World [quest] I4+ Cats] [4+ Supporters] [level 68+] Greed Part I

Hello my fellow friends.
Today i'm trying something new. Since people think that my first quest (Ragni's King) was well thought and wynncraft-like, I decided to try a III part quest which revolves around the greed of villagers. Let's get started. If you want anything to change here, please let me know below to make this quest more better.

-= Quest in Quest Book =-
Greed Part I
Lv. min: 68
Difficulty: Easy

Talk to Nar in the temple of legends
[x,y,z]
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[1/5] Nar : Oi! You! Yes! You! Want somethin' to do 'round here?
[2/5] Nar : Good! I need to tell ye somethin' mate.
[3/5] Nar : Know Jonathan? Well, He's me Friend and dreams that one day he can make liquid emeralds out of simply putting them into a bottle! Stupid, right?
[4/5] Nar : Well, I already told that to him and he refused to budge.
[5/5] Nar : I got a plan, mate. I'm going to trick me son to thinking that his 'experiment' worked. If you could supply me with [1 Liquid emerald] then this plan will blossom.

This is requires you to give 1LE in order to continue. I'd expect you to have at least 2LE by now.

[1/5] Nar : Good! Good! Next up, you need to secretly stuff it into his machine. Just head back to troms and find the secret hallway which I dug up just for this occasion.
[2/5] Nar : The secret hallway which I just mentioned is found at the right side of the castle. Just go there and drop the liquid emerald without me friend lookin'.
[3/5] Nar : I do have one thing I ought to tell ye though.
[4/5] Nar : That hole was found by the King himself and now is guarded by some tough iron golems. I'm not sure how you're going to get past them, but I'm sure you can do it.
[5/5] Nar : Now Hurry along! Me friend is on break and won't be arrivin' again 'till
tomorrow.


You get past the level 65 iron golems and (not literally) drop the liquid emerald.

[1/5] Jonathan : Whoa! Is that.. What I think it is?
[2/5] Jonathan : Oh my bob! Is that liquid emerald?!
[3/5] Jonathan : I have to tell this to my father IMMEDIATELY!!!
[4/5] Jonathan : Yes, Yes, YES!
[5/5] Jonathan : I'm going to be rich... rich... rich...

You go back to Nar.

[1/5] Nar : Did ye do it brother?
[2/5] Nar : Yes! Now we wait for me Friend to be enraged... tee hee hee...
[3/5] Nar : Ye better get goin' or me son might hunt ye beforehand.
[4/5] Nar : Be wary, though, me fellow companion. Me Friend indeed has a reputation in Troms. He could get you killed simply because of that.
[5/5] Nar : Don't be proud yet, I still have more work for ye to do...

[1/1] Jonathan : NAR!!!!

[1/1] Nar : Oh. That's him. I think this a call for us to RUN! Well, I can't walk though... Ehh, I'll be fine!

Rewards :
1 Nar's approval (Needed for Part II)
10EB
10,000XP

This might be short, but there is still Part II and III to go... Expect Longer quests to be written...

 

Actually, you can use the "None" color to make text compatible with both themes!

 

I see! Thanks for the Info :P

 

Not bad; But Nar's character seems more of an annoying friend pranking him rather than a father.
And also, Golem stats?
I don't know about how you want to do it, but I'd self-advertise my own layout. Something like this:
Lost Spirit
Mob: Invisible Mob
Level: 82
HP: 5407
Regen: 328
Damage: 557-572
Spell: None
Ranged, shoots Quartz Blocks
Elemental Damage: ❋
Elemental Defense: ❋
Elemental Weakness: ✹

 

95,000 xp is a bit much for this quest.
The LE should be given at the end of the series. It doesn't really make sense that you just receive money out of nowhere.

I like the concept though. I would like to see the other two parts. Hopefully they will be really long to compensate for this really short quest.