World The Brave Warrior (quest)

Note:This is just what i had on my mind.It might not be perfect,but if you have any ideas feel free to reply and tell me what to fix.

Quest Name:The Brave Warrior
Level Minimum:38
Location:Ternaves
Difficulty:Medium

Go and talk to Markus

[1/6]Markus:Oh!You've finnaly came.
[2/6]Markus:It took me a long time to find you.
[3/6]Markus:Anyways,let's get to the reason why i called you.
[4/6]Markus:We had a strong warrior that was protecting us from other scary monsters.
[5/6]Markus:But then last night,a strange guy in black came and with some weird spells he managed to take control of our warrior.
[6/6]Markus:That's why you are here.I need your help.I can't do it alone beacuse im just a farmer.I threw at him red colour so it should be easy to find him.
If you talk to him again
[1/1]Markus:Please,we are in need of your help.
If you talk to him when you are low level
[1/1]Markus:I would really love your help,but you aren't strong enough.Come back at level 38
(Quest Book Updated)
Follow the blue trail.
The trail should lead to the mountain near Desert.There would be a cave with a huge hole in it.Without monsters.
Once you get in the cave
It looks like a huge hole.Perhaps you should go in?
(Quest Book Updated)
Go in the hole
When you get in the hole,you are going to get teleported.
(Quest Book Updated)
(1/6)???:Ah,a new guest.It's so nicely that you warrior come to us every time.
(2/6)???:My name is Takoba.Yes,it's kinda funny name.
(3/6)Takoba:But let's get on the reason why are you here.
(4/6)Takoba:You see,I'm not a wizard.Im just a smart guy.
(5/6)Takoba:Everything was planned.Even Markus was in charge of this.His mission was to bring you here.
(6/6)Takoba:Don't worry,that warrior is fine.But he's captured.So if you want to free him,you gotta defeat me.Even if I am weak.
(Quest Book Updated)
Go in the portal
(1/1)Takoba:Hah!You foolish mortal!You have been tricked!You will be the one who's gonna get defeated.
Boss Fight
Name:Takoba's Robot
Earth Damage 100-125
Weakness:Thunder,Water
Defense:Earth
Shoots projectiles 1 every 10 seconds
Health:1200
Regenerates 10 hp every 10 seconds
Cannot move
Wither

After you kill the robot you are going to get [Takoba's secret card] and give it to the dispenser A.K.A ,,Exit" with the text the door is opened
Once you exit you are going to find that warrior
(1/5)Warrior:Finnaly,someone came to save me.Thank you!
(2/5)Warrior:Takoba is my best friend,and he decided to test your power.
(3/5)Warrior:But he went little bit crazy with it so he decided to test me,and he capured me
(4/5)Warrior:But you've came and saved me.
(5/5)Warrior:Take this as a sign of your bravery and honor

Quest Completed [The Brave Warrior]
Rewards
12500 experience points
328 emeralds
Titanium (Chestplate)

Titanium
Level Min:38
Quest Req:The Brave Warrior
Health:+400
Fire Defense +15%
Earth Defense +15%
Water Defense +15%
Thunder defense +15%
Air Defense +15%

+4 strenght
+2 defense
+2 dexterity
+2 intelligence
-5% walk speed
-3 agility

One of the armor wearen by brave warriors of Wynn.The power is shown by the material which was used to make.
Legendary Item


Note:Markus is going to be somewhere near the horse merchant.
Once you jump in the hole you cant go in anymore.
If you finished the quest and want to go in the hole
You don't want to go in that hole again
If you havent started the quest
That hole is pretty big,you don't want to go in.
When you go in the hole there is gonna be a laboratory, where Takoba is going to be.
If you talk to Takoba or Warrior again
Warrior:Thank you so much!
Takoba:Go in the teleporter already!
If you talk to Markus after finishing the quest
Markus:I'm so sorry that i tried to trick you,are we still friends?
The place where Warrior is is gonna be like a prison surrounded with stone bricks and behind is exit.
The place where you fight Takoba's Robot is going to be huge made out crystals (coloured glass)
I hope you like it :)

 

heres an idea, instead of making quests for low levels... make lvl 90+ quests that we need.

 

It's a good idea ! But, for me, you need to fix the characteristics of the chestplate, it is too strong.

 

This is literally "Hey! Kill X!" There are too many of those quests

 

Hey! I'm the quest feedback man, feedbacking any quest suggestion I come across.
So.
1. WOAH WOAH WOAH. What's with the quest text randomly making little shifts in color?
2. The dialouge number is grey.
3. 1,200 health? Isn't that the health of Arakadicus or something? Waaay too weak. Also, regen is laughably low.
4. Correct item coloring. Here's the fixed version:
Titanium

+400 Health
+15% ✹ Fire Defense
+15% ✤ Earth Defense
+15% ❉ Water Defense
+15% ✦ Thunder Defense
+15% ❋ Air Defense

Lv. Min: 38
Quest Req: The Brave Warrior

+4 Strength
+2 Defense
+2 Dexterity
+2 Intelligence
-5% walk speed
-3 agility

A chestpiece worn by one of the bravest warriors of Wynn. Made of the alloy it is named after, it is strong but heavy...
Legendary Item

5. This is literally a kill the guy quest. Kinda boring?
6. There's already a huge quest for level 38, Canyon Condor.

 

Thanks for the colours.I have been typing this on my mobile (so i couldnt press the right colours)
And i'm not very good with mob stats... so expect for a level 90 mob be hp 1800......
Before i made the quest i had an idea of a funny one to play (will send it later,won't be a boss fight)