New Quest: Corruption Sources

Min level: 87

Difficulty: Hard

Talk to Drallius in Llevigar at (x,y,z)

Before level 87:

[1/1] Drallius: Help Wynn! Help our neighbor Wynn! Wait, you're not powerful enough yet! Come back when you're level 87!

At level 87 and beyond:

[1/6] Drallius: Help Wynn! Help our neighbor Wynn!
[2/6] Drallius: Corruption has found refuge in places of Wynn!
[3/6] Drallius: Each refuge place has a corrupted monster and prisoners trapped for the process of corruption!
[4/6] Drallius: Fight the four monsters! You have defeated one already, the Corrupter of Worlds, but can you defeat the other three?
[5/6] Drallius: One refuge place is hidden in Nesaak Forest, the other in the desert, and another one in the mesa!
[6/6] Drallius: Fight the desert corruption monster first. When you have defeated him, collect the [1 Desert Essence] as proof you have defeated it!

Collect [1 Desert Essence] and bring it to Drallius

Before getting the essence:

[1/1] Drallius: I need [1 Desert Essence] to let you defeat the two other monsters!

After getting the essence:

[1/3] Drallius: You have found the essence!
[2/3] Drallius: But can you defeat the second monster?
[3/3] Drallius: Bring me [1 Mesa Essence] as proof you have defeated the monster!

Bring back [1 Mesa Essence] to Drallius

Before getting the essence:

[1/1] Drallius: I need [1 Mesa Essence] to let you defeat the final monster!

After getting the essence:

[1/3] Drallius: You are almost finished with every monster!
[2/3] Drallius: Can you defeat the final and hardest corruption monster, in the Nesaak Forest?
[3/3] Drallius: Bring me [1 Frost Essence] as proof you have defeated the corrupted monster!

Collect [1 Frost Essence] and bring it to Drallius

Before getting the essence:

[1/1] Drallius: Bring me [1 Frost Essence], and I will grant you the title of a great warrior.

After getting the essence:

[1/4] Drallius: You have the essence!
[2/4] Drallius: All the monsters are defeated and corruption is finally fading from Wynn!
[3/4] Drallius: To be grateful, I will grant you the title of a great warrior and emeralds!
[4/4] Drallius: Thank you for helping Wynn.

Rewards:

450000 XP
68900 Emeralds
+ [1 Wynn's Letter]

Mobs:

Corrupter of Sands

Location: Cave behind WynnExcavation Site A

Level: 135
Health: 250000
Damage: 2700
Regen: 14000
Special Attacks: Throw Sand/Blindness
Drops: Desert Essence

Corrupter of Stone

Location: Cave north of Rymek

Level: 145
Health: 500000
Damage: 3690
Regen: 18000
Special Attacks: Spin Attack
Drops: Mesa Essence

Corrupter of Frost

Location: Ruined Ice Temple

Level: 155
Health: 750000
Damage: 4580
Regen: 25000
Special Attacks: Throw Snowballs
Drops: Frost Essence



If you talk to Drallius after finishing the quest:

[1/1] Drallius: Thank you so much for saving our neighbour Wynn!

 

But...

walking... so much walking... ;-;

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I'm glad you at least included a good amount of detail in the mob stats and dialogue, as well as structure, but that is still far outweighed by the generally boring dialogue (I.e: "But can you defeat the second monster?"), and so on. In addition, the quest idea itself is based around an overused: "Find this, bring it back, get $$$," cliche, which the content team has gotten over doing. Plus, the amount of traveling back and forth this quest would require is painful to even imagine.

In conclusion? I applaud you for the effort put in in certain areas, but in the end, your quest was simply lacking.

 

So your quest making has significantly improved from when you began designing quests!

However, this quest has a few things I would not enjoy. As Orient listed, the quest type of "Bring me _ to get the money" is very overused. I know how hard it is to think up an idea that is entirely unique, but it doesn't have to be all that different. It can be a old type of quest with an incredibly new coat of paint that would make it look amazing! Overall you put in great effort and detail, but the quest lacks in overall "Wow" factor.

 

I think the reason why this quest is hard is because of the travel, right...?

 

No, it's not hard, it'd just be really tedious, tedious to the point where no one will want to do the quest.

 

Hmmm



"As the war of corruption FADES in Wynn" is what it says at the start.

There kinda needs to be an explaination as to why the corruption is rising, plus this quest should take place in wynn cause really no one wants to travel over the sea again and again. The Llama has made a point!

 

those monsters are supposed to be the reminants of corruption

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anyway, at least i mentioned llevigar, right...?

 

Good point, but still traveling across the ocean is a pain

 

well, maybe to prepare, bring some tp scrolls to nesaak and almuj?

 

Unless they have scrolls in Gavel, you'll still have to travel across the ocean again.