[quest] A Rising Opponent

Level minimum: 56

Starting location: https://map.wynncraft.com/#/468/64/-1975/-1/0/0

Talk to Corlid at [XYZ]

PreQuest:
[1/1]Corlid: Hey you! I need your help! Wait... your not strong enough, come back at level 56!

Quest;
[1/5]Corlid: Hey you! I need your help!
[2/5]Corlid: The junk merchants have sent their junk to a new person, Mitchanecul.
[3/5]Corlid: I went to his house and looked in his basement, i found a suspicious looking piece of paper.
[4/5]Corlid: It was about a plan to create an abomination that no one could defeat.
[5/5]Corlid: So please investigate this, i'm a bit of a coward.

Go to Mitchanecul's house https://map.wynncraft.com/#/826/64/-2197/max/0/0 and kill Mitchanecul.

Mitchenacul
HP: 5000
DMG: 200
SPEED: Same as an ogre skirmisher
APPEARANCE: Steve skin with leather armour

After you kill Mitchenacul he drops [Atrocious plans] give it to Corlid

[1/3]Corlid: Thank you!
[2/3]Corlid: These plans are, atrocious!
[3/3]Corlid: Wait, what is this? The junk is used to create a giant zombie? Quickly! Kill it!

Go to [cave] (Im not sure which one lol)

A giant zombie will spawn and you have to kill it.

Abomination
HP: 25000
DMG: 500
SPEED: Very slow
Powers: Charge
Regen: 300 hp every 10 seconds

After you kill it he drops [Giant skull] give it back to Corlid

[1/3]Corlid: You killed it!
[2/3]Corlid: You have saved thousands of people
[3/3]Corlid: Here is my reward for you, good adventurer.

Rewards:
XP: 120000
Emeralds: 1 le

Giant skull

HP:1000
+1 tier attack speed
+2 dexterity
+2 strength
+2 agility
+2 defense
+2 intelligence
-20% loot bonus
-5% walk speed

 

This lacks lore and content. It's a fetch quest, and we don't want that in Wynncraft.

The quest seems balanced though, if you could fit some more content in it would be a lot better.

Breaking into some person's home and killing them because somebody told you that you should is also not a good idea. I would change that.

 

You should probably add some text for Mitchenacul showing that he is hostile, figure out the cave for the boss fight, buff the abominations hp regen possibly a little bit, and it might be a little better.

 

It does lack detail but the overall plot is nice. But when fighting the zombie, you should add minions or something. But it also kinda reminds me of Rise Of the Quartzon or something

 

1. I'll admit the mob caught my eye. 4 stats isn't nearly enough. Here, this is a mob I made a while ago for a quest; Sure, it might be over-the-top, but that definitely helps.

Spoiler: Lost Spirit

Lost Spirit
Mob: Invisible Mob
Level: 82
HP: 5407
Regen: 328
Damage: 557-572
Spell: None
Ranged, shoots Quartz Blocks
Elemental Damage: ❋
Elemental Defense: ❋
Elemental Weakness: ✹

2. An ogre skirmisher is quite slow. Are you sure you want a person to be that speed?
3. This Corlin fellow isn't a very good guy, either. He breaks into someone's house on a hunch then tells you to check it out, which ends up with you killing him.
4. Item stats. Again, I'll give you an example.

Spoiler: Timelocked Pendant

Timelocked Pendant

✓ Lv. Min: 16
✓ Quest Req: Dubious Luck

+5 Movement Speed
+2 Health Regen
+3 Mana Regen
-5 Defense

Rare Item

So that's all.
[Quest Book Updated]

 

This has been repeated, but in needs detail. Also, the title doesn't make much sense, but...


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