Quest Lv 75 Fall Of Ragni (remake)

start with talking to Arnold in the office of the Castle in ragni

if your not high enough lv oh god we need help but you don't seem strong enough plz come back when you are lv 75

if you are high enough lv
1. oh god we need your help, the king turned into stone this night
2. we found him this morning and he dosen't have a son to take over for him
3. but our chef Sheif know more. It whas him who found the king
4. go talk to him now please, he's in the kitchen. It's just down stairs and the first door to the left

go talk to Sheif in the kitchen

1. oh so you want to hear about the king. Yes it's tragic
2. I walked into he's room with he's breakfast when i saw a shadow in the window
3. I asked him who it was. The only thing he said whas your worst nighmare, then I got knocked out
4. and when I woke up the king whas petrified
5. but you should go back to Arnold, he knows what you should do from here

go back to Arnold in the office

1. so you talked to Sheif, oh good, and he told you everything, okay
2. so now you know what situation we are in
3. but the king had one enemy, he's a mage living in Maltic
4. you should go know. I wrote the location down in the Little book you a running around with

go talk to the mage in Maltic at (cords)
name Surdan
before quest sarted shh im concentrating
after quest started

1. hello adventure, what brings you here to our humble town
2. what! how dare you blame me for such a horrible thing?
3. i know that me and the king had our issues, but im not a murder
4. but i do think i know something that can help him. It's a potion called potion of ever life
5. but i can't make it for you. it's impossible to make, but you can wish one
6. you just need to get the Sapphire of wishes. it's located at the volcano island
7. i wrote down the location in your quest book. now plz go, I need to get done with my Work

go to the volcana Island (cords)
when you come there, there will be a cave. before the quest you hear dark whispers from the cave. you should not go down there
walk into the cave

the cave has 4 floors each with a challenge. when you complete the challenge there will be a door at the end of the room that opens up and the 5th floor will be a boss floor

room number 1. a parkour going in a cirkel shape until you hit the end of the room. if you fall you will be teleported back

room 2. a big room with 5 buttons ,each with a number. there is also 5 pillars, each with a parkour to the top. when you get to the top there will be a sign saying eg `5 is the first` and so on, till you at last are having the code

room 3. there will be a sign saying "the Capitals flag is the code". Next to the sign there will be 3 buttons, each with their own color. one is yellow and red (the right one) and one is green and one is red and white

room 4. in this room there will be a code similar to the one in deaths realm. And a sign saying you got the code on your journy. there will be the letters n i g h m a r e t and b (yes the code is nightmare)

room 5. when you enter this room: you feel a cold chill and suddenly you here a voice
??? hello adventure i am the sapphire guardian
Sappire guardian it's been a long time since anyone has been here, but i know what you came for.
so my last test to you. face me, and test your powers

this room is an arena with lava around it (invisible walls, so you can't fall) at the end of the room there will be a teleporter
Sapphire guardian
defence to earth and water, taking 25% damage
weak to wind and lighting, taking 50% more damge
Health 150000. regen every 12 second, 20000
damage: 400-600 fire damage, 400-600 neutral damage
drops sapphire of wishes. a blue coble stone

take the teleporter

the room is very shiny and there will be a pool in the middle
there will be at voice saying
you did good, just jump into my pool and get your wish
if your inventory is full, nothing will happen, but if it's not full, you will loose the sapphire and get the potion of ever life. you will then get teleported out and up in front of the cave
when you get back to Arnold he will say

1. oh thanks god, you are back. i thought you where dead and we all should die
2. and you got something to cure him with. oh god, you are truly a hero
Arnold runs into the Kings champer and comes out again
3. it's working. i think i saw him move a bit
4. but take this as your reward and go. you are truly a hero
reward: 270.000 xp 5 le and 1 potion of ever life 2 charges back effect heal to full Health and remove all effects

ok every body i have really tried to make it bether this time with gramar and now its not just toA all of it so i hope you like and plz give me more feedback i really like to make quests its ben fun so far so tell me what you think :D

 

The Potion of Ever Life sounds like an interesting concept, though the quest itself seems somewhat out-of-place. For what reason is the king being petrified for? This can be solved if you change the NPCs up a bit, and explain more on the reasoning.

 

You will get it if people like my idea I'm gonna make a part 2

 

Okay, but keep in mind that quest ideas like this involving main characters (in this case, the King of Ragni) will likely not be accepted (not to mention that normal quests aren't usually accepted), so you'll have to be really descriptive about the lore and such.

 

Involving him and involving you don't have to take to him everybody is just talking about him

 

Everything I could find wrong about this suggestion:
1) RIP night theme users. (That's a LOT of people who could help with your quest.)
2) Oh, and the quest dialogue is a bit too... how you say, "breaking the fourth wall". Why would you use "plz" in an RPG whose setting is in a Medieval era?
3) Use proper grammar.
4) Volcana Island. Reallllyyy. That's... a bit unoriginal and bland. Makes me think of a volcanic island.
5) ...Make your own coordinations dangit!
6) Lots of typos.
7) How do you suppose we can make the king of RAGNI stone? It's the first NPC new players go to after the tutorial! Why would they talk to a stone statue?
8) Uhm, jump into a pool? Why not make it a portal to make it a bit more interesting?

Eh, just follow my guidelines and edit the suggestion then I might support this, but for now, I can't even read this without cringing. Good day.

 

Welcome to the General Suggestions subforums.

 

fix grammar again, honestly.

 

It should give more xp and 20k regen every 5 seconds is too op.

 

every 10 seconds is fair.

 

That's still too op, even death is only 14k every 10 seconds

 

Woah, woah woah. Hold on a second. Wait for the official story line to be released, and then we'll talk.

actually no it's bad either way

 

WAIT
So if the king turned into stone that means lower levels (like level 1-15) won't see the king dead? so weird