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World [quest] The Ennemy Returns

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by Witcher, Apr 4, 2016.

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  1. yes

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  2. no

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  3. have not read it, so i vote no <- if you are dump, pls vote this

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  1. Witcher

    Witcher the crappy class suggestions guy

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    Hello there, welcome to my Quest suggestion!

    Informations:
    - It's a hard quest
    - It takes very long
    - It requires lv. 98

    where will it start?
    The quest boom will send you to a Young Boy (Baby villager) who asks for 700 liquid emeralds. His Name is "Rik". You will find him in gavel on the sky Islands.
    [Rik] Hey you! I heard of you! You have stopped the corruption in Wynn! But now, I Need your help and my Family does too
    [Rik] It rained a long time last summer and after the earth slowly became mud, all my fathers wheat plants slipped into the void. My father risked his life tryinbg to save it.
    [Rik] And now, we have nothing to eat and our house broke since we couldn't buy Wood to repair it.
    [Rik] Could you help us and bring us 700 le to repair our house, to buy Food and to pay our debts?
    [Rik] please, I begg you, save us!
    [Rik] Thank you soo much!!!!!

    Now the quest book tell you to go to the detlas banker to ask him for a favor

    [Detlas Banker] Is it you? Finally you came again!
    [Detlas Banker] What do you care about the 700 le, there is work to do! The King commanded me to send you to him. The safety of our province is in danger!
    [Detlas Banker] Now go! I'm sure he will send them the 700 LE! Go, GO!

    Quest book tells you to go to Ragni and speak the King.

    [Ragni'S King] Well, finally you arrived, as you may already know the safety of our province is in danger and also the safety of all realms. The Spirit of the corruption broke out of it'S prison located in fruma's central City.
    [Ragni'S King] YOu think you have already beated the Corrupter of worlds? Yes you did.
    [Ragni's KIng] The corrupter of worlds was only the last known Shell of the corruption's Spirit, A demon from the realm of dern who also destroyed the most developped species kown to have existed.
    [Ragni'S KING] The Spirit of corruption once claimed a Body and transformed into a strong and powerful Body known as the Corrupter of worlds, but when we have beated the Spirit, the corple just lived on, undangerous o the realms.
    [Ragni's KIng] We sealed the Spirit into a prison, into the safest prison known to exist, the prison in Fruma'S main City.
    [Ragni'S King] Now we unfortunately lost contact to Fruma, and we fear the Spirit broke out. If that happened, he will alerady have destroyed the City and he will look for a new Body.
    [Ragni'S King] And that'S why you are here, we, the King of gavel, the king of Troms, the leader of the light realm and me, king of ragni were looking for the most powerful, smart and skilled adventurer and fighter in the provinces.
    [Ragni's King] IF you accept, we will send you to your home province, into the main City of Fruma to check the Situation and kill The demon if you have to.
    [Ragni'S King] Now, go to Detlas and speak to Calo, he already knows everything.
    [Ragni'S KIng] I advise you to look for other adventurers and fighters who can Support you in the worst case.

    Quest book: Go to Detlas and talk to Calo

    [Calo] Hello, you have already been informed?
    [Calo] By the king? but what did I thought? IT's about our lives.
    [Calo] Now just hop in and lets go!

    Quest book: Wait until you arrive.
    Chat says: you arrived
    Chat says: The City is dead, everywhere corpses and wolves eating from them
    Quest Book: speak to Calo

    [Calo] I think i should stay here, I'm not a good fighter.
    [Calo] But i will Keep here and wait for your return.
    [Calo] just climb down the ladder.
    [Calo] good luck!

    Quest book: Climb down the ladder and look for survivors.

    (you find someone called ???)

    quest book: speak to ???

    [???] help me, it feels like my Soul leaves my Body! Please don't tell me I'm dying!
    [???] It was invisible, People just got ripped apart, it came from the prison, we all knew it, we all feared it!
    [???].........
    [???].....
    [???]...

    Quest Book: go to the prison and kill the demon

    Chat: you arived at the prison and slowly went in, and what you saw chocked you. A transparent Body raised a bloody corpse without touching it and it slowly approaches to the bloody Body.

    Quest book: stop the demon from taking a new Body!

    The bossfight starts!

    You damge it until it "dies"

    Chat: you have attacked the Spirit until it tryed to flee by siolving, but yo catched it into a bottle
    Quest book: pick up the demon's drop (water bottle renamed compressed Spirit)
    Quest book: go back to Calo

    [Calo] It is done? IT IS DONE! Lets go home, away from this place. King waits for you.

    Questbook: go to ragni and speak the king

    [Ragni'S KIng] It is done? well done adventurer, now you are truly a hero and our People will sing of in in thoused years!
    [Ragni'S KIng] Well, still, I'm not sure if the bottle can resist it forever, you should go te kelight, the one who knows most about corruption.

    Quest book: Go to Kelight and speak to him

    [Kelight] Is it what I think it is? It is, then bring me a climbing helmet, a purified helmet of the legends and (all other quest helmets) so i can co,bine them using the demon for the provinces good.
    Chat: Kelight Uses his magical knoledge to create a helmet which weaved the Spirit into it.
    [Kelight] This helmet now posesses all magical skills from all your Quest helmets and in Addition to this, the Spirit will boost your strengh, your Speed, your Regeneration and your magical abilitys in a good way. But remeber! Never break it!
    [Kelight] farewell adventurer our People will never Forget what you have done for them.

    Quest reward:
    -enough xp to get from lvl 99 to lvl 101
    -helmet with some nice skills(quest item)
    -acces to fruma xD joking

    Well guys, this was a lot of writing and very difficult for a no native Speaker. So pls forgive me if i dont add Colors now, but i will add them later if i get some good feetback
     
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  2. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    700 LE? A bit much for repairs considering the prices of both food at Nesaak and Christmas Island and the cobblestone at Olux.
    Also, if the corruption originated from the Roots of Corruption, then how did the spirit come from Dern?
    Otherwise it's a pretty good quest. I'd say coloring if not for the note at the bottom but where is Calo? He says "Let's hop in!" but you didn't describe where he was at all.
    Finally, the Access of Fruma. When it is released (if it is released) I doubt it will be something that has difficulty accessing, as they are of your own race.
     
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  3. Witcher

    Witcher the crappy class suggestions guy

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    hy, that you for replaying, yes the fruma Thing was a joke, and to calo, calo is always at detlas and cinfras, but you probably will go to detlas since it si clsoer to ragni. or do you eman where he is while you are at fruma? if you mean this? he stay at the ship since he "isn't a good fighter".
     
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  4. LunarWiz

    LunarWiz [/^_^]/ <3 \{^_^\}

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    Great Idea, but that XP Reward is insane.
    98-101 is levels 1-100's XP And 98-100. When Dern comes out, people will level 10X or something, hence making level 101-105 quests or something redundant.
    Plus, 101 is a honor only given to those dedicated wynncraftians who go the extra mile.
    Good luck, @motoki1
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    Also you spelt "Enemy" wrong.
    Nevermind
     
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  5. xCubby

    xCubby Nobody Goes To My Shop ): HERO

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    Put the world prefix
     
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  6. llllllllllllll

    llllllllllllll Famous Adventurer

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    No. I know that you don't speak english but the grammar ain't perfect. Also you never help Rik and you don't actually complete what you started.
     
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  7. Witcher

    Witcher the crappy class suggestions guy

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    Havent even corrected it, made it on less then 5 minutes.
     
  8. llllllllllllll

    llllllllllllll Famous Adventurer

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    Yes I know. Although this is worse than some of the other quest suggestions. Keep trying
     
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  9. Witcher

    Witcher the crappy class suggestions guy

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    Thabk you :) i love you too
     
  10. The_Sushi_Dragon

    The_Sushi_Dragon Cousin of Ozoth

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    All right I have seen many quest but what is Fruma?
     
  11. The_Sushi_Dragon

    The_Sushi_Dragon Cousin of Ozoth

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    So the one we where from before Wynn?
     
  12. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    [1/5] Jamie: Psst. Look at this.

    [2/5] Jamie: Check out these colors. You need to use these!

    [3/5]
    Jamie: You also need Post and Pre Quest. What they say before you can start the level and after the level.

    [4/5]
    Jamie: Also it's not possible to talk to characters from other quests.

    [5/5] Jamie: Also... Is it called the Enemy Returns or the Ennemy returns? Other then that good quest!

    [Rant Complete!]
    Rewards:
    +1 Derp Helmet
    +420 Experience
    +99999999 Emeralds

    Post Quest:

    [1/1] Jamie: skiddlydondondongdang. IFIGOTLOCKEDAWAY,ANDWELOSTITALLTODAY!TELLMEHONESTLY,WOULDYOUSTILLLOVEMETHESAME
     
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  13. YingYann

    YingYann I'm not the bear on the peanut butter pot.

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    It WOULD be toooo long dangit it's DOING SKY ISLANDS TO DETLAS and then RAGNI..... and then again DETLAS and finally.... ToL...
    It's like Jungle Fever but in longer but I like the idea of the XP at the end :)
     
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  14. Theepicsquash

    Theepicsquash Error: Originality not detected. VIP+

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    Well, all i can say is. Where is the part where you give the boy 700le.
     
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  15. TheJayBill

    TheJayBill Toxic cake (don't eat me now :) ) VIP+

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    But still. getting to lvl 99-101 is insane, that's like about 50k billion or more.
     
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  16. Witcher

    Witcher the crappy class suggestions guy

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    I know, but breaking secret Things is fun :)
     
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  17. TheJayBill

    TheJayBill Toxic cake (don't eat me now :) ) VIP+

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    I guess :p lel
     
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  18. Icicly

    Icicly bred

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    Rlly? XD
     
  19. kojirobin

    kojirobin ♧ the local (broke) emerald dealer VIP

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    I like it, but would like it if GMs made it in 2030 for a teaser of Fruma. I really advise you to to change XP, and the le the boy wants. The LE amount is too much for a debt. 2, the re-use of characters, maybe change it with an Emerald Merchant NPC in the Emerald Trail Identifier's basement? 3, grammar. yes, please, IT HURTS MY EYES.
     
  20. funnysillyman

    funnysillyman lil uzi fan VIP+ GM

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    Isn't this from the headless hunt or something?
     
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