World New Area Idea: Circular Screams

Setting: The place has 18 circles, each connected by 3 railroads, each one having Netherrack or Ice (depending on the blocks in center will depend which mobs spawn from it, like how Blazions spawn from the Netherrack ones and the Bone Chillers from ice, ETC) in the center. The diameter of these circles range from 5-8 blocks, having redstone torches in them. Note: There are no walls around the railroads, but water, the circles make the formation of a skull, from Eagle Eye's view, and there is water in the center of the skull, and there are graves, along with a few short (around 14 blocks tall) mountains made of the selected blocks for the center of the circles., with magma on the peaks. This is a level 25 zone, which should be its own island, as in inside the ocean where Selchar, Legendary Island, but is near ETC are found, but is between Dead Island and Skiens Island. Houses here would contain a circular formation. (P.S: The circles came from the Nine Circles of Hell but wanted to change it so the setting isn't too religious, plus I'd rather have several small circles. There are 9 mobs that will be done in a bit, and 4 circles have the type of mob.

Anyway, one mob would be the Blazion, a zombie that has black leather armor, but with shading, so it looks like it got dunked in old lava (which is now obsidian). It is a level 30. It rides a zombie horse, but looks like it's on fire, with orange spikes. The Blazion heats it's 5 block around surroundings, giving them slowness, and shoots out 3 fireballs every 4 seconds, with a cooldown of 0.25 seconds for each fireball shot in the wave (P.S: I decided to make my kit idea, MineMurderer, which is a deleted thread to this, in case you're wondering why it's similar).
Circle Center Type: Netherrack.

Another mob idea I had was the Bone Chiller, a skeleton in cyan clothing (lvl 35) that throws icy blue particles, cause you to take heavy knockback, and being slowed by a bit. The cyan boots should look like skates, to show it can skate on any ground, having permanent Speed 1.
Circle Center Type: Ice or Snow

Mob 3: Lost King
This mob can damage you, while making you teleport into a random direction, getting "lost." He will also rapidly throws his unlimited source of lost gold, to beat you up This is a level 37. Armor: Leather Pants, Golden Boots, Diamond Chestplate and Helmet.
Circle Center Type: Iron Blocks

Lore: This place has been said where the evilest sinners have come to live, being tortured and brutalized. They have been forced to live riding a minecart for eternity. They would have if demons hadn't slit their throats and paralyzed them to a new soul, creating portals with his powers as an opening to the sinners' new souls. Sinners still arrive here, spawning as one of the 9 demons, they're type depending on their actions as a human being, now a threat to humankind, so dangerous even the boldest, and strongest adventurer's spirit led them astray as they tried to camp here.
Adding more tomorrow.

 

what would really be the point of adding a new area like this? the continent of wynn already has a vast and varied environment and there's certainly enough content around level 25. not to mention, this would be impossible to fit anywhere, as time valley is surrounded on all sides if you count fruma which we assume is going to be in the black area behind it (although you could just argue the ct could take space away from fruma for this, although I definitely wouldn't like that). this also feels very overly specific and kind of silly and out of place to go near time valley of all places, why is there just a ton of circles with netherrack and railroads? it doesn't fit anything in the lore I don't believe; this feels like something that would go in the silent expanse maybe, but that area is already developed enough as well.
basically, I just ask you provide more insight to how this would fit, and what about the existing game would call for its creation.

 

I think he might only be around Lv. 20, and so is making suggestions for that level. He's doing alright thinking them out, but there's so much more to discover.

 

the level range of his suggestion is irrelevant, my main point is that it wouldn't fit well within the current game, no matter where it is or what level it is. suggestions are ultimately to propose changes or ideas to the game, so they all should follow the same standards: being a good improvement or addition to the game, regardless of the posters experience.

 

Yeah, a lot of my first suggestions were "hey I think this would be cool" and I quickly learned that was not the way to do things. He'll figure it out as long as we're not toxic about it.

 

The place just sounds... ugly, also, it sounds an awful lot like Corruption, and considering the Roots of Corruption are lvl 25, don't really see the point of this

 

I like the idea of a railroad actually! I don't think we have one of those at the moment, although I may be mistaken. Maybe at a higher level this could work in a place where there isn't much, or maybe just make a new area idk. The circles connected by the railway though just sound a bit...well odd, I'm not sure what's with the circles lol but it's not a bad suggestion and it's very good for a first try!

Some areas are meant to be ugly, roots of corruption isn't meant to look nice lol, although I like its design. I'm trying to picture his suggestion in my head and I'm coming up with a lava type area with just a load of hills connected by traintrack, I do like the idea of an abondoned railway, as that's new.

Yeah, this is fair

 

I figured this can be it's own island, and in case you're wondering why there's circles with netherrack, I got this from the Nine Circles of Hell, (The post above was made before I made the edit on how I got inspired) but I didn't want to be too religious, so I decided to add more circles to it. And asking the point in this would be like asking what's the point in Pigmen Ravines or something like that, but I guess it's just a place to grind?

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I recently explained above, that this was supposed to be for the Nine Circles inspiration, I edited my idea so you can see where the inspiration was from

 

The Roots of Corruption and the Silent Expanse are NOT ugly. They're evil and disturbing, but they're not ugly.

 

I agree with that! But beforehand you compared them as "like" see:
"ugly, also, it sounds an awful lot like Corruption"
And don't say something like "oh, but I said like" as we all know when someone says something is like something else they are talking about it as a simile. But I do agree that Roots of Corruption is not ugly! Silent expanse is (just my opinion) but they're both good builds

 

Island? As in the ocean? As someone said before, the Roots of Corruption are already a lvl. 25 area that’s corrupted, and you can grind mobs there. What would be the lore of this place? It sounds just like more corruption, which wouldn’t be very unique. The pigmen’s ravines connect Ragni to Troms and they are where the creepers take sanctuary, so they have more of a point than this.

 

I compared it to Corruption because OP mentioned Netherrack and lava, usually signs of Corruption

 

Ah I see, fair enough then

 

I gotta thank you for saying this, I changed it up a bit now so it doesn't look like Corruption, and some more important updates are coming.

 

Is lore one of those updates?

Also, if this is in the ocean, where would this fit? And if the circles are each 15-23 blocks, that would take up a lot of unnecessary room for a mostly pointless area.

 

What would be the lore of Wynncraft? Or are you talking about what would be the description of this place? I was thinking about it for a few days, couldn't find much time to add it tho (Edit: The size of the circles have been made smaller).

 

I mean, how was it created? It’s very random. Why are there railroads? How were these circles created? And you mentioned houses, do people live here?

 

I added most of what's said in the lore but the railroads is just to show how a long time ago, the evilest sinners were forced to ride railroads for eternity until a demon gave them a new soul, serving as mobs there. The circles were created by the same demon i mentioned before on this post, by a portal not enterable by humans, and I didn't mention the houses in the lore, they are abandoned, only having skeletons of daring explorers who tried to make houses, but perished.

 

...wynn lore =/= earth lore...

 

And where would this island be?