP reward, but an item reward

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So you are just in this for the money?
I wonder what option you choose in and Iron Heart, Part 2
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this idea is one of the central points of this

 

i dont like it, make it in different levels so people get more excited about the storyline, and want to level up :3

 

i wouldve done sheriff, but i spam clicked it lol.

 

Ok i'm going to spoil the whole story.
This is about extrinsic and intrinsic mentality, as studied in psychology.

One thing that most people is, that they was extrinsic goals, such as EXP or money
This is about intrinsic, if you would do the right thing
the EXP and money won't be a large factor in this entire questline

 

the quest doesn't really show the background of the story. there's a portal, and villagers, and soldiers. Molten heights broke their plan and some got injured. these are the only things i get from the area and quest

 

And what I have learned throughout life, transcendence does not come from extrinsic motivated people

 

now i understand it but make something that they wont start from the 6th quest (make a quest item at least)

 

I can't type up 8 different parts of this quest in one sitting.
my 44 page list of class ideas didn't finish in one day

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I will take that into consideration, and I have plans for that once I finish typing out every single general storyline, then I will work on the details

 

if you're going to reveal the story one by one in the quests, dont say the above

 

I cant plop someone down in an alternate reality without background.
Your consequences have to come after you do something

 

you say after the quest you revealed the background, but you didn't. And now you're thinking that I'm saying that you shouldn't add a bg.

 

I didn't reveal all of it, and that is on purpose.

 

then say "to reveal some of the background" or say "to make people understand the basics"