World New Quest For Gavel

Requires: A bread merchant in gavel (NPC), a professional fisherman in Gavel (Quest NPC), a fisherman on the ocean close to the Gavel door (Quest NPC).

Talk to the fisherman on the ocean near Gavel door.
Fisherman: Oh, hello stranger! I haven't seen anyone in a while.
Fisherman: You see, I am at the ocean far away from any civilization.
Fisherman: My food supplies are very small and I need to refill them very soon.
Fisherman: Could you go to Gavel and bring me 17 Gavel bread, I will pay you sometime.
Bring the fisherman 17 Gavel bread from a bread merchant in Gavel.
Fisherman: Thank you! But that was not all...
Fisherman: I need something to drink too. Bring me 8 potions of drunkenness from Nemract, so I can give you some emeralds for the help.
Bring the fisherman 8 potions of drunkenness.
Fisherman: Great! Exactly what I wanted!
Fisherman: So, here's your 11 emerald blo...
Fisherman: Wait! I was thinking if you could get a special fishing rod for me.
Fisherman: There is a professional fisherman on the beach, who owns this rod.
Fisherman: He wants to have some useless book I wrote, it's about the Roots Of Corruption.
Fisherman: I myself cannot go there and trade them, because the pirates could attack.
Fisherman: If you can give him this book and bring me the fishing rod, I will double your payment.
Talk to the professional fisherman near Gavel door.
Professional fisherman: Hey look! A new adventurer came to ask something!
Professional fisherman: Oh, you are here for that old smelly stick with some string?
Professional fisherman: He still wants it? Well, he has to give me the book about corruption before I can give the rod to him.
Professional fisherman: Is that the book?
Professional fisherman: Great! Now I have some bedtime stories! Well, not really, but I can read it sometime.
Professional fisherman: Here, take it and bring it to the crazy man on the sea, I don't use that anymore.
Bring the rod to the fisherman on the ocean
Fisherman: Yes! Now I finally have it!
Fisherman: You might be wondering why I wanted to have this junk.
Fisherman: Well, I heard it has some kind of magic to lure fish to swim close to it, then they just stare at it and you can catch them with just your fists.
Fisherman: Yes, yes, here is your reward, now please go I want to test it straight away!

I know the "Bring me stuff" quests are bad but this is my first time writing one so please don't hate.
Please tell me how to make quests better so I can write better quests in the future.
If the Wynncraft developers want to add this in the game (no they don't want to), they can fully choose the names of the NPC's, items, the rewards, etc. Mine are just suggestions and examples.

 

Why would his food supplies be low when he is right next to Gavel, it would make sense if he was on an island or something.
Even though you realize it is a fetch quest, try to add something that makes it more than that.