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Star Light

(Quest Book)
Easy
lvl 30
Talk to Xichu (Zi - Shu) at X -416 Z -3814

(Before you are lvl 30) Xichu: Hey Who are you cant you see I am looking at this star!

Xichu: Hmm this is odd... Ohh it is someone from Ragni it is good to see that more people are in Wynn, but I need your help, you see I have been looking at this star time and time again but each time I look at it all I see is it gets darker.

Xichu: I cant see the star very well, so I cant see what is doing this I know a mage named Malo at X -818 Z 2861 he can create pure power that can take you to the star I need to keep watching it because long ago Dern and Wynn had a war dern using Magic and Wynn using pure power as all of the archers got taken by Derns king

Xichu: Wynn lost a lot of its power and Dern had won. Before Dern got the chance to destroy Wynn, a great dark wizard used all of his powers to move Wynn to a new planet. The planet was known for its huge size not all of Wynn could fit so Gavel was made... I think Dern has started to take over as our old home lost its magic Dern has now found a chance to end us all because of the Dark Wizards "care" he never moved the "Heart of Wynn"

Xichu: The Heart of Wynn gave Wynn and its people life but Dern wanted to take that life and turn it to darkness and now you must stop Dern from doing this as it will destroy all of us. If you can get t0 our old planet fast I'm sure you can stop Dern but don't enter Dern you will die from Derns strength or from the darkness eating you.

(talk to him a second time)

Xichu: go on now save us all!
[Quest Book Updated]

Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Talk to Malo at X -818 Z 2861

(before you start the quest)

Malo: ZZZZZzzzzzz


Malo: ZZZZZzzzzzzTrzzzzzaszzzzhzz

[Quest Book Updated]

Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Throw away the trash on the floor

Malo: ZZZZzzzzzz huh what NO! how dare you just Throw away my test like that go get it back from the basement now!

[Quest Book Updated]


Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Get the test back

Malo: good you got it back now why are you here? Hmmm if what you say is true we must act fast.
Malo: I can get you a spell to stop Dern but I don't have what I need Bring me [1 Eye of bat],[1 Sheep's faith] and [1 Golem Heart] that is what I need to make the potion,


[Quest Book Updated]

Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Get [1 Eye of bat],[1 Sheep's faith] and [1 Golem Heart] for Malo.


(talk to him a second time)

Malo: this is no time to play in the grass go on get me [1 Eye of bat],[1 Sheep's faith] and [1 Golem Heart]!

Malo: good you got all the items to make the potion.
Malo: This potion will give you the power to enter the Mushroom cave to get me what I need to get you to Dern.
Malo: You didn't know I was going to make a power potion for you? well just go get me [1 Golden Mushroom]




[Quest Book Updated]

Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Get Malo [1 Golden Mushroom] at the cave at X -858 Z -3624

???: are you looking for a Golden Mushroom? well they are not here they all got melted away from the lava.
???: what is my name? I go by many names but I am known for my scams call me Arcayan.
Arcayan: I can sell you a Golden Mushroom not for emeralds but if you can beat me in a fight ha ha.
Arcayan: you really think you can win? do you even know what I can do!?! I can rip all worlds into nothing and you think you can beat me in a fight?
Arcayan: HA bring it on. Walk on into that small cave it will take us to my battle area where all I keep all of my slaves who lost.

*Go into the coal and end up in a cage find a way out and find Arcayan*

Mushroom lover: psst come over here I know what you want.
Mushroom lover: when Arcayan said he scams you should have not gone with him!
Mushroom lover: the Mushroom you are looking for is over here.



[Quest Book Updated]




Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Report Back to Malo

Malo: ahh you got it. lets see a little dab of that a jar of that *sings* mmm mmm cooking with love cooking with love!
Malo: ok all done but once you drink this you cant come back until you save wynn ok?




[Quest Book Updated]

*drink it*

Derns King: Why is it that you have come here!
Derns King: If you think we will let you stop us from doing the Act of Dern you are wrong.
Derns King: all of my people,Knights,Wizards,Slaves of Wynn and more of your people are looking for the Heart of Wynn.
Derns King: Guards! lock this one up I think this one could be a perfect new slave ha ha.


Kaspar the Guard: YOU GET OVER HERE!

*Kill Kaspar*

Derns King: I might not be a wizard but I can still do magic!
Derns King: areheroshiba deroloba KATROBA!!!!

*You Wake up with your arm stuck to a chain... it makes you feel weak, you also see what looks to be a bright red sun get dropped down in a deep hole*

*Kaspar cuts the chain off your arm*

Kaspar: Please Master of Wynn you must save us I broke free of The Kings spell but it wont be long until he gets me again please take this Heart of Wynn.
Kaspar: Just leave me!




[Quest Book Updated]

(Talk to him again)

Kaspar: GO!

*Kaspar sends you back to Wynn*



Star Light

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Easy
lvl 30
Report Back to Malo and give him the Heart of Wynn

Malo: Thank god you are back and with the Heart of Wynn!
Malo: I really don't want it to take up space take it back to Xichu.

(talk to him again)

Malo: Thank you....

Xichu: WOW you really got it back! I feel you can hide the Heart of Wynn on your own please take this as a reward.

40,000 xp
8000 Emeralds
Heart of Wynn

here is one idea I have let me know if it is good and how I can make it better :D

 

It's really good but the grammar needs some work,not saying i can do better though...

 

I don't really care about that it just needs a little more time I can fix it with some time

 

1. 8,000 emeralds.
8,000.
This is a level thirty quest, right?
8,000 emeralds is 1 LE and 3,904 emeralds, which is almost another LE! Far too much.
2. The war of realms is not between Wynn and Dern- It's Dern and Gavel. Wynn is just ground zero for the war.
3. Dern is probably going to be an insanely high level area, surpassing difficulties of Ahmsord at many points.
4. What my ninja Ardell said
5. Proper quest text layout. An example of the proper ordering:
[1/4] Eriniar: Quickly! We don't have much time.
[2/4] Vasco: Eyy! Let's do this.
Suddenly, the ground shakes with a massive tremor. You nearly fall over.
[3/4] Eriniar: What the hell!?
[4/4] Raynard: YOU SHALL ALL DIE!