A New Quest. Update

For Admins and Builders directly. Build s giant cloud that has your choice of how to get there.
This quest is where you go and fight a mystical dragon in the clouds. The player has to be level 54 to continue this quest. The dragon can spawn Wither skeletons to make it more difficult.


Names
Dragon: The God Of The Sky
Villager: Camis (Cam-is)
Wither Skeletons: Baby Dragons

Dialogue
Villager: Did you know there's a dragon in this land.
Villager: Yes, people have heard of it's appearance to other lands. and now it rests on this very island.
Villager: Once it's energy is fully revived this land will parish from his flames and destruction.
Villager: If you kill the dragon you'll be rewarded. But I need proof.
Villager: So if you really do kill the dragon bring me back one of his claws.
Villager: You might not make it back alive but you will be remembered as a brave warrior.
Villager: So Be gone!!!!!

After killing the dragon.

Villager: No Way!! You actually killed him.
Villager: I thought you were dead.
Villager: Well anyways you did this land a favor. Now here is your reward.
End of Dialogue

Rewards

83,600 XP
32 emeralds
Dragon's Skin: Chest plate (540 health, LVL required 56)

Health
Dragon: 1100
Baby Dragons: 120

Thank you for reading my Updated Version of this quest. If you have any other ideas to add please let me know.

 

Wither skeleton has no resemblance to a baby dragon but k. A bigass cloud would cause lag. This is a copy paste of basically maltic's well. Mummy's bandage and hide of gregg'r are both lower level and better 32 emeralds is nothing. What would the id's be on the dragon's skin. It'd be better to use one ! not !!!!!. Also, this is basic af we are trying to move AWAY from basic.

 

I chose wither skeltons cause the only other thing that looks like the ender dragon is a enderman

 

Specify how to get to the quest location yourself. If you create a quest suggestion, you include all the details instead of forcing the GMs to do it. What are the stats of the mobs? The XP reward and the emerald reward are too small, so check quests on the wiki around that level for some guidance. You also need to show all the stats of the Chestplate, and there's also a chestplate later in the game that has too similar of a name (I think it's the Dragon Hide Plate). Not to mention that adding an ender dragon in the game would stir up tons of bugs and be almost impossible to fit into the mob system. The quest itself is also way too simple, and that plot has been done across any fantasy setting over a million times, and quests should be unique.

 

This quest lacks detail and quality overall. Plus adding an ender dragon wouldn't be possible and would be very glitchy. In addition the 32 emeralds reward is to little and you haven't stated how to get up to the cloud. I suggest reading some of the gavel quest and adding some of their stats and ideas to your quest.

 

then use endermen...

 

Could there be some Color Text?


Also, i'm with everone else with the opinion of the quest. Also, could you get into Wynncraft more? Your "Newbie Adventurer" tittle doesn't help your case...

 

or y'know bats like the real baby dragons at ozoth's place

 

Bats have been used as a "Baby Dragon" in Gavel. And instead of a enderdragon as a boss (wouldn't happened even if you tried) maybe try something like Quartron...just a thought.

 

... What is the dragon mob? the chestplate is crap and nobody would ever use it, The dialogue is too short, the quest is too short, the emeralds reward is too short, Just stop please, id like a castle in sky also but no.

 

The chest plate is terrible. At level 54 level a good one would be 800-1000 health. I don't mind the idea of the quest, as it seems pretty fun, but it doesn't add to the plot in any way, and it's really a 3 step quest. No traveling, or uniqueness to it. If you could buff the chest plate, and add more steps to the quest in general it seems like it could have potential.

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Also, the hp on these bosses is very low. Im not sure if you've reached level 54 yet, but as a mage, i do up to 1200 damage + with one meteor spell. Assasin, comonly regarded as the worst class, would 3 shot this with his basic attacks, or with 1 hit from multi-hit. 1000 hp is not viable for a boss. A better number would be around 7000, and the baby dragons be around 900. Also emerald reward too low. But good try.