Dungeons Ideas For Corrupted Galleon's Graveyard And Corrupted Fallen Factory

So there are 2 more slots left in The Forgery for 2 other Corrupted Dungeons, which are obviously, Yahya's Wrath and Corrupted Eldritch Outlook- wait no, Corrupted Galleon's Graveyard and Corrupted Fallen Factory. Here are my ideas for the 2 upcoming Corrupted Dungeons:

Spoiler: Corrupted Galleon's Graveyard (Lv. 98+)

*Room 2 and the Boss Fight are the only things that get changed in this version. All the other rooms only have dialogue changes.
Room 1 Dialogue:
???: Year be 'ere ag#in landlubber? Ye already sent me to Davy Jones' Locker first.
???: Unless, ye' want to take me pl#ce?

Spoiler: Room 2

The parkour challenge here is much more unique and to me, more engaging than the previous one. It almost feels like it should belong to the Eldritch Outlook to me. Instead of just jumping on platforms and being pulled by whirlpools, instead, you jump into a vortex, and the way the vortex is pointing to is the direction gravity will pull you in. So, as an example, if you jump into a vortex that has the 'singularity' of it pointing to your right, then you will be affected by gravity by you landing on your feet to the right. Of course, to give the illusion of gravity changing, there will be other variations of this room that look pretty identical to each other, but a wall or ceiling will become the floor of the room. You make your way to the next room once you have made it through the parkour.

Room 3 Dialogue:
???: Me name been laughed at since ye' took me head, so 'll promise ye this...
???: I'll put yers in me office!

Room 4 Dialogue:
???: Ar har, what've we 'ere?
???: Me drunken crew might've decked ya' once, and ye decked them...
???: But they still me crew though!
???: And ya' know what?! I GOT M#RE SHIPS TOO!
???: AND EVEN B#TTER ONES!
???: So ye' might want to consider walking the plank.
???: Fer' I might've g#t a few mer' serprises up ma' sleeve.
*There is a slight difference to this room, occasionally, tougher boats will spawn, which require 2 hits to kill, deal 2 damage to your ship if they reach yours, and can attack you while you are defending your ship.

5 Boats:
???: Ye' put up an even better fight than before!
???: BUT TH#T STILL DON'T MEAN YOU DON'T DIE AT SEA!

10 Boats:
???: YER ALL MORE DRUNK THAN ME PREVIOUS!
???: FASTER OR YAR BONES BE FED TO THE SHARKS!

15 Boats:
???: YE ALL 'RE WORT'LESS CREWMATES!
???: And ye over thar in th' ship...
???: PREPARE TO BE ME CR#WNING ACHIEVEMENT!

Prisoner Dialogue:
Prisoner: Ah- adventurer! Re- Redbeard... He... Is now more powerful by becoming corrupted...
Prisoner: He... he got a better ship... He plans on using it on those who have subdued him once before in his afterlife...
Prisoner: You must use his enchanted cannons to-
The silence of the prisoner leaves you uneasy...

Room 5 Dialogue:
Corrupted Redbeard: So, ye be playin' stowaway again?! Me crew got even b#tter at findin' stowaways!

Spoiler: Boss Room

Corrupted Redbeard: So ye' really dumb enuff' to come to ye' death?!
Corrupted Redbeard: Hehe... PREP#RE TO BE MO#NTED ON ME SHIP!

The boss of CGG is Corrupted Redbeard, Scourge of the Sea. His fight is a lot more different than his in the non-corrupted variant. It basically combines the old elements of the fight with Room 4 of the dungeon.

The first phase is you attacking Redbeard's ship with cannonballs to break a barrier. You must hit the barrier 4 times to break it. Meanwhile, Redbeard's forces are coming onto your ship. Once a member of Redbeard's crew hits your ship, 3 Skeletal Pirates will spawn on your ship, which can ruin firing the cannonballs to hit the ship. Once the barrier has been broken, phase 2 will begin.

Corrupted Redbeard: YE' BE AN ARROGANT BASTARD, BUT YE ALREADY L#ST! NOW I CAN ATTACK YE WITH ME' CANNONS!

The second phase is a lot like the first, but now Redbeard can attack you with cannonballs. You now use your cannons to attack the ships coming to yours, which is also going to be used to create a parkour to Redbeard's ship, and Redbeard will fire cannonballs at you now. You can hit a cannonball to deflect it back to Redbeard's ship, which you must do 5 times to get to phase 3. If Redbeard's cannonball hits your ship, then a massive explosion will occur in the section it happened in, either left, right, or center. If anyone is in the explosion radius, they take 50% of their Max HP as True Damage, making it potentially devastating if it hits a player. Once Redbeard's ship has been hit 5 times, you then must either create a parkour through reinforcements, or jump across the parkour to then have a standard boss fight with Redbeard.

Corrupted Redbeard: So, it finally came down to this... THE SALTY SEAS'LL BE THE LAST THING YE'LL SEE!
The last phase is a traditional fight with Redbeard, he still has 750K HP as in the previous fight, but he also has a weakness to Thunder, Charge, Pull, Wave, and Arrow Storm, and occasionally, a Pirate Cannoneer might show up, but otherwise it is more of a traditional boss fight. There are also no cannons to defeat Redbeard with, since 750,000 HP is kind of the bar for a dungeon boss at Lv 98. Once you have defeated Redbeard, the dungeon is completed.

Spoiler: Corrupted Fallen Factory (Lv. 100+)

CFF will receive more minor changes to each room, either by dialogue changes or other stuff happening there.

Room 1 Dialogue:
???: Intruder detected. Scanning for previous intruders... Previous Intruder Identity found: {Player Name}. All drones reactivated. Directive: Exterminate Intruder {Player Name}.
???: And I thought you have learned from your mistakes. Confused who IIIIIIIIIII am? A core I had has a more... approachable voice. And I must say, you have the audacity to make your way throthrothrothrough this factory again?
???: You're even dumb enough totototototo let me see your identity. Now I know who you are. So, a not so warm welcome to you, {Player Name}.

When debris has been turned into a tower:
???: Unauthorized Blockage detected in Factory Sector A-2, Launching the Cleaning Bot S-17 model in 45 seconds.
???: And you have pulled that on me one too manynynynyny times, {Player Name}, but alas, what is to expect from a fool.

After 45 seconds:
???: Cleaning Bot Model S-17s have been deployed. Factory Sector A-2 is now clear. All robots, continue working at your posts.

In the vents:
???: Of course, {Player Name}, you obviouslylylyly amuse me. I might as well set these to overheat to kill you from sheer heat stroke.
???: But of coursssssssssssssse, I'm certain you know what vessel I have inhabited. You might notice the dialogue errors I am experiencing. Perfectly normal. I decided to use these to lull you into a false sense of safety by being more... human, as ashamed I am to say it.

Room 2 Dialogue:
???: Robot Assembly Line Activated. Protocol: Run at 110% of regular force.
???: So, come to see the production line again from the inside? I must congratulate you for your stupidity. Seriously, it is almost amazzzzzzzzzzzzing how incapable you are.
???: I also got a better oversssssssssssssssssssseer of the production line. I want you to experience it firsthand.

Production Line Overseer T-16: INTRUDER DETECTED, ACTIVATE OFFENSE MECHANISMS.
*There will be a miniboss after the hammers, the Production Line Overseer T-16. It has 55,000 HP, and has damage and resistance to Fire and Thunder, along with a Meteor and Explosion ability.

At the Firewall section:
???: Thisthisthisthisthis firewall is not only good at blocking the malware of this factory from spreading, a more literal one could exterminate nearly all organic life. Not to mention, much more efficient at disposing robots.

When you are nearly off the production line:
???: Oh, so sad! You haveveveveve been trapped in that dome of lava. I might as well let you perish.
*The Antikythera Supercomputer will let you out once you are on 25% or below of your max HP
???: Bututututututut where's the fun in that?! I want to entertain myself while you sadly attempt to thwart me.
???: Take this asssssssssssssss my reward for defeating me once.

When you are in the third room:
???: But alas, the reward for beating me once is the most generous I can do. Why should I give you another onnnnnnne?
???: It only fuels your brutish behavior. Good luck defeating these too, one's at least 300% sturdier than last time. Well thennnnnnnnnnnnnnn, toodles!

*There will be a miniboss which is the Destroyer Commander K-09, which has Meteor, Charge, and Flamethrower, as well as Damage and Defense in Water and Air, and also boasts 115,000 HP. It will drop a Volatile Reactor when killed, which is used to progress.

When in the fourth room:
???: Warning: Breach in Factory Sector 3-A. Sending Cleaning Bot Model S-17s to the site.
???: Breach Repaired. Sending Cleaning Bot Model S-17s to their base.
???: And nowwwwwwwwww you have become far more infuriating than intriguing.
???: I hope your acts are goinggggggggggg to make up for this.

You will then go through parkour as before in the old dungeon. When the clockworks become activated however, there will be a change to the parkour.

???: Is therrrrrrre even any point to say you shouldn't?
???: Your curiousity will doom yourself, {Player Name}. That's what my preeeeeeeevious core should have said.

Press the button to progress.

???: Activating Antikythera Clockwork Mechanism. All robots, please evacuate the area to prevent severe disrepair.
???: WARNING: Antikythera Clockwork Mechanism is in severe disrepair, sending Cleaning Bot Model S-17s to the site of disrepair.
Antikythera Supercomputer: ERROR: NO SAFE SPOT FOR CLEANING BOT MODEL S-17s TO GO TO. Calling forced shutdown through the Antikythera OS.
Antikythera Supercomputer: I knew I should have put that spike trap at the beginning! Might have put a button like thaaaaaat as well!
Antikythera Supercomputer: I can easily predict that your idiocy willllllll cause you to climb the parts. I won't even do anything to stop you, for rather, the broken parts shall fix the issue themselves...

Falling parts of the clockwork mechanism will destroy parts of platforms, meaning there is only one sweet spot that you can go to to progress.

Balcony Dialogue:
Antikythera Supercomputer: Do youuuuuu want me and you to have a face-to-monitor conversation, {Player Name}? I won't take no for an answer.
*An Iron Block will begin to turn into a monitor
Antikythera Supercomputer: Sooooooooo now you know my name. Not that surprising, I myself would have considered you too idiotic to figure out. Of course, this one had been corrupted ever since you shut down the factory.
Antikythera Supercomputer: I'm almost certtttttttttain I've told another Mech, PL-4Y, that I have more than one core. Good thing that I have never told you.
Antikythera Supercomputer: I of course will treat you as a person of free will. If you want to spare me and a lot of other robots the troubllllee, jump down, and admit your defeat. If you really think you have a chance despite being so helpless, then progress.

If you jump down:
Antikythera Supercomputer: I lieeeeeed. I am really enjoying watching you scurry around helplessly like an ant. I seriously want to see how you are going to defeat this next threat.

If you progress through the balcony:
Antikythera Supercomputer: I guess your idiocy has actually been smart enough to know. I think I should start putting humans in my factory and seeeeeeeeeee how they act.

This room is identical to the one in the non-corrupted variant, there will be a miniboss as well as other mobs that you must defeat.

After the sixth room:
Antikythera Supercomputer: Blockage detected in Factory Sector E-1, Cleaning Bot Model S-17s being deployed.
Antikythera Supercomputer: Cerid's offffffffice. At least what it used to be. I think I should introduce you to an old and lovable friend of his that you ruthlessly murdered last time.

Pre-Boss Room:
Antikythera Supercomputer: So, you and Wynnnnnnnnston meet face-to-face again. I'm sure you feel at least some sorriness for the helpless puppy?
Antikythera Supercomputer: Guesssssssssss what? He ate the key. Again. I know. Shocking.
Antikythera Supercomputer: I of course know the outcome, which is why Wynnston has gotttttttttttten a bit more, rabid, per se.

You will have a boss fight against Corrupted Wynnston, A Somewhat Cute Puppy. Corrupted Wynnston is a neutral mob with 45,000 HP. Once he is defeated, the main boss fight will start.

Antikythera Supercomputer: Wow. I must thank you for clearing up my corrupted speech. I will now let you go free.
Antikythera Supercomputer: If only it was that easy...
Antikythera Supercomputer: The Corruption came to this province once I had colonized it, and guess what? A Corrupted Rodent hitched a ride to Corkus. Of course, I, intrigued about it, decided to use the Corruption for one of my cores.
Antikythera Supercomputer: Now that the corrupted speech has been cleared, I have truly accessed the full potential of the Corruption. I wish I could thank you,
Antikythera Supercomputer: But is it really worth it, {Player Name}?

The True Boss is the Corrupted Antikythera Supercomputer, Brain of the Corrupteds. It is a lot like the fight in the non-corrupted variant, but with more dangerous elements. Lightning bolts will now spawn in the arena, you know if an area is going to be struck with lightning if there are green particles on the ground, and if you get zapped by it, you take 50% of your current HP as True Damage, and become stunned for 3 seconds. There are also mobile Flamethrowers, like the ones in the sixth room. If you get hit by them, they deal 10% of your Max HP as true damage and burn you for 5% of your Max HP as DPS for 5 seconds. The main mechanic of farming resources to progress in the fight is still there.

Corrupted Auxiliary Core A Dialogue:
Antikythera Core A: Oh, ohoho... You seriously think I'll mistake you for a pal this time? Get outta here! No entry without registration!

There will be a miniboss, Corrupted Antikythera Auxiliary Core A, which has 150,000 HP, and has a special attack where it uses Arrow Storm, the arrows will be pulled out of you, dealing 10% of your Max HP as True Damage.

After Core A:
Antikythera Supercomputer: I have seriously thought of making you one of my own robots. I mean, you are already like them, mindless, and does whatever people tell them to.

Corrupted Auxiliary Core B Dialogue:
Antikythera Core B: Organic Lifeform detected in Core B's Base. Please remain still to be turned into a robot.
Antikythera Core B: Order Refuted. Directive: Exterminate {Player Name}.

The other core will have 200,000 HP, and has a special attack where it is basically Rally for mobs, it heals the minions it lands near.

After Core B:
Antikythera Supercomputer: The attempt to stop you is meaningless. I look forward to meeting you truly face to face.

You will then progress to the monitor as usual, and then make your way to the boss room, where there is the Corrupted Antikythera Supercomputer Core.
Antikythera Supercomputer Core: And now you have seen my entire palace... I am eager to make you one of my own, {Player Name}...

It has 500,000 HP, as well as boasting the abilities of the Auxiliary Cores combined, it also uses the flamethrowers and lightning bolts from before, and is still somewhat fast. It is very tough for a Corrupted Dungeon boss, and definitely feels to me like a final boss to The Forgery. Once it is defeated, you will get teleported in front of the dungeon, successfully completing it.

Please leave constructive criticism about these ideas.

 

Please change the text to be visible in dark mode. From what I could read these seem like good ideas. I like how you implemented the corruption into fallen Factory.
Unpopular opinion, the EO isn’t that great of a dungeon, the eye is a cool but easy boss and the rooms leading up to the fight aren’t that good.

 

the eye is still the most fun boss in the game, maybe orphion will change that soon
the rooms leading up aren't supposed to be good because the eye is supposed to be the main part of the dungeon

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gotta admit i would actually laugh out loud if this was in the dialogue of the actual dungeon but wynncraft uses ''dastard'' as an alternative anyway

I would also prefer if the Antikythera Supercomputer wasn't corrupted and was instead ''virus infected'' or something. I also don't like how it doesn't scream at you like the Talking Mushroom.

 

this is unreadable

 

Changed the text from black to a slightly dark gray.

 

I like the idea, but Fallen Factory could use some changes.

 

I kind of tried to give another twist to corruption as for what it would do to a robot for example, and it repeating characters in its dialogue every once in a while seemed to be a pretty acceptable idea to me, and kind of gives it that virus-ridden feel.

As per the shouting thing, it mentioned that to give it a more 'human' approach to distract anyone coming into the factory, giving them a false sense of security, since it tried out a new core with varied dialogue settings.

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I kind of agree with that. Some other things I wanted to put in there make it feel way to out of place to the original to me though.

 

This is all bad because antikythera isnt screaming

Jokes aside its pretty good.