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OK, don't get all mad at my spelling, grammar, or coloring this is just a rough draft of the quest it lots can be improved.

Treasure Hunter
Lv. min: 47
Difficulty: Hard
Status: Not Started
Talk to Sorona on Half Moon Island [945,-2551]

Pre-quest: Scientist Sorona

Sorona should be in a semi medium hut made of wood and there should be brewing stands potions and various different items in item frames on the walls.

[1/2] Sorona: I'm sorry but you don't look like you have enough experience to help.
[2/2] Sorona: Come back and talk to me when you level 47 or higher.

[1/6] Sorona: Oh hi, it looks to me that you have some experience in exploring.
[2/6] Sorona: I would like your help. You see right by this camp there is a major underwater ruin.
[3/6] Sorona: And I am just dying to get my hands on anything down there.
[4/6] Sorona:Why don't I just explore it myself...well you see I had a frightening encounter with the ocean before and with well water.
[5/6] Sorona: So I hired a diver to explore the ruins. Turns out he's too chicken to go down to the dark parts of the ruins.
[6/6] Sorona: Why don't you talk with him about the task at hand since I have much work to do, meet with Kirk.

[Quest book updated]
Talk to Kirk by the coast of half moon island. [858,-2496]

[1/1] Sorona: Can't you see I'm experimenting, go to Kirk for more details.

Pre-quest: Kirk

[1/1] Krik: Want to see my incredible swimming abilities?

[1/7] Krik: Yo, I see that you've meet with Sorona, wait what did she say about me!?
[2/7] Krik: Well I'll have a word with her!
[3/7] Krik: Anyways, as she said I have conquered all that is visible in the ruins.
[4/7] Krik: I'm just hesitant on going into the darkness.
[5/7] Krik: From my searches I found nothing, no treasure, no specimens, and no artifacts.
[6/7] Krik: However, I did find something of no value. A tablet with gibberish carved on it.
[7/7] Krik: I don't think it will be of any help.
[Receives stone slab]

[Quest book updated]
Perhaps someone on Mage Island could translate this.

Add a boat merchant to half moon island.


[1/1] Krik: I don't know what to do stop asking me!

Pre-quest: Scholar Prellis

Builders if this is implemented you can choose whether to build a tower on mage island or use the houses already there, If you decide to build a tower make it out of stone bricks and end stone as well as some jungle wood and make it symmetrical as well as have some chiseled red sand stone. Also go with what is on the interior that is listed below.
The housing that Prellis resides in should be books all about there should also be a cat named lula cause cats. Prellis will be at the top of the tower with books all around him and a "desk" should be built where there is a book and quill and feathers as well as paper. make sure it is symmetrical on the out side and have jungle wood planks with some quartz (not alot but just a little bit) it should be lighted with torches on the inside and glowstone on the exterior.

[1/1] Prellis : This book is quite interesting if you find something of greater interest tell me

[1/6] Prellis: Oh my such an ancient text and in such good condition, I can't believe you have this.
[2/6] Prellis: What does it say? Oh of course you can't read it, why only the top scholars in the world can, and I happen to be one of them.
[3/6] Prellis: Lets see, hmm, bla bla bla. Magnitudo gloria mendacium vallis reliquit rectus salire fortitudo.
[4/6] Prellis: Which means,"To find great fame and fortune seek the first valley to your left, go straight ahead and jump to prove your courage".
[5/6] Prellis: Well since I did so translate it for you, may I keep the tablet?
[6/6] Prellis: Oh my, this is the greatest day of my life!


[1/1] Prellis: You gave it to me it's mine now I'm not giving it back!

[Quest book updated]
Go back and talk to Kirk

[1/4] Krik: He took the tablet, I'm not surprised scholars are always greedy for knowledge.
[2/4] Krik: What now? I don't know.
[3/4] Krik: Why not follow the directions and do what it says?
[4/4] Krik: I mean a little adventure never hurt anybody...right?

[Quest book updated]
Explore the ruins

[1/1] Krim: I mean a little adventure never hurt anyone...right?

The ruins should have a little bit of surface light and have some of it stick out of the water you need to dive in and use the breathing helmet naviage the (upper) ruins takes about 7-8 seconds similar to how you do the underwater quest with some "stone" blocking you instead of the logs in underwater there will be a deep valley 50 blocks deep and a tunnel to the left go then straight with a 4x4 block hole and then you emerge from water puddle to an there should be a stand with the [lumius stone] on a sea lantern. Behind the lantern there is a tunnel. when you try to approach it will not let you saying. Exit with a coal tp indent thingy to the right.

A lost presence is nearby, it would be best to leave now.

Find [lumius stone], prismarine shard

[Quest book updated]
Talk with Kirk

[1/4] Krim: My my what do we have here? A mighty fine crystal alright. It could rake in a good profit.
[2/4] Krim: Wait I just got a great idea!
[3/4] Krim: Why don't you use this crystal to navigate the dark parts of the ruins.
[4/4] Krim: Why don't I ? Well I'd prefer to stay out of dark places ... and enjoy the sunny day.

[Quest book updated]
Go into the dark parts of the ruins [in the Half Moon Island bay]

[1/1] Krim: What a sunny day today.

This time once you reach the air pocket you go thought the tunnel to an area where you have to parkour- the parkour should look like jumping over pillars fallen rocks and such like that, its not a height parkour but a length parkour for about 55-70 ish blocks of length. At the end of the parkour you have to press buttons that change the direction of stone stairs till they form a pattern then a large door will open 1/4 the size of llevigars door and will open via command. When you go in you will see a iron golem holding a flower.
Killing the iron golem will make it drop the flower and there will be a coal insert tp thingy at the end of the "boss room".

Ancient Guardian

(Please give me the guide lines on how to create a mob boss ;-;)
Damage:❉ Water and ✤ Earth
Weakness: ✹Fire
Uses assassin multihit as an attack
has normal speed

Idk hit points
Idk damage


Get flower.

[Quest book updated]
Talk with Sorona

Gives Sorona the flower her face lights up

[1/3] Sorona: Such a specimen and preserved with such care, amazing.
[2/3] Sorona: It has such a vibrant glow!
[3/3] Sorona: Don't worry your efforts went in vain here is a reward for your work.

19 EB
33000 xp

So yeah hoped you enjoyed reading all that it was pretty long (that what she said) and yeah hoped you liked it. Constructive criticism is encouraged.

Location of the npcs:
Sorona [945,-2551]
Kirk [858,-2496]
Prellis [841,-2868] (or put him in one of the "houses" on the island)

 

It looks pretty good to me! :D I like the concept of it and the dialogue interactions are nice. I found some grammar mistakes though in this line.

[3/5]Micheal:It says,"to find great fame and fortune seek the first valley to your left go straight ahead and jump to prove your courage".

"To" should probably be capitalized since it's a direct quote from the tablet. Also, there's a comma after "left" in the sentence. Other than those criticisms, nice quest! Try to find a level for your quest and the general area you want to put it on the Wynncraft map. (https://map.wynncraft.com)

 

... its all in the top ... its a lvl 47 quest located at half moon island xD

 

Oh shoot, I probably didn't see that. Sorry! :/

Usually people put the specific coordinates and the quest giver at the top of their quests because that's what shows in the questbook.

 

Bumppty 10 char

 

bump
10 char

 

bump someone please comment on the quest ?! please !

 

Sooo I read through and found a few small hard to notice miss-spells that I am going to try to fix. Also, I like the quest, though I am missing the location of Hanna and Micheal, also there are no clues of how to get from Stephen to Micheal.
All the original text to correct is in underlined italic and replaced with red

I hope some of this helped...

edit: @Stycore check this pls (I am not flawless aswell)

 

Great quest !
My tips are .. Well I just found one . When Stephen gives you the tablet mention that you should consult a
Scholar with the tablet as it is quite wierd to have 'talk to Michael' just appear in ur quest book. There should be sum thing hinting it

As for designing the mob I'll do it once I'm back from vacation since I have the guidelines from being a current trial Gm

Overall - GREAT QUEST ;)

 

ok thanks for the advice and ill chance it asap
@SATMC thx that would really help

 

b . . u . . m . . p . .

 

Mate wanna participate in my contest?
Go to:
Forums >> Wynncraft >> A Contest For Everyone!

 

sure I guess why not

 

This is awesome, I want it implemented in the game!
One thing, I know this is weird but I feel Michael kind of belongs in mage island. I think he would fit better there. Mage Island is near half moon island.

 

You know it can't be that good when the title says, "Suporters"

 

hmm that accually a really good idea ill try to find a way to implement that in the quest and I like the use of mage island in it too, it's not visited very much

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lol I can't believe that i just noticed that now xD

 

Well thank you for fixing it.

 

no probem (this is intentional :P)

 

I like the idea, I'm just not very fond of the names. I feel they don't fit wynn XD

 

This after noon I will take a stroll through the graveyard and look at the names there, I'll see if I come up with better names.