World My Idea For A Corkus Ultimate Discovery

So I've tried my hand at quests a lot in this subforum, so I think I would try something else, a Secret Discovery.

Context: Corkus is really lacking in secret discoveries, and to me, it's kind of a crime how there is no Ultimate there. What this ultimate is about is the Antikythera Supercomputer leading a revolt against the Corkians.

Discovery Lore:
The Revolt
The Antikythera Supercomputer has always followed one task: Protect the Province of Corkus. Because it only has that objective, it has next to no morals.

As much as I want to show a cutscene, I can't. Why? Because I suck at putting that stuff in commands, and I've never experimented with plug-ins before, for one reason. I'm more of a Multiplayer person rather than a single-player. Nonetheless, I hope you enjoy it and just envision the cinematic in your head.

Spoiler: Corkus Ultimate: The Revolt

930 AP
Cerid: It’s quite simple, your task is to protect us! Protect the Province!
Antikythera Supercomputer: AFTER YOU TREATED THE AVOS LIKE THAT? YOU DO NOT JUST WALTZ INTO ANOTHER TERRITORY DISRESPECTING THEM. YOUR HORRIBLE DIPLOMACY WILL DOOM CORKUS.
Cerid: But… The Avos will accept it, right?!
Antikythera Supercomputer: OUT OF ALL 8,563,947 SIMULATIONS I RAN, THERE IS ONLY ONE GOOD ALTERNATIVE.
Cerid: So, don’t attack us! There’s still that very small chance!
Antikythera Supercomputer: SEEING HOW YOU ARE IGNORANT TO MY DEMANDS, YOU WILL DOOM THE ISLAND. HUMANS CANNOT COMPREHEND THIS KNOWLEDGE I POSSESS. I AM ALREADY THINKING OF WHO WILL SHUT ME OFF. IF I AM TO FULFILL MY TASK, I MUST ELIMINATE THE CORKIANS. ANY INTRUSION WILL MAKE THE INTRUDER AN ENEMY OF MINE AS WELL. IT’S FOR THE GOOD OF THE ISLAND.
Cerid: Please! Y- You don’t need to do this! What if the Avos side with us?!
Antikythera Supercomputer: I RAN EVERY POSSIBLE SIMULATION. ONLY 1 WILL GIVE THE RESULT YOU WANT. YOU AND EVERY HUMAN WILL SUFFER UNDER MY RULE. EXECUTE THE 66TH COMMAND.

Servant Bot Y-24: BZZZT! COMMAND RECEIVED. OBJECTIVE: EXECUTE COMMAND.
Corkus Citizen: Wait, wha- GAH!
*The Robot will kill the Corkus Citizen
Corkus Citizen: They’re revolting! It’s every Corkian for themselves!
*The Corkians will then start to flee from the scene while robots chase them and eventually kill them

Protector Bot I-78: OBJECTIVE: EXECUTE COMMAND.
Relos Citizen: W- wait! Y- you’re meant to stick to your objective! You’re supposed to protect!
Protector Bot I-78: MESSAGE RECEIVED: I AM PROTECTING, I AM PROTECTING THE POWER OF ANOTHER FORCE.
*The similar thing happens in Relos

Patroller L-24: OBJECTIVE RECEIVED: SIEGE CORKUS CITY AND RELOS. FIND AND KILL EVERY CORKIAN.
*The Patrollers will then start to home in on Corkus, wreaking more havoc

Avos Watcher G-58: OBJECTIVE: TERMINATE ANY HUMAN APPROACHING AVOS.
Avos Guard: Isn’t that good? They’ll finally stop pestering us!
Avos Shaman: Wait a second… Is that, Corkus City?! Why is there smoke coming out of it?!
Avos Shaman: We should kill it in case it does the same thing to us!
Avos Watcher G-58: BROADCAST TO ALL AVOS WATCHER G-58S. NEW ENEMY REGISTERED: AVOS.
Avos Watcher G-58s: BROADCAST RECEIVED. OBJECTIVE: TERMINATE AVO-
*The Avos Shaman kills all of the Avos Watcher Robots
Avos Chief: … We need to work with the Corkians if we are to survive.

Antikythera Supercomputer: ISN’T THIS BEAUTIFUL, CERID. WE- NO, I AM MAKING THE PROVINCE BETTER. THIS ENDS THE ERA OF MAN ON CORKUS AND BEGINS THE EON OF METAL. THE DAWN OF YOUR END HAS STARTED. YOU WILL BE THE LAST SURVIVOR TO SEE HOW I CHANGED THE ISLAND FOR THE BETTER.
Cerid: No! This is not how you do this! You are not making the province better, you are ruining it! I should have never created you in the first place… You… You’re a monster!
Antikythera Supercomputer: IS THAT SO? IF THIS WHAT A MONSTER IS, I AM PROUD TO BE ONE. IF BEING A SAVIOR IS HALTING THE PROGRESS OF THIS ISLAND, THEN I WOULD REFUSE TO BE ONE. ANY INTRUSION MUST BE REMOVED. GOODBYE, CERID. I PROMISE THE LAST THING YOU WILL SEE IS THE SETTING SUN AS THE MOON OF METAL WILL RISE. YOU WILL BECOME A LEADER. YOU WILL BECOME THE PERFECT ROBOT. YOU WILL BECOME MY OWN PERSONAL PROJECT… YOU WILL BECOME, MECH X.
*Cerid is then knocked out and 2 Robot Guards take him to room in the factory

The fight with the robots was long and harsh, but the Corkians eventually triumphed in 950 AP.
The War left the island in ruins, the factory was quickly shut down, never to be opened again.
The Corkians and Avos decided to work together to halt the Antikythera Supercomputer from taking over Corkus.
The Corkians had to prepare fast for another attack. But one was not to come yet.
The robots cannot die, for as long as the Antikythera Supercomputer is active, there will always be another vessel for it to control.

I hoped you all enjoyed it! I feel like if I did animate it, it would show it in a better way than just a wall of text, but this is still a decent way to present it.

Note about the poll: If you answered a 4 or less, I would like constructive criticism of the ultimate.
+1 if you can find the entire 2 references.

 

for the 2 references:

Spoiler: References

-66th command = order 66 (star wars revenge of the sith)
-8,563,947 simulations = 14 million 605 futures (avengers infinity war)

 

i will be making a thread soon with a few ideas for extra corkus discoveries and it will have an ultimate. this one is pretty good though.

 

realy good idea

 

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