World Quest: Treasure Hunter (11 Supporters)

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OK, don't get all mad at my spelling, grammar, or coloring this is just a rough draft of the quest it lots can be improved.

Treasure Hunter
Lv. min: 47
Difficulty: Medium
Status: Not Started
Talk to Hanna on Half Moon Island [945,-2551]​

Pre-quest: Scientist Hanna

[1/2] Hanna: I'm sorry but you don't look like you have enough experience to help.
[2/2] Hanna: Come back and talk to me when you level 47

[1/6] Hanna: Oh hi, it looks to me that you have some experience in exploring.
[2/6] Hanna: I would like you help. You see right by this camp there is a major underwater ruin.
[3/6] Hanna: And I am just dying to get my hands on anything down there.
[4/6] Hanna:Why don't I just explore it myself...well you see I had a frightening encounter with the ocean before and with well water.
[5/6] Hanna: So I hired a diver to explore the ruins. Turns out he's too chicken to go down to the dark parts of the ruins.
[6/6] Hanna: Why don't you talk with him about the task at hand since I have much work to do, meet with Stephen.

[Quest book updated]
Talk to Stephen by the coast of half moon island. [858,-2496]

[1/1] Hanna: Can't you see I'm experimenting, go to Stephen for more details.

Pre-quest: Stephen

[1/1] Stephen: Want to see my incredible swimming abilities?

[1/7] Stephen: Yo, I see that you've meet with Hanna, wait what did she say about me!
[2/7] Stephen: Well I'll have a word with her!
[3/7] Stephen: Anyways as she said I have conquered all that is visible in the ruins.
[4/7] Stephen: I'm just hesitant on going into the darkness.
[5/7] Stephen: From my searches I found nothing, no treasure, no specimens, and no artifacts.
[6/7] Stephen: However I did find something of no value. A tablet with gibberish written on it.
[7/7] Stephen: I don't think it will be of any help.
[Receives stone slab]

[Quest book updated]
Find Scholar Micheal [908,-2609]

[1/1] Stephen: I don't know what to do stop asking me!

Pre-quesl: Scholar Micheal

[1/1] Micheal: This book is quite interesting if you find something of greater interest tell me

[1/5] Micheal: Oh my such an ancient text and in such good condition, I can't believe you have this.
[2/5] Micheal: What does it say? Oh of course you can't read it, why only the top scholars in the world can, and I happen to be one of them.
[3/5] Micheal: It says,"to find great fame and fortune seek the first valley to your left go straight ahead and jump to prove your courage".
[4/5] Micheal: Well since I did so translate it for you may I keep the tablet?
[5/5] Micheal: Oh my this is the greatest day in my life!


[1/1] Micheal: You gave it to me it's mine now I'm not giving it back!

[Quest book updated]
Go back and talk to Stephen

[1/3] Stephen: He took the tablet, I'm not surprised scholars are always greedy for knowledge.
[2/3] Stephen: What now? Why not follow the directions and do what it says.
[3/3] Stephen: I mean a little adventure never hurt anybody...right?

[Quest book updated]
Explore the ruins

[1/1] Stephen: I mean a little adventure never hurt anyone...right?

(Ruins should be completely submerged with light being able to shine in- it's suppose to be a maze)

Find [lumius stone], prismarine shard

[Quest book updated]
Talk with Stephen

[1/4] Stephen: My my what do we have here? A mighty fine crystal alright. It could rake in a good profit.
[2/4] Stephen: Wait I just got a great idea!
[3/4] Stephen: Why don't you use this crystal to navigate the dark parts of the ruins.
[4/4] Stephen: Why don't I ? Well I'd prefer to stay out of dark places ... and enjoy the sunny day

[Quest book updated]
Go into the dark parts of the ruins [in the Half Moon Island bay]

[1/1] Stephen: What a sunny day today.

Find flower

1 hp mob name Preserved Specimen

[Quest book updated]
Talk with Hanna

Gives Hanna the flower her face lights up

[1/3] Hanna: Such a specimen and preserved with such care, amazing.
[2/3] Hanna: It has such a vibrant glow!
[3/3] Hanna: Don't worry your efforts went in vain here is a reward for your work.

1 Le
35000 xp
Unlocked ruins

You can purchase a ticket from the merchant behind Stephen after the quest for exploring the ruins. Chests and thing like that should spawn in the ruins and the deeper you go the high tier chest but more difficult the ruins become the should be 10 stages

And a maximum of 2 tickets can be purchased in a day and the amount of time you can be in the ruins is the amount of water beating you have from the water breathing helmet.

There should be also be traps. such as arrows and mobs with knock back hitting you

Think of an underwater sea temple but bigger and there isn't much light and is 10 floors deep.


So yeah hoped you enjoyed reading all that it was pretty long (that what she said) and this is the first quest I've ever made so yeah advice is welcome.

 

[1/1] Jamie: Hi! You need to make sure your colors are like this! Other then that, wow! Good job!

 

This actually sounds a lot like Beneath the Depths, a level 61 quest about the sunken city Sarnfic.

 

Oh ... this is more ment to be like a underwater sea temple where you can find loot but is more complex the deeper you go.

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Thanks for the format
But I'll change that when I'm not lazy :p

 

bump 10 char ...

 

Punctuation please >.<
And one thing.
DON'T.
DO.
MAZES.
NEVER.
IT.
IS.
FORBIDDEN.

 

... ik I read the gm form but ... I mean the emerald stash beneath almuj was a maze ...
And it's ment so that going into the deepest part that you are almost certainly set to die so there's that aspect.

But yeah ik mazes are bad, give my quest a chance pls.

 

Think how far back those quests were made. In wynn.

 

True

 

Well... You need it if you want any gm or owner to even glance at it.
(Top Tips with JimJam Jamie)

 

Alright, aside from my usual gripes about spelling and grammar... This looks pretty solid! It'd give some more purpose to Half-Moon Island, it'd bring life to a relatively dead part of the map, and it'd add another underwater quest! You have my support.

However, there are many things that could be improved. First off, the reward needs to be reduced to just over a third of its current value. At present, 1 LE is usually what you gain in a high-level Gavel quest, not a level 36 Wynn quest. Yes, the value of LE has sharply dropped, due to inflation in the market - even more reason to refrain from flooding it further. 25 EB should be sufficient, even moreso given the potential the ruins will have. Secondly, you need to provide more information. Where will Michael be located? Where exactly on the map are the ruins? Where will Hanna be found on the map?

 

[1/5] The One-eyed Guy: First, what Jamie said.
[2/5] The One-eyed Guy: Also, you could make it a lot less of a wall of text. Use the enter key more, it spreads out everything a lot and makes stuff easier to read, especially when it comes to quests.
[3/5] The One-eyed Guy: XP? Around 10,000. Also there's already a pretty big Level 36 quest, maybe make it level 37 or 35.
[4/5] The One-eyed Guy: 1 LE? For a Level 36 quest? Try 32 EB at minimum.
[5/5] The One-eyed Guy: Nice reference with Hanna, if that is one. It's a cool idea but you should embellish more- Trap descriptions, maybe a layout of the ruins, just some basic stuff.
[New Quest Started: Upgrades]

 

I added the colour you happy now?

 

Yas daddy

 

No. You just copied it. Change it. Maybe do it "Why don't you explore there?"?

 

most of the time at the end of the talking the npc does, when you click on him again he repeats his last line or last few lines.

 

bump 10 char

 

This is the best quest suggestion I have seen so far, the quest is very good, not too long or short, I think the money you get from it should be reduced, other than that, I like it. +1

 

I was thinking the same. Read the GM Information. O_O

 

I know I've read it ... before I made this quest I am also well aware that mazes are bad xD